[Fan Fiction]  The Jakkyrz Razaaz- The Banished Gods (FBW Saga)

(Mar. 16, 2021  11:51 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2021  9:13 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: they just keep getting betrer and better

(Mar. 16, 2021  9:46 PM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: r.i.p  the hair bois

(Mar. 16, 2021  11:05 PM)Pixi Wrote: rip the kiyama bros

(Mar. 16, 2021  11:29 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: R.I.P. Kiyama bros + beyblade burst

1. I didn't say that they died
2. Yup, the Burst World is Deader than Dead
3. What's your guys rating for my fan fiction? (out of ten)

69/10 nice.
sorry but my rating doesn't fit with in ten its just that GOOD
(Mar. 16, 2021  11:51 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2021  9:13 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: they just keep getting betrer and better

(Mar. 16, 2021  9:46 PM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: r.i.p  the hair bois

(Mar. 16, 2021  11:05 PM)Pixi Wrote: rip the kiyama bros

(Mar. 16, 2021  11:29 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: R.I.P. Kiyama bros + beyblade burst

1. I didn't say that they died
2. Yup, the Burst World is Deader than Dead
3. What's your guys rating for my fan fiction? (out of ten)

1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10
(Mar. 17, 2021  12:47 AM)Pixi Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2021  11:51 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 1. I didn't say that they died
2. Yup, the Burst World is Deader than Dead
3. What's your guys rating for my fan fiction? (out of ten)

1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10

That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.
(Mar. 17, 2021  1:04 PM)i\m batman Wrote:
(Mar. 17, 2021  12:47 AM)Pixi Wrote: 1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10

That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.
i just smashed my keyboard
(Mar. 17, 2021  12:17 AM)sushiroll1234 Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2021  11:51 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 1. I didn't say that they died
2. Yup, the Burst World is Deader than Dead
3. What's your guys rating for my fan fiction? (out of ten)

69/10 nice.

(Mar. 17, 2021  12:45 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: sorry but my rating doesn't fit with in ten its just that GOOD

(Mar. 17, 2021  12:47 AM)Pixi Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2021  11:51 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 1. I didn't say that they died
2. Yup, the Burst World is Deader than Dead
3. What's your guys rating for my fan fiction? (out of ten)

1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10

(Mar. 17, 2021  1:04 PM)i'm batman Wrote:
(Mar. 17, 2021  12:47 AM)Pixi Wrote: 1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10

That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.

(Mar. 17, 2021  1:20 PM)Pixi Wrote:
(Mar. 17, 2021  1:04 PM)i\m batman Wrote: That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.
i just smashed my keyboard

Thanks a lot, and Samira and Mizuki are alive, in the MFB world. Thanks for the ratings guys. In Season 3, Bruno (i'm batman's oc), MIzuki (Pixi's OC) and Samira (Sushiroll's oc) will appear. Just four more chapters till season 3 starts.

(Mar. 17, 2021  12:45 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: sorry but my rating doesn't fit with in ten its just that GOOD

(Mar. 17, 2021  1:20 PM)Pixi Wrote:
(Mar. 17, 2021  1:04 PM)i\m batman Wrote: That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.
i just smashed my keyboard

Well I broke my gaming keyboard today lol
(Mar. 17, 2021  2:32 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:
(Mar. 17, 2021  12:17 AM)sushiroll1234 Wrote: 69/10 nice.

(Mar. 17, 2021  12:45 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: sorry but my rating doesn't fit with in ten its just that GOOD

(Mar. 17, 2021  12:47 AM)Pixi Wrote: 1. ok then
2. rip mizuki then
3.its 97123012038103/10

(Mar. 17, 2021  1:04 PM)i'm batman Wrote: That's a pretty... random rating. Definitely can agree with it though.

(Mar. 17, 2021  1:20 PM)Pixi Wrote: i just smashed my keyboard

Thanks a lot, and Samira and Mizuki are alive, in the MFB world. Thanks for the ratings guys. In Season 3, Bruno (i'm batman's oc), MIzuki (Pixi's OC) and Samira (Sushiroll's oc) will appear. Just four more chapters till season 3 starts.

epicccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
1st Step: Reincarnation chapter is coming in a few hours

I just popped in so I could let you guys know that sadly I won't be able to write a chapter today. I was busy writing a essay and completing my school work and tests, and I have to go to ice hockey practice now. Sorry, tommorow, I'll try to have this chapter posted. And btw, if anyone would like to help me write chapters, they can, just pm me and let me know if you would like to assist me. If you do assist me, I'll give you credit for the work you will do, so it'll be fair.


- Ryuga's Son
Sadly, probably I won't be able to write a chapter today as well. Not 100 percent sure, just giving a heads up that I prob won't be able to write a chapter today. Tommorow, probably I will write a chapter
you have a lot on your plate man.
(Mar. 18, 2021  7:47 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: you have a lot on your plate man.
wdym a lot on my plate?
(Mar. 18, 2021  11:38 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 18, 2021  7:47 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: you have a lot on your plate man.
wdym a lot on my plate?

