In the beginning beyblades were created by pharohs and other kings who called upon constellations to come to their bey and help defend them and their kindoms/villages. Ever since then people have been using beys to battle and be their friends but other people used them to achieve diabolical goals. Zack Gates of Terre Haute Indiana wants to stop this evil and have a world where beys can battle without darkness. ( I know it is kinda cheesy but i bet if i started working on it, it might be pretty good.

Beys
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Zach Gates- screw vulpecula(fox) 100HF
Matt Miller- thermal saggiatarious(archer) WD145ES
Josh Gates- dark aries(ram) sw145SD
Marley Jasons- screw leo(lion) T125RSF

Again i know it is cheesy but i will work on it.

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so
tops were made by kings
people used em
some for good, others for bad
and two kids want to stop the bad

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How do I still have 17th most posts here...?

Yeah its just kinda random but if i work on it i will actually get a decent story.

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>if
so you posted a thread, still deciding whether or not you would actually contribute to your own creation
lol

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How do I still have 17th most posts here...?

Yu-Gi-Oh + Beyblade + Mary-Sue?

lolwut

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

When i say "if" i mean i may just make a whole different story or not at all. I am a n00b on here so dont go putting me down just because i felt like posting something.

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Well, 'because you felt like posting something' isn't a reason to post a new thread. If you're writing a story, then at least get one part done beforehand and stick with it.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Yu-Gi-Oh + Beyblade + Mary-Sue?

lolwut

My thoughts exactly.


Improve.

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