When people like Geardini say things like this, I remember why I never tell anybody my plans or accept requests

He doesn’t know

And that's why I edited my comment.

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Gimme da chapta
Ples

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

Chapter 12: Turn Zombie!

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Roan got home and ate his dinner. After he finished he went to his older brother Zack and asked him to battle. “The stadium is too far.” Zack said. “Well what do you want me to do!? Bring the stadium here?” “Yep.” “Fine.” Roan rolled the stadium into the house. “You happy?” “Yep.” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack’s BEYBLADE Turn Zombie took the center wobbling because Zack had hand spun. “Revenge! Attack!” Revenge had knocked the armor off Zombie. “Keep attacking Revenge!” Revenge kept attacking but Zombie was gaining spin. “I hate that strategy!” Roan said. Revenge bounced on the armor making the armor get flinged into the air. “Go. Zombie. Rubber press.” Revenge hit Zombie but then the armor came down and hit Revenge too making Revenge burst. “Haha now get out of my room.” 


…To Be Continued

remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them

If you look at the first post there you will understand why

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remember the thread you post about us making characters for this are you going to use them

If you look at the first post there you will understand why

CHAPTAHHHH

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

If you look at the first post there you will understand why

CHAPTAHHHH

Okay fine!

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MAHHHHH CHAPTAHHHH

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

Chapter 13: Evil Evolution!

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Zack walked to the door because his friend Fax had just arrived. “Hi Zack!” “Hey.” “Do you wanna battle?” “Sure. Meet me in my room.” “Okay.” “ROAN! GO BRING IN THE STADIUM!” “I JUST BROUGHT IT OUTSIDE!” “I DON’T CARE!” “FINE.” 10 minutes later Roan had the stadium back in Zack’s room. “Ok good now get out Roan.” “What!? I should at least be able to be referee!” “Haha no. Now get out.” Roan narrowed his eyes at his brother and walked out. “I think my BEYBLADE can finally beat your Zombie!” “Your Deep Chaos 6 Vortex Hunter doesn’t stand a chance.” Zack and Fax battled for awhile then went to go play Super Smash Bros. Ultimate. 11 hours later they went to bed. In the middle of the night Fax’s BEYBLADE glowed then it started changing shape and a spirit appeared and went into Fax.


…To Be Continued

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Chapter 13: Evil Evolution!

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Zack walked to the door because his friend Fax had just arrived. “Hi Zack!” “Hey.” “Do you wanna battle?” “Sure. Meet me in my room.” “Okay.” “ROAN! GO BRING IN THE STADIUM!” “I JUST BROUGHT IT OUTSIDE!” “I DON’T CARE!” “FINE.” 10 minutes later Roan had the stadium back in Zack’s room. “Ok good now get out Roan.” “What!? I should at least be able to be referee!” “Haha no. Now get out.” Roan narrowed his eyes at his brother and walked out. “I think my BEYBLADE can finally beat your Zombie!” “Your Deep Chaos 6 Vortex Hunter doesn’t stand a chance.” Zack and Fax battled for awhile then went to go play Super Smash Bros. Ultimate. 11 hours later they went to bed. In the middle of the night Fax’s BEYBLADE glowed then it started changing shape and a spirit appeared and went into Fax.


…To Be Continued

Yas! My chapper! Me happy! Need big more!
Actually, very exciting! What a Chaos! (Pun intended)  ^_^

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Fax woke up at 8:00 AM and looked at his new BEYBLADE. “Whoa. I will call you Nox Chaos.” Nox Chaos started glowing then the spirit was right in front of Fax. “Battle Zack and beat him then you will be worthy of me.” “Okay Chaos.”  Chaos vanished. “ZACK! WAKE UP!” “It’s 8 in the morning.” “GET UP OR ELSE!” “Fine.” “Nox Chaos will beat you!” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack Launched his BEYBLADE this time. “Go Zombie! Eternal Spin!” Zombie glowed and started spinning faster. “Chaos! Nox Hammer!” Chaos hit Zombie knocking the armor off. “Zombie! Rubber Press!” The armor of Zombie came flying towards Zombie when Chaos came through. “Dodge it Chaos!” Chaos barely zoomed by and Zombie’s armor hit Zombie making Zombie lose 3 clicks. “Now Chaos! Chaos Flight!” The hammers on Chaos hit the stadium knocking it into the air then dived down hitting Zombie in between the rubber blades making Zombie burst. “Nani!?” “Hahaha! We are the ultimate team!” Fax left Roan’s house to go to


