Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story

Characters:

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:
The day was here. The final day to see and meet the top bladers from around the country. This was my one chance to prove to all of my fans that I am better and stronger than any other person in the United States.
It's not too bad, for a prologue. But you should certainly try to leave out words such as "retard", considering this is a "kid's" site and it can be considered offensive.
On the other hand,you can leave it in.Prologue is good.
On the other hand, saying that word is really ignorant and rude (no offense to you, Ninja).

Anyways, yay, a plastic story! Besides what Leone19 mentione, the prologue seems good!
Ok, I changed that 'Word' to Dimwit. If anyone wants to have a request for characters/beys, please pm me!
Sorry to double post, but Chapter 1A has been posted! I am planning on having 3 sub-chapters per chapter, with a total of 5 chapters.
I like it so farXD
Wait, is 1B just one sentence?
No, sorry. I forgot to put a spoiler. Remember me? I update it by a couple paragraphs each day.
Sorry to double post, but new format added.