That your busy.
Yeah like a lot between school and your fan fic plus ice hockey training

right now i've only got school and my fan fic so thats easy but soon i'll have field hockey
(Mar. 19, 2021  12:32 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Yeah like a lot between school and your fan fic plus ice hockey training

right now i've only got school and my fan fic so thats easy but soon i'll have field hockey

You play field hockey?

(Mar. 18, 2021  11:40 PM)Free... Hoya Wrote:
(Mar. 18, 2021  11:38 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: wdym a lot on my plate?

That your busy.

Yeah maybe cuz I have a lot of things to do. I like writing a lot.

Chapter coming today maybe

1st Step: Reincarnation

Dark Gods’ Headquarters:

Wind howled, carrying a scent that would change Reality itself. A tall cunning and vicious man sniffed the air, as he got ready to give his speech.

He blinked in surprise. The message had been correct. The message had been given by the Dark Gods’. He weighed the odds of it being incorrect.

The tall man, Doji smiled, his old devilish smile which sent a ripple of fear over the followers of the Dark Gods’.

“Now, it is time that we resurrect our Masters! This event shall mark the Rise of the Dark Order, after falling to those irrelevant Gods who sealed our masters away! The First step is….Reincarnation!”

The crowd cheered.

Doji stared at the book in his hands.

He knew just what to do.

5 bladers shrouded in a dark blue-ish cloak approached Doji.

“If the puny WBBA bladers try to intercept us, stop them.” instructed Doji.

“Or die”, said Doj icily.


Doji walked to a spot, where the 9 Dark Gods’ Bladers stood, forming a circle.

The 7 Dark Gods’ Bladers were: Damian, Reji, Bruno, Infernal Eye, Hao, Julius, a new blader whose name was Killer Jazz, Brooklyn, and a burst blader named Red Crescent.

Doji walked into the middle of the circle.

He motioned his hand, and the 9 Bladers ripped their launchers, as their beys flung into the sky.

Doji recited from the book in his hand, “The Dark Gods’, the Masters of Life and Death, the ones who shall rule, the Ones who reign over Creation, the Dark Ones, shall raise once again!”

Nine rays of Lightning struck the ground, as the wind roared. The seven beys in the air
revolved, forming a circle made of dark energy.

The Rays of Lightning vanished, and a dark seal formed in the ground.

Doji laughed.

“I feel it! This is what I have been desiring for my whole life!”

Doji’s fingers glazed, as he touched the seal on the ground.

He twisted it, and a huge amount of energy rushed out of the seal.

Doji smiled.

Doji ripped his launcher as Apocalypse soared into the sky, at the seal that was revealed when the Seven Beys revolved.

The Seals opened, mixing energy as multiple Shadows assembled in midair.

“I, Arthur, Doji, the Dark Liege Lord, summon the Dark Gods’!”, yelled Doji.

Thunder rumbled. The sky roared so hard that it felt as if the Cosmos was shaking.

A spirit came out of the shadow, and the Spirit laughed.

“I am finally reincarnated!”, said the Spirit.

Waves of Fear washed over the crowd.

It felt as if Death and Fear had taken a physical form.

“Now, you must make a form for me to survive in. That art is called the Samsara Rebirth!”


i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
Free... Hoya
sushiroll1234
(Mar. 19, 2021  3:16 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 19, 2021  12:32 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Yeah like a lot between school and your fan fic plus ice hockey training

right now i've only got school and my fan fic so thats easy but soon i'll have field hockey

You play field hockey?

(Mar. 18, 2021  11:40 PM)Free... Hoya Wrote: That your busy.

Yeah maybe cuz I have a lot of things to do. I like writing a lot.

Chapter coming today maybe

1st Step: Reincarnation

Dark Gods’ Headquarters:

Wind howled, carrying a scent that would change Reality itself. A tall cunning and vicious man sniffed the air, as he got ready to give his speech.

He blinked in surprise. The message had been correct. The message had been given by the Dark Gods’. He weighed the odds of it being incorrect.  

The tall man, Doji smiled, his old devilish smile which sent a ripple of fear over the followers of the Dark Gods’.

“Now, it is time that we resurrect our Masters! This event shall mark the Rise of the Dark Order, after falling to those irrelevant Gods who sealed our masters away! The First step is….Reincarnation!”

The crowd cheered.

Doji stared at the book in his hands.

He knew just what to do.

5 bladers shrouded in a dark blue-ish cloak approached Doji.

“If the puny WBBA bladers try to intercept us, stop them.” instructed Doji.

“Or die”, said Doj icily.


Doji walked to a spot, where the 9 Dark Gods’ Bladers stood, forming a circle.

The 7 Dark Gods’ Bladers were: Damian, Reji, Bruno, Infernal Eye, Hao, Julius,  a new blader whose name was Killer Jazz, Brooklyn, and a burst blader named Red Crescent.