…To Be Continued

I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

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Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Fax woke up at 8:00 AM and looked at his new BEYBLADE. “Whoa. I will call you Nox Chaos.” Nox Chaos started glowing then the spirit was right in front of Fax. “Battle Zack and beat him then you will be worthy of me.” “Okay Chaos.”  Chaos vanished. “ZACK! WAKE UP!” “It’s 8 in the morning.” “GET UP OR ELSE!” “Fine.” “Nox Chaos will beat you!” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack Launched his BEYBLADE this time. “Go Zombie! Eternal Spin!” Zombie glowed and started spinning faster. “Chaos! Nox Hammer!” Chaos hit Zombie knocking the armor off. “Zombie! Rubber Press!” The armor of Zombie came flying towards Zombie when Chaos came through. “Dodge it Chaos!” Chaos barely zoomed by and Zombie’s armor hit Zombie making Zombie lose 3 clicks. “Now Chaos! Chaos Flight!” The hammers on Chaos hit the stadium knocking it into the air then dived down hitting Zombie in between the rubber blades making Zombie burst. “Nani!?” “Hahaha! We are the ultimate team!” Fax left Roan’s house to go to


…To Be Continued

I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Yes! Good chapter! More!
You should, maybe.

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Fax woke up at 8:00 AM and looked at his new BEYBLADE. “Whoa. I will call you Nox Chaos.” Nox Chaos started glowing then the spirit was right in front of Fax. “Battle Zack and beat him then you will be worthy of me.” “Okay Chaos.” Chaos vanished. “ZACK! WAKE UP!” “It’s 8 in the morning.” “GET UP OR ELSE!” “Fine.” “Nox Chaos will beat you!” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack Launched his BEYBLADE this time. “Go Zombie! Eternal Spin!” Zombie glowed and started spinning faster. “Chaos! Nox Hammer!” Chaos hit Zombie knocking the armor off. “Zombie! Rubber Press!” The armor of Zombie came flying towards Zombie when Chaos came through. “Dodge it Chaos!” Chaos barely zoomed by and Zombie’s armor hit Zombie making Zombie lose 3 clicks. “Now Chaos! Chaos Flight!” The hammers on Chaos hit the stadium knocking it into the air then dived down hitting Zombie in between the rubber blades making Zombie burst. “Nani!?” “Hahaha! We are the ultimate team!” Fax left Roan’s house to go to


…To Be Continued

I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure

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oh no i just woke up and two years have passed where am i what happened

Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Fax woke up at 8:00 AM and looked at his new BEYBLADE. “Whoa. I will call you Nox Chaos.” Nox Chaos started glowing then the spirit was right in front of Fax. “Battle Zack and beat him then you will be worthy of me.” “Okay Chaos.”  Chaos vanished. “ZACK! WAKE UP!” “It’s 8 in the morning.” “GET UP OR ELSE!” “Fine.” “Nox Chaos will beat you!” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack Launched his BEYBLADE this time. “Go Zombie! Eternal Spin!” Zombie glowed and started spinning faster. “Chaos! Nox Hammer!” Chaos hit Zombie knocking the armor off. “Zombie! Rubber Press!” The armor of Zombie came flying towards Zombie when Chaos came through. “Dodge it Chaos!” Chaos barely zoomed by and Zombie’s armor hit Zombie making Zombie lose 3 clicks. “Now Chaos! Chaos Flight!” The hammers on Chaos hit the stadium knocking it into the air then dived down hitting Zombie in between the rubber blades making Zombie burst. “Nani!?” “Hahaha! We are the ultimate team!” Fax left Roan’s house to go to


…To Be Continued

I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure

Thanks but is the story Critic ready?

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Chapter 14: Nox Chaos!

