Manga Characters

hey guys since Me and Lorenzo(my friend) are in the process of creating a manga here are some of the characters, all the sketches are drawn by Lorenzo but i designed Flame and Kenzo. The style of the manga is going to be very simple. A bit like One Piece. Post your manga creations aswell Wink I wanna see all your manga characters Grin These drawings are only rough sketches of what they will look like in the manga Wink
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you need to work a little on the girl, otherwise, pretty good
(Apr. 08, 2010  1:24 PM)castleoblivion Wrote: you need to work a little on the girl, otherwise, pretty good
Yeah i will tell that to Lorenzo Wink
give the girl eyelashes and take off the cheeks. otherwise the girl is the best one!
(Apr. 08, 2010  7:35 PM)Jsc Wrote: give the girl eyelashes and take off the cheeks. otherwise the girl is the best one!

Lol ok i will tell lorenzo this, thanks for the feedback Wink
Stay in school and save your money.
(Apr. 08, 2010  9:09 PM)To Wrote: Stay in school and save your money.

ROFL thanks for the tip Grin
I'm not a pro but I can help you correct your drawings it that ok?
(Apr. 09, 2010  4:23 PM)vza004 Wrote: I'm not a pro but I can help you correct your drawings it that ok?
I'n not the artist who did these, but thanks i will tell my friend Lorenzo(once he gets back from Italy). But you can correct them if you want thanks Wink I drew Flame(dude with the fireball) then sent it to lorenzo then he drew the one your looking at now Wink
I take credit for Flame lol.
(Apr. 09, 2010  7:11 PM)mezz Wrote:
I'n not the artist who did these, but thanks i will tell my friend Lorenzo(once he gets back from Italy). But you can correct them if you want thanks Wink I drew Flame(dude with the fireball) then sent it to lorenzo then he drew the one your looking at now Wink
I take credit for Flame lol.

Cool. This will refresh my mind. It'll be more of a guide though.

Ok, here. It may not make sense since I'm not good at explaining.

       
       
   
(Apr. 09, 2010  9:35 PM)vza004 Wrote: Cool. This will refresh my mind. It'll be more of a guide though.

Ok, here. It may not make sense since I'm not good at explaining.

you are right... i am working on my manga, Beyblade Deity Storm, and i follow that same idea...
(Apr. 09, 2010  9:35 PM)vza004 Wrote: Cool. This will refresh my mind. It'll be more of a guide though.

Ok, here. It may not make sense since I'm not good at explaining.

OMG thank you, thank you so much! this will help me since i have a bit of trouble with the eyes Grin
(Apr. 09, 2010  9:35 PM)vza004 Wrote: Cool. This will refresh my mind. It'll be more of a guide though.

Ok, here. It may not make sense since I'm not good at explaining.

Wow, that's a great guide. Good Job! Wink
here is mine

i know it isnt really good but i am only 10 years old
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(Jul. 24, 2010  2:17 AM)pegasis105rf Wrote: here is mine

i know it isnt really good but i am only 10 years old

Pretty good dude! Keep it up, coz you have started early I envy you lol!
When your older you will be great!
thanks mezz
here is my chara for the manga lm drawing
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I'm so bored Mezz, and drew an fan art of your manga. lol
   
wow you guys are totally awesome
LOL.This Drawings are increible but you should make a manga about beyblades givin the master powers and then this will truly be amazin
(Apr. 09, 2010  9:35 PM)vza004 Wrote:
(Apr. 09, 2010  7:11 PM)mezz Wrote:
I'n not the artist who did these, but thanks i will tell my friend Lorenzo(once he gets back from Italy). But you can correct them if you want thanks Wink I drew Flame(dude with the fireball) then sent it to lorenzo then he drew the one your looking at now Wink
I take credit for Flame lol.

Cool. This will refresh my mind. It'll be more of a guide though.

Ok, here. It may not make sense since I'm not good at explaining.

Clap Clap.
I am good at drawing too but I'll do manga stuff later.