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New Story:The Biggest Dreamer,(Prolouge) - OnePiece - Jul. 19, 2011
Do you ever get that?
That sinking feeling, like the world around you, seems ... wasted?
I always wanted to be the best blader, and I very well maybe, but nows not the time for that, if im going to stop the worlds end at the hands of my own brother, I'll need help...
Prologue: The Bladers Spirit
"The mountain seemed so small back in the village."
"I knew I should of packed more energy bars!"
These whines you here are of my own, thats me Oliver Bridesun, I had dreams of meeting the worlds best blader, but it seems pretty dismal now I wonder if i'll even make it now? but its not fun to worry.
"the peak! I can see it!" Oliver cried.
Pulling myself up I see the man I hoped to await me with my bey EarthWolflyED145CS I can take on anyone...
I converse with the mysterious man I say but 3 words but I can bet they leave an impact.
"Hello... Gingka Hagane"
My first story attempt how do you like it? i'll create the series if it gets good feedback
RE: New Story:The Biggest Dreamer,(Prolouge) - sonicsora123 - Jul. 19, 2011
good story i hope to see more. ppls pm me when you release a chapter