HI ppl here is my manga art

name of the manga is Elfik World coming soon by Ray407
and here are some charas
   
   
   
tell me what you think
I think this is nice!
The coloring is pretty good.

But 2 things.
1. You might wanna tone down on the spikes.
They seem to be everywhere.

2. The guy with purple hair eye's are too big.
The guy with yellow hair has a decent size.
Might wanna make both a tad bit smaller.

I like the first one a lot though. Good job!
good but anatomy is off