Even though neither are really good at all to me, I guess I'll give my vote to Entry 2...
Entry 1: Bad quality renders, with what looks like no effects at all. He just got a stock background, put renders on it, boom, that's his entry...
Entry 2: The effects in this were poorly used, making it almost impossible to make out what the second render's face even looks like, and the text is hardly noticable, with bad placement and no real effect that it gives..