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Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - The Ninja - Mar. 29, 2014

Characters:

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:
The day was here. The final day to see and meet the top bladers from around the country. This was my one chance to prove to all of my fans that I am better and stronger than any other person in the United States.


RE: Grinding Fights- Plastic Beyblade Story - Leone19 - Mar. 29, 2014

It's not too bad, for a prologue. But you should certainly try to leave out words such as "retard", considering this is a "kid's" site and it can be considered offensive.


RE: Grinding Fights- Plastic Beyblade Story - Elite Projects - Mar. 29, 2014

On the other hand,you can leave it in.Prologue is good.


RE: Grinding Fights- Plastic Beyblade Story - Dual - Mar. 29, 2014

On the other hand, saying that word is really ignorant and rude (no offense to you, Ninja).

Anyways, yay, a plastic story! Besides what Leone19 mentione, the prologue seems good!


RE: Grinding Fights- Plastic Beyblade Story - The Ninja - Mar. 29, 2014

Ok, I changed that 'Word' to Dimwit. If anyone wants to have a request for characters/beys, please pm me!


RE: Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - The Ninja - Mar. 30, 2014

Sorry to double post, but Chapter 1A has been posted! I am planning on having 3 sub-chapters per chapter, with a total of 5 chapters.


RE: Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - Elite Projects - Mar. 31, 2014

I like it so farXD


RE: Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - Dual - Mar. 31, 2014

Wait, is 1B just one sentence?


RE: Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - The Ninja - Apr. 01, 2014

No, sorry. I forgot to put a spoiler. Remember me? I update it by a couple paragraphs each day.


RE: Grinding Gears- Plastic Beyblade Story - The Ninja - Apr. 02, 2014

Sorry to double post, but new format added.