carp, I didn't know I was supposed to post drafts first. Anyways, berate me on my poor article here.
{{Beybox
| image = Killer_Beafowl.jpg
| full item name = Killer Beafowl UW145 EWD
| item number = BB-100
| beyblade system = [[Metal Fight Beyblade]]
| beyblade type = [[Balance]]
}}
'''Killer Beafowl UW145EWD''' is a Balance type Beyblade that was released by Takara Tomy on December 27, 2010 is Random Booster vol. 6. It was later released by Hasbro in Wave 6 of Beyblade: Metal Masters in November/December 2011. It is part of the Maximum series.
==Face Bolt: Beafowl==
Beafowl is a clear pink Face Bolt that depicts Pavo, the peacock constellation.

==Clear Wheel: Beafowl==
*'''Weight''': 2.9 grams
Beafowl's design features a translucent pink Clear Wheel with two black feather designs on opposite sides of the wheel. In between those designs is a rigid edge with small gaps in between.

==Metal Wheel: Killer==
*'''Weight''': 31.2 grams
Killer is a primarily outclassed Metal Wheel, with two textured circular blades that end in a point. These were originally designed to fit the Gemios Clear Wheel. Killer is also thin, with a small edge hanging below the Wheel, but that negates any [[Smash Attack]] it would have. Despite being thin with little air resistance, it is outclassed by other [[Survival|Stamina]] wheels like Burn, Earth, and Phantom.

==Spin Track: Upper Wing 145==
*'''Weight''': 3.6 grams
UW145 is a Spin Track that was probably based off of SW145, except the blades resemble feathers. Like SW145, it can be removed and place back on upside-down, either creating an upward or downward slope. In upward-facing mode, it provides an effect similar to T125 or DF145, acting as a "fan" that pushes air down for increased Stamina. However, in downward facing mode, the blades on the Track conduct smash attack on lower Beys.

==Performance Tip: Eternal Wide Defense==
*'''Weight''': 1.2 grams
EWD is like a cross between ES and WD. It has the general defensive shape of WD, with the free spinning spike of ES. This gives it more Stamina while being difficult to knock off [[Balance]] because of the WD shape. EWD is a excellent Stamina Performance Tip along with WD and B. However, if it gets worn down by repetitive use, it will lose its grip on the floor of the stadium and be susceptible to [[Attack]] types.
==Gallery==
<gallery>
Image:BeafowlBottom.jpg|Bottom view
Image:BeafowlRing.png|Clear Wheel
ImageWDtip.jpg|Performance Tip
Image:Killer.png|Metal Wheel
Image:BeafowlPieces.jpg|Pieces
Image:UW145.png|Spin Track
</gallery>

==Overall==
*'''Weight''':39.9 grams
'''Killer Beafowl UW145 EWD''' is a good Bey to have, especially for UW145 and EWD. However, Killer is a very outclassed part, but it is compromised by the Spin Track and Performance Tip.

[[Category:Metal Fight Beyblade]]
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In the UW145 area, change "was probably" to "appears to have been". Also mention it has "little to no effect".
I wouldn't consider killer beafowl to be a very good bey to get. Try saying "This bey.is comprised of mainly outclassed parts, although EWD can be put to use in stamina customizations.

You should probably learn a bit about Beafowl and beys in general before posting articles.

UW145 is bad, it only has use in heavily outclassed (even at time of its release) Smash Attack combos in Defense mode like MF Lightning L-Drago UW145RF. The actual articles needs a bit more content, the exclusive parts are sorely lacking in description.

Only worthwhile part is EWD, which is top-tier stamina. However, a better purchase would be the Strongest Blader Set, which also contains Nightmare Rex with an EWD.

Also, I'm pretty sure Electric already posted a very good Beafowl draft, so try editing that instead.

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I don't mean to be mean or anything, but this needs QUITE a bit of work.

Saying things like "it is a good bey to have" does not really compute. It needs to be something along the lines of "there is little to no reason to own this Beyblade."

This weekend for once, I will try and actually write a draft.. I like Beafowl, so I'll do one myself and post it here

@Ga
Ahh yes, I was just thinking that there was another one.

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How do I still have 17th most posts here...?

Yes, as the stickied topic mentions, we should all try to build upon the best existing draft, not post new ones continually.
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Killer-B...ough-Draft