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Fiery Flames - Hope - Jun. 06, 2011
The shadowed figure pounced onto the hooded man hidden in the darkness of the alleyway. He then pulled out his dagger, incarnated with ancient symbols. He slid it across the man’s throat and the husk dropped. He searched the man’s pocket and only found a note reading, ‘Banana. Egg. Yarn. Apple. Toilet-paper. Octopus .Mango .Enchilada’.
Read the last bit and figure out what it means
RE: Fiery Flames - NoodooSoup - Jun. 06, 2011
I'm sorry, but isn't this like the 12th story you haven't finished? Work on maybe one or two, max three, but not so many. Focus on one.
RE: Fiery Flames - Ga' - Jun. 06, 2011
^That. But Bey Atome? What is that supposed to be? But seriously, these chapters are less than 5 lines, and you're putting no effort into them obviously. You should be focusing on only a few stories, and actually bother to continue those.
RE: Fiery Flames - NoodooSoup - Jun. 06, 2011
Oh, and here's a great idea. If you have a new idea, instead of writing an entirely new story you can... Add it to your original story by making a new chapter!
What a shocker!