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Momohimi's Beyblade Fan Series - Beyblade: Smash BT Worldwide/ベイブレードスマッシュBTワールド（2014）

Dec. 12, 2014  7:45 PM
 
I saw how many people have made a Beyblade Fan Series with the coolest one (IMO) is Jinbee's "Beyblade Mecha Sentoki/Senshi" series which is what inspired me to make this series.

This thread is yet to be finished so it is still in constuction but requests are open so feel free to request a character and I'll try to find a spot for you.

[Image: 2im3qm1.png]

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Dec. 12, 2014  8:43 PM
 
I can't wait to see this series. Can I join if possible?
Dec. 12, 2014  9:05 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  8:43 PM)~Pharmist~ Wrote: I can't wait to see this series. Can I join if possible?

Same for me please Smile
Dec. 12, 2014  9:11 PM
 
I'm interested too! I'll make a beyblade and tell you about it later.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:16 PM
 
What is it with everybody having Japanese writing in the titles? It's kinda annoying... Anyways, I don't think we're allowed to post threads before we finish atleast a prologue.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:26 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  9:16 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: What is it with everybody having Japanese writing in the titles? It's kinda annoying... Anyways, I don't think we're allowed to post threads before we finish atleast a prologue.

Maybe it's more legit, it's way better than the cliche use of dragons as main character Beyblades.

Anyway, I and Holyphoenix5 have both started our threads without a prologue, but back then, my thread was mostly for mods, now it has episodes.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:29 PM
 
@~Pharmist~ and Hato-Bokkun - Of course you two can join in

@JinbeeTheShark - Don't make the Beyblades. I will be drawing them on Paint instead.

@BURGER KING - We want to add Japanese text for our titles to get the feeling it's KINDA like anime. Also, I have asked Tri and he did allow me.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:32 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  9:26 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote:
(Dec. 12, 2014  9:16 PM)BURGER KING Wrote: What is it with everybody having Japanese writing in the titles? It's kinda annoying... Anyways, I don't think we're allowed to post threads before we finish atleast a prologue.

Maybe it's more legit, it's way better than the cliche use of dragons as main character Beyblades.

Anyway, I and Holyphoenix5 have both started our threads without a prologue, but back then, my thread was mostly for mods, now it has episodes.
but I doubt most the authors actually speak Japanese and got it off a online translator, plus the story is in english so why not just make the title in all english...

Idk about Holyphoenix5's story, but I remember threads getting closed down because they didn't have a story yet. Not trying to mini-mod, just warning yah.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:37 PM
 
I will do Episode 1 but I don't want it to be a short rush job. I want to make it a little longer and better structured instead of something cliche or something that was typed in quickly.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:37 PM
 
Just translate the title or something.

I'm stunned mine survived when I had no prologue, mainly because mine started off showing a beyblade, would that count as good content? I need to know.
Dec. 12, 2014  9:40 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  9:37 PM)JinbeeTheShark Wrote: Just translate the title or something.

I'm stunned mine survived when I had no prologue, mainly because mine started off showing a beyblade, would that count as good content? I need to know.
yours was kinda a custom toyline that became a story, right? I guess that's why.

Momohimi said Tri let him do it, so I guess it's fine now...
Dec. 12, 2014  10:12 PM
 
Again, the title is illisible for me. Can you please use normal letters ?
Dec. 12, 2014  10:18 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  10:12 PM)|BeyBouncer| Wrote: Again, the title is illisible for me. Can you please use normal letters ?
Are you using a laptop

I can see just fine
Dec. 12, 2014  10:39 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  10:12 PM)|BeyBouncer| Wrote: Again, the title is illisible for me. Can you please use normal letters ?

Technically they are normal letters, if your Japanese haha...

Besides other people are using it too...
Dec. 12, 2014  10:41 PM
 
(Dec. 12, 2014  10:12 PM)|BeyBouncer| Wrote: Again, the title is illisible for me. Can you please use normal letters ?

Oh, so I get criticised for using Japanese letters BUT it's fine that everyone else does it? How does that even make sense?

Also, that Japanese title is supposed to be Beyblade Smash BT Worldwide in Jaoanese OBVIOUSLY. Yes, I did put the English title there too so there is no excuses.

Anyways, I will be posting the system layout soon.
Dec. 13, 2014  3:50 AM
 
Sorry for double-posting but I have the new system for my fan series.

[Image: 2im3qm1.png]

This is not what what the Beyblades (At least the wheel) nor what Elysion looks like, I REPEAT, THIS IS NOT THE DRAWING OF THE ACTUAL BEYBLADES OR ELYSION BUT TO SHOW WHAT THE LAYOUT IS LIKE. This system is like an RC Beyblade except customizable so it pretty much depends on skills other than just having useful parts.

The Face: It holds the PC and Metal Attackers together.
Metal and PC Attacker: They are of course used for attacking other Beyblades with contact. It can also determine your spin time, be used for defense etc. You get the idea. The Metal and PC Attacker can also flip to change modes where the PC is on top (Much like with Zero G with their Crystal Up Mode).
Support Ring: Can add attack, defense, endurance or variablity to your Beyblade. It can also protect Beyblade from damage.
Weight Core: It adds more weight to your Beyblade. There are other types of Weight cores but I'll list them later.
RC Core: Works like an RC Beyblade. You can use a controller to change it's movements and then it will follow on command.
Bottom: Determines performance and movement.
Dec. 13, 2014  3:59 AM
 
That's actually really cool, I'm so pumped to make a beyblade!
Dec. 13, 2014  4:04 AM
 
Loving that system. It looks really complex and interesting, I can't wait to see the series start off. Can I make a character as well please?
Dec. 13, 2014  4:35 AM
 
Wow! The system is so unique! How would the naming work and parts, etc? Would love to name a bey and design Tongue_out
Dec. 13, 2014  5:18 AM
 
Im so excited to make a beyblade!
Dec. 14, 2014  1:26 AM
 
Here is Elysion:
[Image: f535ld.jpg]

It has a Grip Bottom and a Spike Support Ring.
Dec. 14, 2014  1:35 AM
 
So, will we be able to design our own now?
Dec. 14, 2014  1:55 AM
 
Do we request and you draw it?

Is it just Elysion or is it like Holy Elysion or something...
Dec. 14, 2014  2:03 AM
 
Awesome, I'll send my design later!
Dec. 14, 2014  2:05 AM
 
You guys need to wait for him,
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