Doji walked into the middle of the circle.

He motioned his hand, and the 9 Bladers ripped their launchers, as their beys flung into the sky.

Doji recited from the book in his hand, “The Dark Gods’, the Masters of Life and Death, the ones who shall rule, the Ones who reign over Creation, the Dark Ones, shall raise once again!”

Nine rays of Lightning struck the ground, as the wind roared. The seven beys in the air
revolved, forming a circle made of dark energy.

The Rays of Lightning vanished, and a dark seal formed in the ground.

Doji laughed.

“I feel it! This is what I have been desiring for my whole life!”

Doji’s fingers glazed, as he touched the seal on the ground.

He twisted it, and a huge amount of energy rushed out of the seal.

Doji smiled.

Doji ripped his launcher as Apocalypse soared into the sky, at the seal that was revealed when the Seven Beys revolved.

The Seals opened, mixing energy as multiple Shadows assembled in midair.

“I, Arthur, Doji, the Dark Liege Lord, summon the Dark Gods’!”, yelled Doji.

Thunder rumbled. The sky roared so hard that it felt as if the Cosmos was shaking.

A spirit came out of the shadow, and the Spirit laughed.

“I am finally reincarnated!”, said the Spirit.

Waves of Fear washed over the crowd.

It felt as if Death and Fear had taken a physical form.

“Now, you must make a form for me to survive in. That art is called the Samsara Rebirth!”


i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
Free... Hoya
sushiroll1234

yeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhh bbboiiiiiiiii
where Elvio
(Mar. 19, 2021  6:01 PM)Longinox Wrote: where Elvio

He's going to come in Season 3. That's only 3 chaps away

Next Chapters:
2nd Step: Samsara Rebirth
3rd Step: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power
Rise of the Fallen Order!

For any new readers, since the chapters are all scattered in 12 pages of this thread, I'll post this here and in the first post
Season 1
Season 2:

Battle of the Dragons Part One

Chapter 2: Emerging Threat

Chapter 3: Infernal Eye

Chapter 4: Behold the Heavenly Dragon!

Chapter 5: New Bladers!

Chapter 6: Dark Gods’ First Strike Part One

Chapter 7: Dark Gods' First Strike Part Two

Chapter 8: Doji’s Other Identities

Chapter 9: The Power of a God

Chapter 10: Reincarnation

(Feb. 23, 2021  3:23 PM)Free... Hoya Wrote:
(Feb. 23, 2021  3:20 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: yeh I kinda wiggle free and kinda sneak sometimes. My parents kinda dislike beyblade. If they got hold of WBO acc, they would delete it. it's very hard to write chaps of this fan fic. Ill prob write chaps in the weekends
If I had a fanfic I would make the chapter's on the spot. But that's really harsh.

wdym on the spot?

Season 1

Season 2
yeah i play field hockey its basically the same as ice hockey but we dont fly around in ice skates and we play on grass
(Mar. 21, 2021  2:44 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: yeah i play field hockey its basically the same as ice hockey but we dont fly around in ice skates and we play on grass

I also play field hockey

Chapter coming tommorow I think
Nice what position do you play
(Mar. 22, 2021  2:27 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Nice what position do you play

Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  2:27 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Nice what position do you play

Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

depends if how gruesome it is
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  2:27 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Nice what position do you play

Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

Murder causes a Beyblade fanfic to stray away from where it's supposed to be (which is a shounen, this is not a seinen) so taking the edgy route would be a bad idea.
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  2:27 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: Nice what position do you play

Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

"i'm batman"
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

Characters dying in battles due to the sheer power of Beyblades (while somewhat ridiculous, but Beyblade is ridiculous and we love it for what it is) is fine with me, but I'd rather not see murder in a Beyblade fic. But you do you, and I'll be following this fic anyway.
(Mar. 22, 2021  8:45 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

depends if how gruesome it is

(Mar. 23, 2021  1:31 AM)Longinox Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

i'm batman
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

Murder causes a Beyblade fanfic to stray away from where it's supposed to be (which is a shounen, this is not a seinen) so taking the edgy route would be a bad idea.

(Mar. 23, 2021  7:42 AM)i'm batman Wrote:
(Mar. 22, 2021  4:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: Centre Forward

In two or three days, Season 2 should be over.


Next Chapter: Soul, Blood, Essence, and Power!

"i'm batman"
SSJBDoku
Pixi
sushiroll1234

Should I have Murder in my fan fic?

Characters dying in battles due to the sheer power of Beyblades (while somewhat ridiculous, but Beyblade is ridiculous and we love it for what it is) is fine with me, but I'd rather not see murder in a Beyblade fic. But you do you, and I'll be following this fic anyway.

I decide that no murder will happen in this fan fic from now on.

CheetoBlader, in the first post, all the chapters are there, you can grade it and Private Message the grade to me