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Prince Arthur: Tornado Excalibur ( a beyblade story). (Accepting Character Requests)

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Mar. 25, 2011  11:42 AM
 
I'm gonna write another story(see a spirited fighter) and these are the bios.

NameTongue_outrince Arthur
Bey: Tornado Excalibur W105 F
Personality: Proud of his power and a kind and reliable prince. His best friend is Merlin, a wizard and round the same age as himself.
Special move: Blade Slash (Smashes the opponent with the blades of Wind105)

And

Name: Merlin
Bey: Earth Libra 90 EWD
Personality: Friendly and a bit of a joker. His best friend is Arthur and accompanies him on his travels.
Special move: Earth Shield (Vibrations through the ground creates a rock wall in front of Libra)

For character requests you must use an English name. The bey cannot have Cyber or anything that sounds past its time.
Mar. 25, 2011  2:51 PM
 
"Merlin, Merlin!!" Arthur said. "Can you get my beyblade?" "Of course lord," Merlin said. "Just call me Arthur, Prince Arthur."

Chapter 1: The beyblade from the lake.

Merlin brought down his beyblade, Storm Aquario 105 F. "Dad wants me to search for something by a lake, he says its important," Arthur said. His dad, Uthur, was the king, he had Screw Aries 105 RF. "Should I bring my Earth Libra 90 EWD?" asked Merlin. "Yes, bandits could attack us," Arthur said.

They walked through the forest. The forest was lush with lots of green. It was late July. "There is someone here," Merlin said. Just as he said that a beyblade was launched in front of Arthur. A bandit walked out from behind the tree. "I challenge you to a beyblade battle!" he said. It was Vulcan Saggitario 125 S. "Ok I accept," Arthur said. "But if I win, I get your bey," the bandit said.

"Three, Two, One, Let It Riiip!" they both said. Aquario started to attack Saggitario. Saggitario was taking loads of damage. "Saggitario push back!" the bandit said. And so it did. The two didn't move and stayed in the same place. Suddenly Saggitario pulled back. The bandit threw a rock. "If I cant beat it, I'll break it!" the bandit said. "Go Libra, special move, Earth shield!" Merlin said. Libra appeared in front of the rock and an earth wall rose up. The rock was blocked and the wall cascaded down on Saggitario. Saggitario stopped and the bandit ran away. "Lets keep moving," Arthur said.
Mar. 28, 2011  2:01 PM
 
When they approached the lake the water was still. "Hmm, there dosn't seem to be anything of intrest here, lets go back," Arthur said. He turned around and Merlin lay on the ground, dead or unconscious.

Chapter 2: The beyblade from the lake. Part 2.

"Merlin!" Arthur shouted. He ran to Merlin but was stopped in his tracks. He looked to his side and a woman stood there. "My name is Morgana and this is my bey, Lightning L-Drago 100 HF, I challenge you, Arthur Pendragon, to a beyblade battle," she said. "But what about Merlin?" Arthur said. "Your friend, Merlin Hagane, will be fine," Morgana said. "Fine we will battle," Arthur said.

"Three, two, one, Let it riiiiiip!" They said. "Special move, Dragon Emporer Soaring Bite Strike!" Morgana said. There was a huge explosion. "AAAAAAH!" Arthur said. He looked behind him. His beyblade was soot black and wrecked in the lake. "Ugh," Arthur solemnly said. "Mwahaha!" Morgana shouted. Suddenly a beyblade flew out of the lake. It smashed Lightning L-Drago. "Agh!" Morgana screamed. She picked up her beyblade and ran away. Arthur picked up the beyblade and looked at it. "...Tornado Excalibur W105 F..." Merlin said. "Excalibur?" Arthur said. "Yes, it only arises when the chosen one is here," Merlin said. "The chosen one... yes...I like it...THE CHOSEN ONE!!!!!!!" Arthur shouted, echoeing throughout the forest...
Mar. 28, 2011  5:09 PM
 
is this midevil related
Mar. 28, 2011  5:50 PM
 
Yes,yes it is.
Mar. 28, 2011  6:02 PM
 
as always,korinzu knows how to make awesome stories!
Mar. 30, 2011  2:52 PM
 
Thank you BigBangPegasis9!DJ 2002
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"How about we have a battle Merlin?" Arthur asked. "Well, my Earth Libra has been itching to have a proper fight," Merlin said, "but we need to get back to the castle." So they went back to the castle.

