Space blading

Poll: Do you like this story?

Yes
25.00%
1
Its ok
50.00%
2
NO!(EXPLAIN WHY)
0%
0
IT'S STUPID!!!!
25.00%
1
Total: 100% 4 vote(s)
Prologue:
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
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You shouldn't post a topic for a story if you don't even have one, yet.
I have the story.Just needed help
Adding to what Leone19 said, Next time ask in the questions about the WBO thread. Also it's not very polite to post in all caps, it's like your screaming Wink
Ok no caps.@DKno hard feelings,right?Stupid
@Prologue: You need to work on your spacing.
Ok.Where specifically?
Between the 1 and Let also the words after commas, apostrophes, periods etc. need to be spaced out so they aren't touching the marks.
(Mar. 31, 2014  9:45 PM)DRAGON KING Wrote: Between the 1 and Let also the words after commas, apostrophes, periods etc. need to be spaced out so they aren't touching the marks.

I edited.
It's not fixed.
@DKcheck now

Chapter 1 is up!Tell me your comments.
Nope. It's the same in chapter 1 also.
When writing/typing using proper grammar there is (space bar) after EVERY period, comma, exclamation mark, question mark and any other form of punctuation.

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/spacing.asp
Ok working on itXD
Chapter 2 is up.
Tell me your comments.
I'll do chapter 3 tomorrow.