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My series Beyblade : Metal Storm

Jul. 08, 2012  9:05 AM
 
this series is based on beyblade metal fusion or MFB but in a diffrent way

The main protagonist is Renado Sama Ryuga's Son hes finding the truth of hes father's dissapearance and dreams of being the no1 blader and also destroying the dark beyblade Demonic Belzebrute DF105LF, his beyblade is Hydra Cullosus FConfused.

The deuteragonist is Takeru he is last leader of Dark Nebula and owns Demonic Belzebrute DF105LF
he wants Renado's power for his own evil stuff.

Marvy Molina is Renado's BFF and future president of WBBA hes goal is to disband the Dark Nebula for what they did to his father Mark Molina.

Lightning is Renado's GF her goal is to defeat the dark nebula for stealing her friend's souls.

Rikuo Sama is Renado's brother hes goal is also Renado's goal hes beyblade is Spiral SAS ED145GF
he specializes in archery and assassination.

The Dragon Knight is Ryuga's Alias coz he wanted to protected his children his beyblade is Ldrago Destroy FConfused.
Jul. 09, 2012  3:40 AM
 
I like this but.... If this is a story write it please. Are you just going to give the main idea and the characters?
Jul. 20, 2012  10:58 AM
 
Hey Death bro how you get sig its very nice and awesome :3 and i this is a manga.
Jul. 20, 2012  10:59 AM
 
You can request for a signature in various signature shops located in this section.
Jul. 22, 2012  3:35 AM
 
I got chapters from 1-6

First Chapter:Beginning
Second Chapter:Memory
Third Chapter:Showdown
Fourth Chapter:Blader's Spirit
Fifth Chapter:Ascension
Sixth Chapter (BONUS):Shadow Pegasus

Also new characterS!!!!

Terry Cabballero
Beyblade:Berserker Pheonix WA130CF
Type:Attack
Beast:Pheonix
Special Moves:Burning Vortex, and Burning FireStrike
Terry is Renado's childhood friend and rival Terry was one of Belzebrute's victims and ended up dead because of soul stealing.

Robin Caballero
Beyblade:Cosmic Angelo A:D
Type:Attack
Beast:Angel
Special moves:Cosmic Avalance, and Asteroid Shower
Robin is Renado's bestfriend since childhood and terry's older brother his bey was once Galaxy Angelo W125MF
but evolved when a fragment of a star hit his bey.

Cyclops
Beyblade:Devil Gargoyle SA145D
Type:Unknown/or Balance
Special move:Stone Crusher
Cyclops was a robot created by the Dark Nebula his mission is to capture Renado and his friends but defeated by Renado, Kazuya caused Cyclops to self destruct which killed Kazuya

Kazuya Walker
Beyblade:Balance Gryph M145Q
Type:Balance
special move:Balance booster
Kazuya was the person who created cyclops, defeated cyclops unlike Renado, Cyclops self destruct.

Sora Izanagi
Beyblade:Cyber Pegasus RD145XF
Type:Attack
special move:Metal Avalance
found in chapter 6, Sora's Power is equal to Renado's but unfortunately they ended up in a draw.

thats all

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Jul. 22, 2012  3:57 AM
 
Cool characters, can't wait for the story! And is some of those beasts like Angelo a fan-made beast?
Jul. 22, 2012  4:28 AM
 
Kai, Angelo is based from St. Michael the angel who defeated Satan/Lucifer, and Robin Caballero is my bestfriend, and Renado is Japanese for Lenard my first name.
Chapter 1:The beginning