Chapter 3: The trainee.

"Dad, I found this beyblade at the lake, it is Tornado Excalibur W105 F," Arthur said. "That beyblade belongs to the chosen one, amazing, my Arthur, only 17 years old, is the chosen one. I'm so proud," Uthur said. Someone walked in. "Oh yes Arthur, this is Alex, you will train him to beyblade," Uthur said. Alex was a 12 year-old boy with neck-length brown hair. He wore a blue top and a black belt was tied around it. He had black trousers and a blue launcher grip. "Hello," he said and bowed before him. "No need to bow, anyway, lets see your beyblade," Arthur said. He held it up. Crystal Lacerta CH120 FS. (Crystal is like Hyper except with Flame's spikes in between.) "Wow, i've never seen this before," Arthur said. "He's Irish and very intelligent," Uthur said. "Ireland hey," Arthur said. "Yeah, I was the best blader of all my friends, but I moved here to England," Alex said. "Ok lets start," Arthur said.

One of the guards was standing by a stadium. "Ok, you have to beat him, he's one of our best," Arthur said. "Fine, lets do this," Alex said.

"Three, two, one, let it riiip!" they both said. Crystal smashed the guard's beyblade and it flew out of the stadium. "What!?" Arthur and the guard shouted. "He's really good, amazing in fact," Arthur thought to himself. "Sorry I have some business to attend to," Arthur said. He walked into the castle and talked to Uthur. "Dad I had 2 wins today," Arthur said. "Good, I'll put them up on the board," Uthur said. On the outside of the castle a giant wooden panel stood. Someone changed it. Arthur had 99 wins in total since the start of the month. "Thats Alex's, let me see how many wins he has," Arthur said. 107. "What!? He has more wins than me!" Arthur shouted.

He ran back to where Alex was. But Alex wasn't there. "Morgana kidnapped him... she is taking him to her castle..." one of the guards said slowly. The guards lay on the ground collapsed. "No I have to save him!" Arthur said. "Merlin, lets go." Merlin was tending to the wounded. "Ok, lets infiltrate the castle!" Merlin said.
Apr. 08, 2011  5:07 PM
 
can you use my characters, u know, Team Inzori
Apr. 11, 2011  5:13 PM
 
Sorry I was sick last week. I will not be able to post this week either because the computer room in the school is closed but I managed to get this. Sorry for any inconvinience.
~ Korinzu
Apr. 18, 2011  8:24 PM
 
I dont know if I should continue this story. All readers say "Korinzu" as your next post if you want me to go on. I will make my discision (dunno how to spell that) then.
Apr. 19, 2011  6:06 AM
 
i like your story,korinzu,so why the hell not continue the story??
Apr. 19, 2011  8:14 AM
 
What in the world?! If anyone watches P&F, this is a reference to that. A person gets awesomely famous for his work, and he discontinues?! Are you joking? DO NOT DISCONTINUE PLEASE! Also, can you take my character? Harry is his name. Main character in my story. If you would like a character, I'll give you the link to my story.
Apr. 22, 2011  1:08 PM
 
WOW. That is really good to know. I will continue once I find the time. I need time to work on both my stories. Also, I'd like to hear what people think of each chapter, just so I know you're there Smile
Apr. 22, 2011  1:32 PM
 
it's ok when somebody talks do this----->"Merlin!!!"Alex said.
Apr. 22, 2011  1:36 PM
 
