Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story]

Poll: How is my Story?

Amazing. Looking forward to new chapters.
60.00%
3
It's pretty good.
20.00%
1
It's ok.
20.00%
1
It's not that good.
0%
0
It's terrible. Worst story ever.
0%
0
Total: 100% 5 vote(s)
Hey guys, this is my first Beyblade story, actually it is my first story in general. Anyways, before you copyright Hero's Blade, I asked permission from GingkaIfritFTW and he said I could write this story from the character I submitted into his story, Brigham.

Prologue:
Nice, love the prologue. So I'm guessing that the prologue takes place in a country outside of the war?
No, it'll take place in the US, but in an area unaffected by the war.
(Feb. 21, 2014  9:55 PM)TheDigitizedOne Wrote: No, it'll take place in the US, but in an area unaffected by the war.

OK. Hope this gets good feedback! Not many errors with spelling or grammar that I can see! Keep it up!