"two kids running'
Kid:The match is starting!!!!
kid:Im coming!!!!!!!
Renado: "smile"
Marvy:Go! Diving Blast!
*special move hits opponent's beyblade, causes a stadium out!"
Blader: No way!
Blader DJ: The winner is Marvy Molina!!!!!
*Marvy's beypoints changed to 11,069 points*
Marvy:Booya!
*Crowd cheers for Marvy*
Marvy :thank you guys!!!!!!!
4:30 pm at terminal
*Marvy walks*
Marvy:*thanks his beyblade Nova Aquilla*
Marvy: THank you Aquilla
Marvy: *Accidently hits a gang of thugs*
Thug:well, well, well you must be Marvy Molina one of Japan's Best bladers am i right?
Marvy:Um yah.
Thug: Well we are gonna need your points!
Thugs:Let it Rip!!!!!!
Marvy:Let it Rip!!!!!!
Marvy: What!?! you cant steal my points!!!!!!
Renado: Enough!!!
*Hydra hits all beyblades that are being launched!
Thug: Who are you?
Renado: Names Renado Sama
Renado: and dont mess with us!!!
Robin: Yeah! dont mess with him
Terry: yah Renado is right!!!
Robin and Terry: Let it Rip!!!!!!!!!
Renado,Robin and Terry:Join Special move! Triple Fang Fury!!!!!
*special move hits all beyblades causing crash outs!*
Renado, Robin and Terry: Look at our Beypoints!
Renado's Beypoints:60,000
Robin's Beypoints:50,667
Terry's beypoints:40,112
Thugs: OVER 3O,OOO THOUSAND POINTS!!!!?!?!?!?!??!?!
Thugs:I never seen such many points!
Thug: You will pay for this!
Marvy:WOW!!!!!!
Renado: They wont mess with you anymore
Robin:Renado is right!
Terry:And your kinda cute! *kisses Marvy on cheek*
Marvy:aaaaaaaahhhhhhh.*faints*
Renado:What have you done Terry!!!!
Robin:hahahahahhahahah!!!!!!
TerryConfusedorry.

At Warehouse/ base 5:00 pm

Takeru:I shall have your power Renado!!
*Muahahahahahahha*

To be Continued

Tip:Terry is a girl!
Aug. 04, 2012  10:26 AM
 
Chapter 2:Memory

Renado: *whistle*
Blader: ahhhhhhhhhhh
Renado: what?
Takeru:Long time no see Renado
Renado: Takeru!!!!!!
the gang walks
Terry:what was that?
Robin:I think there is a problem
Marvy:what are you waiting for
*marvy accidentally hits a guy*
Rikuo:hey why you hit me?
Marvy:me? hit you?
Rikuo:yah!
Marvy:no you hit me!!
Rikuo:no you!
Marvy:no you!!!
*Rikuo and Marvy are fighting*
Terry and Robin:*hush*
Renado and Takeru:LET IT RIP!!!!
*Beelzebrute and Hydra clash!*
*Beelzebrute counter-attacks!*
*Hydra counters back!*
Rikuo:Brother?
*Rikuo starts running*
Marvy:hey! get back here!
Terry:hes got a problem!
Marvy:what his problem! he was the guy who hit me!
*Robin starts running*
Terry:hey wait up!
Takeru:Renado, your dad was a wimp
Renado:what did you say!
Takeru:did that hurt?!?!?!?! muahahahhaha
Renado: vjkalfbabaavc
Takeru:What?!?!?!
Renado:I said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Renado's demonic aura appears*
RenadoGrinONT MAKE FUN OF MY DAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RenadoGaspR YOU WILL GET IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Hydra's speed moves like a Ferrari or even a Bugati Veyron*
Takeru:hehehehehhe
Renado:WHAT!!!!!!
Takeru:im just absorbing your spin!!!!!!!!!!!!
Renado:WHAT??!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!
*Renado activates mode change*
*Hydra is now Absorb mode!!!!!*

To be continued.

Aug. 04, 2012  4:02 PM
 
Wait, this is suppose to be dialogue for a manga? Also, when is the manga, with the drawn pictures, going to come out?
Unless this is only and just for dialogue. If that was/is the case, Id rather change it into a story if I were you...
Aug. 06, 2012  5:55 AM
 
[Huge quote removed.]

So, it is a fan made spirit?
Aug. 11, 2012  12:31 AM
 
dude,im not used to post pictures *harsh*
Aug. 11, 2012  2:09 AM
 
What do you mean by
"I'm not used to post pictures"
?

Also, I recommend you put all the chapters in the OP with spoiler brackets.
Aug. 12, 2012  7:44 AM
 
im having headache, and besides i have to think on something.