Hello, i am writing a manga of beyblade. I call it, Beyblade Deity Storm!!!!

It took me a while, but I have attached the scrip for my Manga's first chapter to this thread, yeah!!!!!!

My manga revolves around beyblades named after mythical gods, hint hint, Deity Storm.
The main character, Roland, has Lightning Zeus, he has to go up against an organization called, The Phantasma. There mission is to take over the world with evil god beys, there leader, Dr. Subakuro, carries Imperial Aries, and the blader chosen of the ultimate evil beyblade, Shadow Hades, is named Desparx.

here is my main character!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O9bvy8UzVBc

here is another guy from my manga!!!!!!!!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R9PZCk71uJg

I have developed my first title page for my manga. It is my avatar so you can look at it when ever. I will post a couple of images of beyblades that will be appearing in the manga!
Lightning zeus
Platinum anubis

The types of beyblades you will see in my manga are called the Combat steel System. i WILL HAVE MORE INFO ON THAT LATER.
Below is my first beyblade design for my manga.



Please leave comments and tell me what you think!!!!
PLEASE REPLY< I REALLY WANT FEEDBACK!!!!

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Stop posting things in any forum you feel like. You're spamming up the forums. Read the damn rules.

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Thanks to Kai-V for the avatar and signature!

You PMed me to read a summary?

Have you started this yet? Or made a thread in 'My Creations' yet?

EDIT: So... is this getting moved to 'My Creations'?

EDIT: Thanks again myyyystery mod.

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@firelord I'll take down your spaceship!

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Ha... I think it's a idea to post a topic once you get a page done...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O9bvy8UzVBc

Here is my main character, sorry bout the quality

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Hm..... I think it looks reasonably good! Nice character design , by the way ^^

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Chapter One is great! I'm glad to have seen a playwright too, instead of a story. Trying to make a story would have been a waste of time if the end result would be a Manga.

Can't wait for chapter two.

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Sig and Tatoo by Dranzer MS

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@firelord I'll take down your spaceship!

T_T

cool ! I love drawing manga , you are really good !!! upload poseidons caharacter if you have time ,k .(percy jackson rules !

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Thanks a million to Challenge! for the sig. !
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I have worked for at least 2 hours so far, and got nothing for chapter 2

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Very nice! Cant wait for chapter 2.

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Beyblade Manga cool but I actually don't read mangas ^^ but for those who are reading them cool !
CokeWitchCherry

I have some info about my manga, the poesidon character, is as we speak being designed, however, he isn't going to be what you expect.He is your kind of angry,(I hate my life and your life) character. so, if that offends any one, sorry...

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good but i yet to see an actual page from your manga! Great Story but i need a page! I don't mind helping you with the pages (graphics wise)

thts okay unless if theres a poseidon character im cool

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i wonder if there will be a hermes character

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Thanks a million to Challenge! for the sig. !
Wanna help me make an Evolutionary card game ? Wanna check my videos, website, blogs and more, then follow me at the following sites :

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https://sites.google.com/site/elementalgamecom/Downhome

http://www.facebook.com/pages/Elementals...8993176466
50 likes and you get our starter set, Trinity of Darkness free ! 1,000 likes, we release our game !

http://www.youtube.com/user/ElementalsTCG?feature=mhee
Here are upcoming tutorials and gameplay videos ! Subscribe !

http://elementalstcg.blogspot.com/2011/0...kness.html Check our blogs !

its a cool manga

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Thanks Kai-V for this carpin awesome sig!

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My WD is too worn to be used legally, so I'll just beat up the rest of my Earth Aquila and send it to Hasbro so I can get a new one for free.

For the third time....
Why did Takara Tomy nullify the multi-directional spin capability in the MFB's?

It is for a very simple reason. Think about the kids ...

Ive written a little something something for Kai-V, hah.

Roses are red,
Mods names are blue,
And so yours,
Unlike Fyuuors
Under this moonlit night
In Canada.

All a joke.

Because we all know that ghosts are purple ...

thts okay unless if theres a poseidon character im cool

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i wonder if there will be a hermes character

yeah...i got a hermes...i am still working on character designing...i am haveing trouble with it

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its a cool manga

thanks dude!

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i like your main character

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Thanks Kai-V for this carpin awesome sig!

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My WD is too worn to be used legally, so I'll just beat up the rest of my Earth Aquila and send it to Hasbro so I can get a new one for free.

For the third time....
Why did Takara Tomy nullify the multi-directional spin capability in the MFB's?

It is for a very simple reason. Think about the kids ...

Ive written a little something something for Kai-V, hah.

Roses are red,
Mods names are blue,
And so yours,
Unlike Fyuuors
Under this moonlit night
In Canada.

All a joke.

Because we all know that ghosts are purple ...

i like your main character

thanks!!!!

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hey dude this is awesome btw im almost done with your storm argo

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Nah, man. Just keep shouting Mercury Anubis at them.

... And add more content to your posts, you both.

why dont you add more content to your your life!
but seriosly, i dont dont have any more to put and its that simple.

hey dude this is awesome btw im almost done with your storm argo

hey..thanks a lot...i have worked hard on this manga...and i will have the script of chapters 2 3 and 4 up soon...i have been having major writers block latley

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