New Story:The Biggest Dreamer,(Prolouge)

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Do you ever get that?
That sinking feeling, like the world around you, seems ... wasted?
I always wanted to be the best blader, and I very well maybe, but nows not the time for that, if im going to stop the worlds end at the hands of my own brother, I'll need help...

Prologue: The Bladers Spirit

"The mountain seemed so small back in the village."
"I knew I should of packed more energy bars!"

These whines you here are of my own, thats me Oliver Bridesun, I had dreams of meeting the worlds best blader, but it seems pretty dismal now I wonder if i'll even make it now? but its not fun to worry.

"the peak! I can see it!" Oliver cried.

Pulling myself up I see the man I hoped to await me with my bey EarthWolflyED145CS I can take on anyone...
I converse with the mysterious man I say but 3 words but I can bet they leave an impact.

"Hello... Gingka Hagane"

My first story attempt how do you like it? i'll create the series if it gets good feedback Smile
good story i hope to see more. ppls pm me when you release a chapter