The shadowed figure pounced onto the hooded man hidden in the darkness of the alleyway. He then pulled out his dagger, incarnated with ancient symbols. He slid it across the man’s throat and the husk dropped. He searched the man’s pocket and only found a note reading, ‘Banana. Egg. Yarn. Apple. Toilet-paper. Octopus .Mango .Enchilada’.

Read the last bit and figure out what it means

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Keiwannabe Attached a moderator to this post for looking funny.Hope this.

I'm sorry, but isn't this like the 12th story you haven't finished? Work on maybe one or two, max three, but not so many. Focus on one.

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^That. But Bey Atome? What is that supposed to be? But seriously, these chapters are less than 5 lines, and you're putting no effort into them obviously. You should be focusing on only a few stories, and actually bother to continue those.

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"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little, yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth we critics must face, is that in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is probably more meaningful than our criticism designating it so. But there are times when a critic truly risks something, and that is in the discovery and defense of the new. The world is often unkind to new talent, new creations. The new needs friends. Last night, I experienced something new: an extraordinary meal from a singularly unexpected source. To say that both the meal and its maker have challenged my preconceptions about fine cooking is a gross understatement. They have rocked me to my core. In the past, I have made no secret of my disdain for Chef Gusteau's famous motto, "Anyone can cook." But I realize, only now do I truly understand what he meant. Not everyone can become a great artist; but a great artist can come from anywhere."

-Anton Ego/Peter O'Toole (1932-2013)

Oh, and here's a great idea. If you have a new idea, instead of writing an entirely new story you can... Add it to your original story by making a new chapter! What a shocker!

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