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King of Beys! Alpha's beyblading Journey!

Dec. 17, 2010  3:17 AM
 
I am making a beyblading story! It's called King of Beys! I will only be posting every once in a while, sinse I have limited computer time

Chapter 1!

It Was a cloudy afternoon, and levira was beyblading with his friends, when jo came over to them, panting. " guys, you gott'a check this out!". jo grabbed levira, and the gang rushed to catch up. "what is it jo?" they busted down an alleyway, and saw andrew pattiettie, the regional beyblade tournament champ, being beat at his own game. "GO PHAROH!" yelled the stranger, who was dressed in black, ripped jeans, a black tank-top, and a white, bone-like mask with a red flame on it. Two silver chains made a X across their front and back.

Agian, sorry for the lack of story, my computer time is limited because i have no time to go on the comuter. Tell me what you thinkz! ;3;

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"hmph, I guess that the rumors about you, Andrew Pattiettie, were false. And I thought you might've acctually make me work." he said as the stranger's bey touched Andrew's bey ever so slightly, knocking it out of the stadum with ease. Andrew's storm eagle crashed into the croncrete wall behind him, smashing the peices apart, as the stranger had done to all the other bladers gathered around them. "ha! i told you, I will never be defeted! I see that it is no use staying here."
"Wait!" Scremed Levira
"hm, who said that?"
"I did"
"Heh, so what do you want?"
" Battle me!"
"Fine, you seem worth my time. Three,"
"two"
"one!"
"let it rip!!!!!!!!!"
" this wont take long." The two beys clashed, but they stayed in the stadum.
"what?!?!?!?!"
"my bey has a flipping tip, that grips the bottom of the stadum,and then turns into a rubber flat!"
"heh, your smart, i guess i have to use this little trik early, if im gonna make it in time for my next targit, Go flame wip!!!"



To Be Continued........
Dec. 18, 2010  5:52 AM
 
Chapter 2

Flame strands formed around pharoh, creating a dragon with a crook, a sighn of athouatoy, and a flail, a sighn of power. Pharoh leaned back and, as soon as it touched the botom of the stadum, it leand forward and charged twards levira's dark aquario, flicking itself up at the last second smashing aquario into the stadum wall "hmph, you are very strong. What?!?!?! pharoh is losing power!" Pharoh was tettering, barely moving, in the mittle of the stadum.
'Now's my chance!' levira thought.
"Now, aquario, dark shroud!" aquario continulessly bounced off the walls, making it impossable to see what was happening inside it.
"Now! Finish this! New special move, top hilt!"
Zachariah yelled "dude, no! you still dont have the hang of that move!"
"Just trust me!" all of a sudden, the dark shroud stopped, and one bey was still spinning like mad.
To be continued....
Dec. 19, 2010  7:34 PM
 
I like it
Dec. 20, 2010  3:00 AM
 
Chapter 2 cont.

Pharoh was spinning so mugh that it was suspending the non-spinning aquario above it, at pharoh's mercy. "heh, not bad.Now, what should I do with this bey...?"

hod no time to finish!
Dec. 20, 2010  3:09 AM
 
Please hurry! This is intense! Pharoh is a bey like I've never read about before. Your imagination is great, and you could get a lot done if you wrote it out on paper before-hand.
Dec. 20, 2010  9:47 PM
 
Fishein it!

Chapter 2 cont. cont.

"let's see.... how about i demolish it."
"no!" Levria was holding back teers, he couln't let him break aquario into 1000sands of peices!
'this is'nt good!' he thought.
"Wait!"
"ugh, this is geting tedious " Said the stranger.
" I'll do anything! just don't smash Aquario!"
"pht, why should i care about your stupid bey?"
" if you don't destroy my bey, in 1 month's time, we'll battle. If i win, you take off that mask. If i loose, you can do anything to my bey, no matter how much i beg and pleed!"
"your really that confident?"
"yea"
"Fine. It'll give me something to do, at least." Just then, Pharoh's speed decreced, and Aquario bounced off Pharoh and into levira's hand. Pharoh jumped into the stranger's hand. The stranger jumped onto the top of a house, and before going said one thing.
"By the way, the name's Alpha."
As he Ran jumping from housetop to housetop untill he couldn't be seen.
Dec. 21, 2010  7:51 AM
 
Oh my gosh this story is super awesome!!!!!!!
Dec. 22, 2010  1:56 AM
 
Fixed lines to look beter.
Dec. 23, 2010  12:04 AM
 
Chapter 3

"levira, you idiot!!!!!" Patrick punched Levira square in the jaw. "What were you thinking!!??" "OW! That kinda hurt!!!" Levira turned and sidekicked patrick in the face. Leivra knew he wouldn't come close to winning, but if he trained he might have at least a chance. "I gotta go home, I have homework to do." He had this feeling, and he just couldn't shake it. "i'm home!" He yelled to his mom.
"Supper will be ready soon."
"k, I am goin' to be in my room."
"Alright."
Levira had no homework, but yet he did. He grabbed his laptop and typed in 'www.beydatabase.com'. He serched 'Pharoh'. 'This bey was only herd about in a few tall tales, but has recently appeared with a blader that has been identified as Alpha.' "That's funny, i've never heard of a bey like pharoh in any farytails my mom has ever told me, and there is no more info on pharoh or Alpha."
Dec. 29, 2010  11:59 PM
 
can i be in your story
Dec. 30, 2010  7:48 PM
 
Shure, just tell me what he looks lik and stuff
Dec. 31, 2010  9:19 AM
 
Hmmm.............
Gray Hair
Red Hoodies
Jeans
Brown Eyes
Bey: Rock Sagittario 145 WB
He is a poor kid with a passion for beyblading.
The way he gets his beyblade is from dad before his dad dies.
Dec. 31, 2010  6:37 PM
 
