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Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story] - Printable Version

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Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story] - TheDigitizedOne - Feb. 21, 2014

Hey guys, this is my first Beyblade story, actually it is my first story in general. Anyways, before you copyright Hero's Blade, I asked permission from GingkaIfritFTW and he said I could write this story from the character I submitted into his story, Brigham.

Prologue:



RE: Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story] - Airus - Feb. 21, 2014

Nice, love the prologue. So I'm guessing that the prologue takes place in a country outside of the war?


RE: Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story] - TheDigitizedOne - Feb. 21, 2014

No, it'll take place in the US, but in an area unaffected by the war.


RE: Hero's Blade [Brigham's Story][Beyblade Story] - Airus - Feb. 21, 2014

(Feb. 21, 2014  9:55 PM)TheDigitizedOne Wrote: No, it'll take place in the US, but in an area unaffected by the war.

OK. Hope this gets good feedback! Not many errors with spelling or grammar that I can see! Keep it up!