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Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

Prologue:
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:



RE: Space blading - Leone19 - Mar. 31, 2014

For spoilers, you can simply highlight the text and click on the "Spoil!" above the text box before posting.

You shouldn't post a topic for a story if you don't even have one, yet.


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

I have the story.Just needed help


RE: Space blading - DRAGON KING - Mar. 31, 2014

Adding to what Leone19 said, Next time ask in the questions about the WBO thread. Also it's not very polite to post in all caps, it's like your screaming Wink


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

Ok no caps.@DKno hard feelings,right?Stupid


RE: Space blading - DRAGON KING - Mar. 31, 2014

@Prologue: You need to work on your spacing.


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

Ok.Where specifically?


RE: Space blading - DRAGON KING - Mar. 31, 2014

Between the 1 and Let also the words after commas, apostrophes, periods etc. need to be spaced out so they aren't touching the marks.


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

(Mar. 31, 2014  9:45 PM)DRAGON KING Wrote: Between the 1 and Let also the words after commas, apostrophes, periods etc. need to be spaced out so they aren't touching the marks.

I edited.


RE: Space blading - DRAGON KING - Mar. 31, 2014

It's not fixed.


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

@DKcheck now

Chapter 1 is up!Tell me your comments.


RE: Space blading - DRAGON KING - Mar. 31, 2014

Nope. It's the same in chapter 1 also.


RE: Space blading - The Bishop - Mar. 31, 2014

When writing/typing using proper grammar there is (space bar) after EVERY period, comma, exclamation mark, question mark and any other form of punctuation.

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/spacing.asp


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

Ok working on itXD


RE: Space blading - Elite Projects - Apr. 01, 2014

Chapter 2 is up.
Tell me your comments.
I'll do chapter 3 tomorrow.