My Dark Wolf draft

Face: Wolf
The face on this Beyblade depicts Lupus, one of the 88 constellations of space.

Clear Wheel: Wolf
Weight: 3 grams
The original release of Wolf is a dark brown transparent plastic wheel. The edges of the Clear Wheel consists of 4 wolf 'heads', one in each quarter of the clear wheel, representing the body form of Wolf, the symbol its design is influenced by.

Metal Wheel: Dark
Weight: 31.4 grams
Dark has twelve spikes facing the clockwise direction. These protrusions are closely packed together with minimal space between each, resulting in an overall round shape. This shape hinders the Metal Wheel in two ways, as its protrusions are not pronounced enough to provide sufficient Smash Attack, while the perimeter is interrupted too frequently for sufficient Stamina. Additionally, it is too light to provide any noteworthy defensive qualities.

Track: Down Force 145
Weight: 3 grams
DF145 has four upward facing wings protruding from the top of the Track, which aside from giving it extra weight are meant to push air downwards. While the effects of the wings themselves may be negligible, they likely do help stabilize the Beyblade they are being used on to some capacity. This capability makes it quite useful for Stamina customs, where staying balanced and retaining spin is of utmost importance. The wings can also help protect from low, 90 or 100-based Attackers, but to a much lesser extent than a part with similar defensive properties of C145.

Bottom: Flat Sharp
Weight: 0.6 grams
FS features a flat tip with a smaller, sharper tip in the centre. As a result, when launched at a straight angle, the Beyblade spins on this sharp tip, with very little movement. However, when tilted, either from the contact of an opposing Beyblade or from the launch, the Bottom moves in an offensive pattern. However, it suffers from the same problems as other Balance Bottoms, in that the two qualities are compromised, resulting in mediocre performance in both fields.

Other Versions:
Heat Wolf WD145SF - Random Booster Light Vol.1 Mad Cancer CH120FS (Bright Pink)
Clay Wolf 145FS - Random Booster Light Vol.1 Mad Cancer CH120FS (Turquoise)
Clay Wolf 105B - Random Booster Light Vol.2 Wind Aquario 100HF/S (Green)
Wind Wolf WD145WB - Random Booster Light Vol.2 Wind Aquario 100HF/S (Yellow)
Flame Wolf H145S - Random Booster Vol.3 Stardust Pegasis (Purple)
Rock Wolf H145B - Random Booster Vol.3 Stardust Pegasis (Light Yellow)
Wind Wolf H145S - Random Booster Light Vol.3 Clay Aries ED145B (Pink)

Overall
Dark Wolf DF145FS is comprised of predominantly outclassed parts, besides the DF145 Track, which can be obtained in many other Beyblade products. There is little to no reason to purchase this Beyblade, aside from collection purposes.

Comments/Suggestions?
(May. 17, 2010  8:54 AM)Sora Akatsuki Wrote: Overall
This Beyblade's only useful part is Down Force 145 and that can be obtained by buying Killer Gemios DF145FS, which is a much better Beyblade. There is little to no reason to buy this Beyblade.
Gemios is definitely not a much better Beyblade.
Would this be slightly better? (I am no experienced article writer):
Overall
Dark Wolf DF145FS is comprised of predominantly outclassed parts, besides the DF145 Track, which can be obtained in many other Beyblade products. There is little to no reason to purchase this Beyblade, aside from collection purposes.

(May. 17, 2010  8:54 AM)Sora Akatsuki Wrote: Clear Wheel: Wolf
Weight: 4 grams
The wolf clear wheel consists of 4 wolf heads, one in each quarter of the clear wheel. It is a transparent brown color.
Also, would this be slightly better?:
Clear Wheel: Wolf
Weight: 4 grams
The original release of Wolf is a dark brown transparent plastic wheel. The edges of the Clear Wheel consists of 4 wolf 'heads', one in each quarter of the clear wheel, representing the body form of Wolf, the symbol its design is influenced by.

But pretty good job overall, mainly because the Dark, DF145 and FS sections are from other articles. LOL
Thanks! Edited.
Well, I'm not sure if what I wrote was good enough for the Beywiki since I've never wrote any articles (or the sections in it) before... Confused
Actually, I think this is up to Beywiki standards. But, what happens next? Do we ask a moderator to make the page or something?
(May. 18, 2010  12:35 AM)Sora Akatsuki Wrote: Actually, I think this is up to Beywiki standards. But, what happens next? Do we ask a moderator to make the page or something?
Wait for Kei or somebody else to comment on it, and then you would add it.
This has been essentially completed for some time now, with Dark, DF145, and FS already complete from other articles. Feel free to add this right now. Smile

You can also add the Other Versions section, which ♥ has typed up:
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Worklist...#pid244055
Valentin has also taken some pictures of Dark Wolf before, but the link in the Beywiki Photos Thread doesn't seem to be working. PM him, and hopefully he can re-upload.
Dark Wolf article up!
http://wiki.worldbeyblade.org/index.php/...lf_DF145FS
(May. 19, 2010  6:55 AM)Sora Akatsuki Wrote: Dark Wolf article up!
http://wiki.worldbeyblade.org/index.php/...lf_DF145FS

Good job Sora Akatsuki! Wink
The article looks great. Thanks. Smile
This is such a minor quibble, but I find that the clear wheel description seems to run on and the amount of information put into the aforementioned description is to highly cluttered and convoluted... :p just teasing Smile
(May. 21, 2010  3:25 PM)The LVJ Wrote: This is such a minor quibble, but I find that the clear wheel description seems to run on and the amount of information put into the aforementioned description is to highly cluttered and convoluted... :p just teasing Smile

All Clear Wheel descriptions are convoluted. Wink