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HI ppl here is my manga art - Ray407 - Aug. 16, 2010
name of the manga is Elfik World coming soon by Ray407
and here are some charas
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tell me what you think
RE: HI ppl here is my manga art - Pyro - Aug. 16, 2010
I think this is nice!
The coloring is pretty good.
But 2 things.
1. You might wanna tone down on the spikes.
They seem to be everywhere.
2. The guy with purple hair eye's are too big.
The guy with yellow hair has a decent size.
Might wanna make both a tad bit smaller.
I like the first one a lot though. Good job!
RE: HI ppl here is my manga art - Deadpool - Aug. 16, 2010
good but anatomy is off