My Series: The Adventures Of Roan

(Mar. 08, 2019  10:28 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 08, 2019  4:48 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: When people like Geardini say things like this, I remember why I never tell anybody my plans or accept requests

He doesn’t know


And that's why I edited my comment.

Gimme da chapta
Ples
(Mar. 08, 2019  2:21 PM)Jack jackson Wrote:
(Mar. 08, 2019  12:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!


remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them
If you look at the first post there you will understand why
(Mar. 08, 2019  11:20 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 08, 2019  2:21 PM)Jack jackson Wrote: remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them
If you look at the first post there you will understand why
CHAPTAHHHH
(Mar. 08, 2019  11:26 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Mar. 08, 2019  11:20 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: If you look at the first post there you will understand why
CHAPTAHHHH

Okay fine!
MAHHHHH CHAPTAHHHH
Chapter 13: Evil Evolution!

(Mar. 09, 2019  2:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 13: Evil Evolution!


Yas! My chapper! Me happy! Need big more!
Actually, very exciting! What a Chaos! (Pun intended)  ^_^
Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!






I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!
(Mar. 09, 2019  10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!






I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Yes! Good chapter! More!
You should, maybe.
(Mar. 09, 2019  10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!






I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure
(Mar. 10, 2019  12:19 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Mar. 09, 2019  10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!






I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure
Thanks but is the story Critic ready?

(Mar. 10, 2019  12:19 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:
(Mar. 09, 2019  10:58 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!






I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure
Thanks but is the story Critic ready?
Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is Smile
(Mar. 19, 2019  10:49 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is Smile

I think you should stay with what you have.
(Mar. 19, 2019  10:49 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is Smile

By more professional do you mean longer? If so, yes
(Mar. 19, 2019  10:49 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is Smile

You can make it longer if you feel like you want a change of pace. No one is forcing you, though!! Just dont stress and make it 1k words; feel free to start adding twenty more words or a paragraph each time

If you are making them longer, please break them into paragraphs!
Can you edit the first post so they’re all there?
Cool storys.
Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!
(Mar. 21, 2019  11:09 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!

I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?
(Mar. 21, 2019  11:53 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2019  11:09 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!

I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?
Yeah I’ll do it today.

Chapter 15: District Tournament!

(Mar. 22, 2019  12:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2019  11:53 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?
Yeah I’ll do it today.

Chapter 15: District Tournament!


This is going to be a good battle!
(Mar. 22, 2019  12:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 21, 2019  11:53 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?
Yeah I’ll do it today.

Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.
(Mar. 22, 2019  12:50 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2019  12:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Yeah I’ll do it today.

Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.
That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks :)

Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!

(Mar. 22, 2019  8:23 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2019  12:50 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.
That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks Smile

Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!


Great chapter @[CheetoBlader] !
(Mar. 22, 2019  8:23 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2019  12:50 PM)Geardini1846 Wrote: Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.
That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks Smile

Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!


More! More! More!