(Apr. 22, 2011  1:32 PM)C-Dub Wrote: it's ok when somebody talks do this----->"Merlin!!!"Alex said.

ok,let me try a reference to korinzu

''KORINZU!!!''BBP9 said.
Apr. 22, 2011  2:20 PM
 
(Apr. 22, 2011  1:36 PM)bigbangpegasis9 Wrote:
(Apr. 22, 2011  1:32 PM)C-Dub Wrote: it's ok when somebody talks do this----->"Merlin!!!"Alex said.

ok,let me try a reference to korinzu

''KORINZU!!!''BBP9 said.

yeah that's perfection!!!
Apr. 29, 2011  4:32 AM
 
Name: Sengai Hatigo
Bey: Tail Lione 130 W4D
Appearance: Long brown hair that goes down and stops at the end of his neck, Green vest, white shirt, Black jeans, white shoes
Personality: Like Kyoya's but a bit more friendly. Rival of Prince Arthur (Its like the rivalry of Jinga and Kyoya)
Special move: Wild Tail Smash
Side: Good

For the Wild Tail Smash Lione goes under the bey to hit him in the air then he jumps over his opponent who is still in the air and his spin track and performance tip work together to form a tornado on the tip of the tip and Lione hits his opponent with the tornado.

W4D is like W2D but moves more like an attack type and has a tinny bit less stamina than W2D but still has enough to beat an attack type in a stamina battle.

He is a left spin bey so Tail Lione and Kyoya's Fang Leone are a awesome team.
Sengai's Tail Lione and Kyoya's Fang Leone in a team are unstoppable.
Apr. 30, 2011  3:37 PM
 
Kyoya is not in this but the character is accepted apart from the name, it needs to be in English (sorry). Team Inzori may be accepted. I want that link Janstarblast. Also, someone needs the job of making sure I dont accept too many characters. My last story has an overload of them...
Apr. 30, 2011  5:10 PM
 
yes, i hope Team Inzori comes in!
Apr. 30, 2011  6:21 PM
 
@Dracovianauis~ Could you just change the name of them.
May. 01, 2011  12:58 AM
 
What about this one
Name:Andrew Reginald A.K.A The Golden Paladin
Bey:Hell Sagittario BD145SD(Balance, Right Spin)
Attitude:Very Brave and Good Natured
Special Moves :Noble Archer Bow:Friece Rip(Standard strong strike)
Special Move: Noble Archer Bow:Tornado Arrow Fortress(Standard Defense Sheild to become immovable)
oh and he's British
May. 01, 2011  7:58 AM
 
sure, Izuma- Shadow
Sonai- Amy
Hatachi- Blake
Rioge- Inferno
Inzori- Hawk
May. 03, 2011  5:09 PM
 
Both accepted!
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"Where is the castle?" Arthur said. "Just follow me," Merlin said. There was a silence. "Are we there yet?" Ill finish this later
May. 03, 2011  11:48 PM
 
Ok thank you
Oct. 24, 2011  10:06 AM
 
what about:

name: Yahiko
beyblade: Death reaper 100 hf or earth eagle 146 wd
facebolt: has a pic of a grimreaper holding a scythe
appearence: has short hair like adult gohan, he wears blue jeans and a gray tshirt which has a skull on it (not emo) red shoes and has a belt on him which contains pockets holding his black grip and blue string launcher also his bey.
personality: despite appearence he is very kind and can get quite inquisitive he never turns down a battle but can get cocky and full of himself.
special: for death reaper the move is dark impact where the bey spins around the staium really fast creating a tornado from the friction on the hf around the opposing bey then it smashes the beyblade up into the air a pattern of a david star appeared on the floor letting out a big green beam killing the bey. if it is eagle it soars in the sky attacking their beyblade from above none stop.
extra info: he is a main character he is good and doesnt lose much but later on in the story he turns evil
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