Awsome! He'll be in teh nxt chapta!
Jan. 01, 2011  4:33 AM
 
The mom tells fairy tales about beyblade?!?!?! O.o
Jan. 01, 2011  11:57 AM
 
(Dec. 31, 2010  6:37 PM)aries blader Wrote: Awsome! He'll be in teh nxt chapta!

thats awesome!! Grin
Jan. 01, 2011  2:04 PM
 
can i be in your story too?
Jan. 01, 2011  4:29 PM
 
(Jan. 01, 2011  4:33 AM)Firinmahlazuh Wrote: The mom tells fairy tales about beyblade?!?!?! O.o
Yes, lol I just caught that XD
(Jan. 01, 2011  2:04 PM)krabby5656 Wrote: can i be in your story too?

Shure! Just tell me what they looklike, their bey, etc etc
Jan. 01, 2011  5:05 PM
 
Great story ...

Can i be in the story too
Jan. 01, 2011  5:20 PM
 
Name: Jin Naito
Bey:Bey: Gash Orion 100R2F Gash looks like thermal but the 4 spikes are flat. Orion clear wheel is bulky like persues but doesn't have the eye thing.
Special: Octane Gash
Gash orion glows white then Hits the opposing bey making it fly upwards then it hits the falling beyblade with a gashing force
Jin Has spikey hair going downward front and has T-shirt and an unbuttoned jacket covering itnand has jeans that has crossed belt and well sneakers
Charasteristics: Strong and silent but cares about friends
GooD
Jan. 02, 2011  3:18 AM
 
AUnhappyoff topic, i think) {krabby5656} lol, just realized that he sounds like Chad from bleach
B:{brielyranger} OK! Just tell me about them. {everyone} whoever wants to be in it post what they look like, their bey (plz no abbreviations! i don't understand some of them and will make less confusion!) Plz b patient, it will take some time for me to find the right spot to fit your characters into.
(Dec. 31, 2010  9:19 AM)DragoonGTX Wrote: Hmmm.............
Gray Hair
Red Hoodies
Jeans
Brown Eyes
Bey: Rock Sagittario 145 WB
He is a poor kid with a passion for beyblading.
The way he gets his beyblade is from dad before his dad dies.
lol, just realized that u didn't say his name... XD
Jan. 02, 2011  3:27 AM
 
I... have no idea who chad is XD
Jan. 02, 2011  5:09 AM
 
chapter 4 kraby5656's character is in this one XP

levira went downstairs and went to the TV, turning it on to a random channel.
"levira, supper is ready!"
"k!"
He had baked potato, corn, and pork. When he finished it was about 6:00, still pretty early, so he decided to go out to the b-pit to check out the new parts that should've come out by now. He grabbed his coat, his bey, his launcher,his bey-pointer, and his grip, and headed out the door. He passed the park, and got sidetracked by a heated battle, forgetting that the b-pit closed at 6:45. he looked at his watch,
"wait, It's still 6:00??"
a random person said " today's daylight savings, and they just fixed the watch signals."
"oh, thanks!"
He still only had a little time left, so he started to jog the rest of the way. All of a sudden he heard some noise in the alleyway ahead of him.
"Heh, you an't so tough! now, are we gonna punch those points outt'a you, or are ya' gonna give 'um to us?"
"....."
"ya' still not talkin' kid? alright!"
Levira saw two of the point-hunters grab the boy who had spiky hair going downward in the front and an unbuttoned jacket covering a T-shirt, with jeans with a black belt (a regular belt, not a karate belt, lol!) and navy blue sneakers. He saw the leader of the group wind up, and levira instinctively ran up and side kicked him in the face,Saying, "You guys make me sick!!!!!" The group ran away.
"Cowards!!!!, Are you OK?"
"Yea, thanks."
"You'r welcome, by the way, the name's Levira"
" I'm Jin."
"Nice to meet you Jin!"
Jin smiled, and Levira knew that he must be the strong, silent type. Levira looked at his watch it was already 6:46.
"Ugh, the b-pit closed. i knew i should've gone at 5:30!"
"My dad owns the b-pit. I can let you in, even though it's closed."
"Really! Thanks so much, I herd that the new parts might be gone by tomorrow, there so popular!"
"Yea, let's go."
They got to the b-pit at 7:02.
"Woa!" Said Levira
"Here."
"How much is it?"
"1000 points"
"alright!"
Levira grabbed his pointer and paid the points, taking the new, shiny, awing metal wheel that only was shipped only to that b-pit, Fiery Soler!
"
Jan. 02, 2011  8:38 AM
 
yeah my dad owns b-pit! Grin
Jan. 02, 2011  10:00 AM
 
Hmmm.............
Gray Hair
Red Hoodies
Jeans
Brown Eyes
Bey: Rock Sagittario 145 WB
He is a poor kid with a passion for beyblading.
The way he gets his beyblade is from dad before his dad dies.
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lol, just realized that u didn't say his name... XD
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Oh no his name is Sam sorry i was focused on my story i barely had time to do alot of stuff and krabby5656 character is the exact same from my story check it out in the link below |
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Jan. 02, 2011  10:05 AM
 
yas i kno
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