Spoiler (Click to View)

Fax woke up at 8:00 AM and looked at his new BEYBLADE. “Whoa. I will call you Nox Chaos.” Nox Chaos started glowing then the spirit was right in front of Fax. “Battle Zack and beat him then you will be worthy of me.” “Okay Chaos.”  Chaos vanished. “ZACK! WAKE UP!” “It’s 8 in the morning.” “GET UP OR ELSE!” “Fine.” “Nox Chaos will beat you!” 3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip! Zack Launched his BEYBLADE this time. “Go Zombie! Eternal Spin!” Zombie glowed and started spinning faster. “Chaos! Nox Hammer!” Chaos hit Zombie knocking the armor off. “Zombie! Rubber Press!” The armor of Zombie came flying towards Zombie when Chaos came through. “Dodge it Chaos!” Chaos barely zoomed by and Zombie’s armor hit Zombie making Zombie lose 3 clicks. “Now Chaos! Chaos Flight!” The hammers on Chaos hit the stadium knocking it into the air then dived down hitting Zombie in between the rubber blades making Zombie burst. “Nani!?” “Hahaha! We are the ultimate team!” Fax left Roan’s house to go to


…To Be Continued

I still need answers on if I should make the story interactive!

Sure

Thanks but is the story Critic ready?

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Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is

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Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is

I think you should stay with what you have.

Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is

By more professional do you mean longer? If so, yes

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oh no i just woke up and two years have passed where am i what happened

Should I make the writing more professional or stay with what I have? I don’t really care which one it is

You can make it longer if you feel like you want a change of pace. No one is forcing you, though!! Just dont stress and make it 1k words; feel free to start adding twenty more words or a paragraph each time

If you are making them longer, please break them into paragraphs!

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Call me either Sands/Suns! That one female Beyblade fan

Pfp: Cedric from Arcaea by Nataslyn on Discord

[Status: Lurking]

Can you edit the first post so they’re all there?

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oh no i just woke up and two years have passed where am i what happened

Cool storys.

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Check out this story I made.
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Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!

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Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!

I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?

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Updated the 1st post! All chapters are there!

I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?

Yeah I’ll do it today.

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Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Spoiler (Click to View)

his house.

“Well that was weird.” Zack said. Zack went to watch TV when a commercial came on.

“Attention Bladers! The District Tournaments will be held this Saturday and Sunday! 8 tournaments will be held on Saturday and Sunday! Each winner will go to the regionals!” The announcer said.

“Meh I guess I’ll go.” Zack said. Zack went to his room and decided on which time to go. “If I go to the first tournament at 11:00 am a bunch of excited noobs will be there, but that’s an hour before I wake up on Saturdays.

Zack decided when to go. “I’m going to crush the dreams of noobs!” Zack declared.

Roan and Colin were at the BeyPark when they heard the announcement.

“Let’s go at 1:00 pm on Saturday so we’ll have lunch before we go!” Colin said.

“Okay!” Roan replied.

Two days later the first tournament day arrived.

“Bye mom! I’m going to a BEYBLADE Tournament with Colin!” Roan called out.

“Okay! I’ll watch you on TV!” Roan’s mom replied.

While that was going on Zack had already won the tournament he was at.

Roan and Colin arrived at the 8 person tournament, and won the 1st and 2nd rounds because they were generic bladers.

“Now it’s time for the final round! Roan VS Colin!” The announcer called out.


…To Be Continued

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I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?

Yeah I’ll do it today.

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Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Spoiler (Click to View)

his house.

“Well that was weird.” Zack said. Zack went to watch TV when a commercial came on.

“Attention Bladers! The District Tournaments will be held this Saturday and Sunday! 8 tournaments will be held on Saturday and Sunday! Each winner will go to the regionals!” The announcer said.

“Meh I guess I’ll go.” Zack said. Zack went to his room and decided on which time to go. “If I go to the first tournament at 11:00 am a bunch of excited noobs will be there, but that’s an hour before I wake up on Saturdays.

Zack decided when to go. “I’m going to crush the dreams of noobs!” Zack declared.

Roan and Colin were at the BeyPark when they heard the announcement.

“Let’s go at 1:00 pm on Saturday so we’ll have lunch before we go!” Colin said.

“Okay!” Roan replied.

Two days later the first tournament day arrived.

“Bye mom! I’m going to a BEYBLADE Tournament with Colin!” Roan called out.

“Okay! I’ll watch you on TV!” Roan’s mom replied.

While that was going on Zack had already won the tournament he was at.

Roan and Colin arrived at the 8 person tournament, and won the 1st and 2nd rounds because they were generic bladers.

“Now it’s time for the final round! Roan VS Colin!” The announcer called out.


…To Be Continued

This is going to be a good battle!

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I think you should probably post a new one.




P L E A S E ?

Yeah I’ll do it today.

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Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Spoiler (Click to View)

his house.

“Well that was weird.” Zack said. Zack went to watch TV when a commercial came on.

