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[Fan Fiction] {Slow Updates} The Eternal Ones: Scion of the Legends
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A few things I want to tell:
The developed beyblade world has progressed further and created Guilds. Guilds are beyblade teams with a minimum of 5 bladers. Each Blader in a their own Guild work together to reach the very apex of beyblade.
Currently, the Five Great Superior Guilds are:
Z Combatants
Titans
Dragonwarriors
Forsworn
Fallen Angels
Each of the Five Great Superior Guilds have equal power. They stand at the Apex of Beyblade, only rivaled by the Ultimate World Champion: Lane.
There are other Superpower Guilds.
These are the ranks for Guilds:
1.Upstart Rank
2.D rank
3. F Rank
4. S Rank
5. B Rank
6. A Rank
7. Z Rank
8. Pseudo-Superpower
9. Superpower
10. Great Superior Guild
Every 27 years a Tournament is held, for many bey battles to decide what Superior Guild is overthrown.
Any Guild can declare war on a other. If a Guild declares war, the Guilds will arrange a tournament and bey-battle. Whichever Guild wins gets all the Legacy Stones (Legacy Stones are Stones that hold secret beyblade combat techniques. They are very rare) of the Losing Guild. Or, the Guilds who are fighting can decide the stake. For example, if a Guild loses, the thing that must be given to the Winner Guild, which will be decided BEFORE the War starts.
Also, they are Dungeons, Quests, etc that are given to bladers which if they complete are given prizes which can improve their power in beyblade.
And, as the Prolouge is already uploaded, Chapter #1 will be posted on April 12th, in three days (this is a estimate.)
Any questions about Dungeons, Tournaments, Guilds, please ask me.
The developed beyblade world has progressed further and created Guilds. Guilds are beyblade teams with a minimum of 5 bladers. Each Blader in a their own Guild work together to reach the very apex of beyblade.
Currently, the Five Great Superior Guilds are:
Z Combatants
Titans
Dragonwarriors
Forsworn
Fallen Angels
Each of the Five Great Superior Guilds have equal power. They stand at the Apex of Beyblade, only rivaled by the Ultimate World Champion: Lane.
There are other Superpower Guilds.
These are the ranks for Guilds:
1.Upstart Rank
2.D rank
3. F Rank
4. S Rank
5. B Rank
6. A Rank
7. Z Rank
8. Pseudo-Superpower
9. Superpower
10. Great Superior Guild
Every 27 years a Tournament is held, for many bey battles to decide what Superior Guild is overthrown.
Any Guild can declare war on a other. If a Guild declares war, the Guilds will arrange a tournament and bey-battle. Whichever Guild wins gets all the Legacy Stones (Legacy Stones are Stones that hold secret beyblade combat techniques. They are very rare) of the Losing Guild. Or, the Guilds who are fighting can decide the stake. For example, if a Guild loses, the thing that must be given to the Winner Guild, which will be decided BEFORE the War starts.
Also, they are Dungeons, Quests, etc that are given to bladers which if they complete are given prizes which can improve their power in beyblade.
And, as the Prolouge is already uploaded, Chapter #1 will be posted on April 12th, in three days (this is a estimate.)
Any questions about Dungeons, Tournaments, Guilds, please ask me.
BRO THAT LEGITE IS THE GREATEST THING EVER TO COME TO BEYBLADE NO JOKE THAT IS SO SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no problem cant wait for the first chapter
wait hold up isnt that tommorow
Wow! Nice fanfic, Ryuga's Son !
(Apr. 11, 2021 6:22 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: wait hold up isnt that tommorow
Yes it is
(Apr. 11, 2021 3:57 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Wow! Nice fanfic, Ryuga's Son !
Thank you! Have you read the prolouge?
(Apr. 11, 2021 4:03 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:(Apr. 11, 2021 6:22 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: wait hold up isnt that tommorow
Yes it is
(Apr. 11, 2021 3:57 PM)NamanSpryzen Wrote: Wow! Nice fanfic, Ryuga's Son !
Thank you! Have you read the prolouge?
Legacy of Lui? Yeah!
Battle For the First Precipice! Theseus Vs Ryujin!
“Tsukuyomi Rajiin!”
Rajiin raced around the stadium, gaining in speed.
It carved green lines in the stadium as it went around the stadium.
Theseus was building more and more control over his bey, finding out all the secrets he needed to know.
Rajiin started wobbling with power, unable to control it. The inability to control it’s own power made it fling out of the stadium.
A Flash appeared, and a Man materialized.
“Who are you?! And how are you so fast?”, asked Theseus.
“I am Ryujin, the blader of the bey Ancalagon. I sensed power waving off your bey, but I didn’t realize that you’re a fool who hasn’t even mastered his own bey yet.”
Theseus was so surprised he didn't even look at Ryujin. Ryujin had a slim muscular body, with green eyes, greenish red hair, and on his hand he has a Beyblade Holster which is shaped like a Red Dragon looking upward. Ryujin wore a red cloak, with the insignia of a dragon in the middle. The Dragon was soaring in the Sky, devouring the Sun.
