(Sep. 30, 2012 6:46 AM)Swordsman Zoro Wrote: [Criticism Shop]
Format: Signature
Importance Level: Medium
Criticism Level: Medium Or High Your Choice
Thanks In Advance
Sig 1= The flow in this one is nonexistent. Rendering also needs work. Text stands out way too much, blend it in. those sparkles on the side are useless. BG explosion is nice, but it needs to go with the flow. KIU
Sig 2= Background needs to be more than a blurred stock. There is no focal point clarity. Render sticks out way too much, blend it in. Fairy Tail logo is distracting. Flow is also... gone. Could be better. KIU
Sig 3= Flow is also nonexistent. Background is a spam of filters. I used to do this, until I met Synth and
http://www.guildinn.com/forum/ check that site out. Render is sticking out too much, text is somewhat better, but move it closer to the render. KIU
Sig 4= Multiple renders: multiple focal points: a horrible tag. Text again is sticking out. Background needs work, overall needs blending. Seems like a Copy+Paste type signature (Renders C+P onto a background with minor edits to it)
Sig 5= Same as above
Current Sig= Text stands out too much, render needs blending. Them borders are nice. Flow is established, good work on this one, try blending it in moar k, it'll be much better.
Your tags are all decent, they merely lack the blending, depth and flow definition. I suggest you stay away from text for now. KIU, you'll get better eventually!
(Sep. 30, 2012 7:03 AM)Synth Wrote: Did you just made a criticism shop within this GFX shop?
Lol, goodluck then with your awesome CnCsXD
Thanks... I suppose. No really, thanks.
(Sep. 30, 2012 7:14 AM)Tri Wrote: I need a criticism as well. Since, Focus refuses to! Jk
Format: criticism
Importance: low
Criticism: mid
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Color scheme is excellent. You just lack a defined flow and blending. Good job! Just define the flow and add depth!
(Sep. 30, 2012 7:18 AM)Focus Wrote: (Sep. 30, 2012 7:09 AM)Focus Wrote: Wow Good luck man ! I need cnc on this one
Sorry for double post but edit option is not working for me
[Criticism Shop]
Format: Signature
Importance Level: Medium
Criticism Level: High
And Tri If u had asked me ill be happy to cnc
The tag is like a huge, blurred C4D and a lost render. Define the flow more. Color scheme is dull, make it vibrant, seriously. Lighting is off as well. Depth is well, decent I guess, I've seen you do better. Overall a solid tag needing tweaks to the feel. KIU
Thanks for requesting and following the proper format,
Kujikato~
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