“Attention Bladers! The District Tournaments will be held this Saturday and Sunday! 8 tournaments will be held on Saturday and Sunday! Each winner will go to the regionals!” The announcer said.

“Meh I guess I’ll go.” Zack said. Zack went to his room and decided on which time to go. “If I go to the first tournament at 11:00 am a bunch of excited noobs will be there, but that’s an hour before I wake up on Saturdays.

Zack decided when to go. “I’m going to crush the dreams of noobs!” Zack declared.

Roan and Colin were at the BeyPark when they heard the announcement.

“Let’s go at 1:00 pm on Saturday so we’ll have lunch before we go!” Colin said.

“Okay!” Roan replied.

Two days later the first tournament day arrived.

“Bye mom! I’m going to a BEYBLADE Tournament with Colin!” Roan called out.

“Okay! I’ll watch you on TV!” Roan’s mom replied.

While that was going on Zack had already won the tournament he was at.

Roan and Colin arrived at the 8 person tournament, and won the 1st and 2nd rounds because they were generic bladers.

“Now it’s time for the final round! Roan VS Colin!” The announcer called out.


…To Be Continued

Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya

Yeah I’ll do it today.

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Chapter 15: District Tournament!

Spoiler (Click to View)

his house.

“Well that was weird.” Zack said. Zack went to watch TV when a commercial came on.

“Attention Bladers! The District Tournaments will be held this Saturday and Sunday! 8 tournaments will be held on Saturday and Sunday! Each winner will go to the regionals!” The announcer said.

“Meh I guess I’ll go.” Zack said. Zack went to his room and decided on which time to go. “If I go to the first tournament at 11:00 am a bunch of excited noobs will be there, but that’s an hour before I wake up on Saturdays.

Zack decided when to go. “I’m going to crush the dreams of noobs!” Zack declared.

Roan and Colin were at the BeyPark when they heard the announcement.

“Let’s go at 1:00 pm on Saturday so we’ll have lunch before we go!” Colin said.

“Okay!” Roan replied.

Two days later the first tournament day arrived.

“Bye mom! I’m going to a BEYBLADE Tournament with Colin!” Roan called out.

“Okay! I’ll watch you on TV!” Roan’s mom replied.

While that was going on Zack had already won the tournament he was at.

Roan and Colin arrived at the 8 person tournament, and won the 1st and 2nd rounds because they were generic bladers.

“Now it’s time for the final round! Roan VS Colin!” The announcer called out.


…To Be Continued

Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.

That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks :)

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Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Sorry Roan but I’m going to the Regionals!” Colin said.

“No way! Me and Revenge will take you down!” Roan replied excitedly.

3!…2! Colin tilted his launcher down. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium creating a tornado pushing upwards.

“Ultimate Launch!” Colin cried out.

Revenge jumped over Crusher getting caught in the tornado. Revenge started getting swirled around on the tornado eventually flying out of the stadium.

“1 point to Ultimate Crusher for a ring out finish! Making the score 1-0!” The referee called out.

“Yeah! 1 more point to go!” Colin exclaimed.

“How!?” Roan said.

Revenge sparkled as if it was telling Roan something.

“I got it!” Roan whispered to Revenge.

“Knowing Roan he’ll change up his strategy to defeat that move, so I’ll use my other move.” Colin thought.

3!…2!…Roan kept an eye on Colin’s launcher waiting for it to tilt, it didn’t. “I going for plan B now.” Roan thought. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium preparing to attack, while Revenge was jumping at average height.

“Go! Ultimate Flurry!” Colin called out.

Crusher started attacking the center hitting Revenge on every single strike.

“Now Revenge! End it! Smash Counter!” Roan cried out.

“Counter it with Ultimate Slash!” Colin cried out.

Both BEYBLADES clashed sending blasts of wind and power everywhere.

“Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!” Roan and Colin screamed.

Then the blasts cleared up, and Revenge was flying out of the stadium.

“No!” Roan yelled.

Then just when Revenge was about to hit the ground Crusher bursted. Colin and Roan were in shock.

“2 points to Smash Revenge for a burst finish! Making the score 2-1! Roan has earned a spot in the Regionals!” The announcer called out.

“Yeah! I won!” Roan cheered.

Colin looked sad.

“Can I ask you a question?” Colin said.

“Sure.” Roan replied.

“Wanna keep battling?” Colin said hopefully.

“Yeah!” Roan said excitedly.

3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip!


…To Be Continued

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Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.

That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks

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Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Sorry Roan but I’m going to the Regionals!” Colin said.

“No way! Me and Revenge will take you down!” Roan replied excitedly.

3!…2! Colin tilted his launcher down. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium creating a tornado pushing upwards.

“Ultimate Launch!” Colin cried out.

Revenge jumped over Crusher getting caught in the tornado. Revenge started getting swirled around on the tornado eventually flying out of the stadium.

“1 point to Ultimate Crusher for a ring out finish! Making the score 1-0!” The referee called out.

“Yeah! 1 more point to go!” Colin exclaimed.

“How!?” Roan said.

Revenge sparkled as if it was telling Roan something.

“I got it!” Roan whispered to Revenge.

“Knowing Roan he’ll change up his strategy to defeat that move, so I’ll use my other move.” Colin thought.

3!…2!…Roan kept an eye on Colin’s launcher waiting for it to tilt, it didn’t. “I going for plan B now.” Roan thought. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium preparing to attack, while Revenge was jumping at average height.

“Go! Ultimate Flurry!” Colin called out.

Crusher started attacking the center hitting Revenge on every single strike.

“Now Revenge! End it! Smash Counter!” Roan cried out.

“Counter it with Ultimate Slash!” Colin cried out.

Both BEYBLADES clashed sending blasts of wind and power everywhere.

“Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!” Roan and Colin screamed.

Then the blasts cleared up, and Revenge was flying out of the stadium.

“No!” Roan yelled.

Then just when Revenge was about to hit the ground Crusher bursted. Colin and Roan were in shock.

“2 points to Smash Revenge for a burst finish! Making the score 2-1! Roan has earned a spot in the Regionals!” The announcer called out.

“Yeah! I won!” Roan cheered.

Colin looked sad.

“Can I ask you a question?” Colin said.

“Sure.” Roan replied.

“Wanna keep battling?” Colin said hopefully.

“Yeah!” Roan said excitedly.

3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip!


…To Be Continued

Great chapter @[CheetoBlader] !

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Great! Excited for the battle! More! More! More!


Also, delete that his house sentence is the beginning, its strange.

That sentence is a continuation of the last chapter. But thanks

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Chapter 16: A Friend Showdown! Colin VS Roan!

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Sorry Roan but I’m going to the Regionals!” Colin said.

“No way! Me and Revenge will take you down!” Roan replied excitedly.

3!…2! Colin tilted his launcher down. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium creating a tornado pushing upwards.

“Ultimate Launch!” Colin cried out.

Revenge jumped over Crusher getting caught in the tornado. Revenge started getting swirled around on the tornado eventually flying out of the stadium.

“1 point to Ultimate Crusher for a ring out finish! Making the score 1-0!” The referee called out.

“Yeah! 1 more point to go!” Colin exclaimed.

“How!?” Roan said.

Revenge sparkled as if it was telling Roan something.

“I got it!” Roan whispered to Revenge.

“Knowing Roan he’ll change up his strategy to defeat that move, so I’ll use my other move.” Colin thought.

3!…2!…Roan kept an eye on Colin’s launcher waiting for it to tilt, it didn’t. “I going for plan B now.” Roan thought. 1!…Let It Rip!

Crusher zoomed around the stadium preparing to attack, while Revenge was jumping at average height.

“Go! Ultimate Flurry!” Colin called out.

Crusher started attacking the center hitting Revenge on every single strike.

“Now Revenge! End it! Smash Counter!” Roan cried out.

“Counter it with Ultimate Slash!” Colin cried out.

Both BEYBLADES clashed sending blasts of wind and power everywhere.

“Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!” Roan and Colin screamed.

Then the blasts cleared up, and Revenge was flying out of the stadium.

“No!” Roan yelled.

Then just when Revenge was about to hit the ground Crusher bursted. Colin and Roan were in shock.

“2 points to Smash Revenge for a burst finish! Making the score 2-1! Roan has earned a spot in the Regionals!” The announcer called out.

“Yeah! I won!” Roan cheered.

Colin looked sad.

“Can I ask you a question?” Colin said.

“Sure.” Roan replied.

“Wanna keep battling?” Colin said hopefully.

“Yeah!” Roan said excitedly.

3!…2!…1!…Let It Rip!


…To Be Continued

More! More! More!

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"Wizard Blow!" - Fumiya