Theseus had seen the insignia before. It was the symbol of the Great Superior Guild Dragonwarriors. The Dragon Warriors were a fierce Guild, known to succeed in almost every challenge they took. They had annihilated 5 Superpower Guilds within a day, rising up to the Level of a Great Superior Guild. This man looked like the Famous Guild Leader of the Dragonwarriors Guild.
“How dare you insult me?!”, demanded Theseus.
No matter who he was, Guild Leader or not, he would not let anyone destroy his pride. He would work harder than any, and defeat Lane, becoming the Greatest Blader, the World Champion.
“Because, you are a pathetic blader, who has no knowledge or wisdom on how to control his bey. And, I’m the Guild Leader of the Great Superior Guild Dragonwarriors.”, said Ryujin coyly.
“If you think so highly of yourself, why don’t you battle me?”, asked Theseus, straightening his body.
Theseus was a natural beyblade expert, just that he didn’t have much control over his new bey. His talent mixed in with hard work would eventually bring greatness. That was what Theseus believed in his heart.
“I don’t have time to battle with weaklings. My Ancalagon will burst your bey and will tear your dreams to threads. And, it’s not your position to challenge Guild Leaders.,” sneered Ryujin.
“If you have the guts to battle me, then do it. Are you a coward?”
“You- Scum! I accept your challenge! Let’s see what you got!”
“Let’s battle in the Bey Park.”, said Theseus, firmly.
“I’ll meet you there in two hours,” replied Ryujin, with a twisted look of hatred on his face
Two Hours Later
“Today’s match! Theseus Kurasame challenges Guild Leader Ryujin Drakaz!”, announced the Bey Park Manager.
“How dare he challenge Guild Leader Ryujin! I should take your place, Guild Leader and teach him a lesson!”, muttered the Vice Guild Leader of Dragonwarriors.
The Crowd muttered, following with suspicions. Ordinary Bladers never challenged Guild Leaders.
Ryujin, ignoring his Vice Guild Leader, stepped down to the stadium. Theseus was already at the stadium, ready.
“Three…. Two… One…. Go Shoot!”
The two beys topped into the stadium, sending sparks across the perimeter.
“Ancalagon! Spread your wings, soar high!”, yelled Ryujin, seeking to deliver his attack.
“Here comes the Dragonwarriors’ Guild Leader’s Lance Attack!”, said Akiharu, the Expert from the Fallen Angels’ Guild. (Side Note: Akhiharu is @PinkRose’s OC.)
Ancalagon bounced from the stadium as it reached into the air.
“Go now! Lance Attack!”
Ancalagon’s avatar sprouted, a huge red dragon. It lanced on Rajiin, making a traumatic explosion.
“Huh. This attack is truly fearsome. This ordinary brat stands no chance,” sighed Fire Dance, a member of the Superpower Guild Infinite Star.
“Rajiin! Tsukuyomi Blade!”, yelled Theseus, withstanding the shaking power of the Lance Attack.
Rajiin, the Thunder God’s avatar raised, with a blade which shined like the reflective light the Moon got from the Sun.
The Sword smashed into Ancalagon, resisting the attack.
“What?! This guy sure is an expert. Delivering such an attack and withstanding my Famous Lance Attack is no ordinary feat. Well, sadly, it’s NOT ENOUGH!”, yelled Ryujin, a crooked smile on his face.
Ancalagon suddenly switched modes, it’s speed increasing, and increasing by every second.
“What’s happening?”
“What?!”
“This is just heaven-defying power!”
The crowd muttered several questions. Such a technique was impossible to find.
“He must have learned it from a Beyblade Technique Legacy Stone!”, said Atlas (Note: 6Jupiter5’s OC), surprised.
“Secret Mana Art: Tearing Twister!”, said Ryujin.
Ancalagon clouded itself with a cold dark aura, which used the mana to create a twister.
“This is the End of the Battle!”
“Rajiin! Special Move: Tsukuyomi Tidal Barrage!”
Rajiin wobbled, trying to control it’s power, but was unable to do so.
“How sad. You’re bey couldn’t help you when you needed it most.”, grinned Ryujin.
The twister spun, twisting Rajiin and throwing it out of stadium.
Rajiin landed outside the stadium with a BUMP.
End of Chapter
PinkRose
6Jupiter5
First Chapter Finished!
“Tsukuyomi Rajiin!”
Rajiin raced around the stadium, gaining in speed.
It carved green lines in the stadium as it went around the stadium.
Theseus was building more and more control over his bey, finding out all the secrets he needed to know.
Rajiin started wobbling with power, unable to control it. The inability to control it’s own power made it fling out of the stadium.
A Flash appeared, and a Man materialized.
“Who are you?! And how are you so fast?”, asked Theseus.
“I am Ryujin, the blader of the bey Ancalagon. I sensed power waving off your bey, but I didn’t realize that you’re a fool who hasn’t even mastered his own bey yet.”
Theseus was so surprised he didn't even look at Ryujin. Ryujin had a slim muscular body, with green eyes, greenish red hair, and on his hand he has a Beyblade Holster which is shaped like a Red Dragon looking upward. Ryujin wore a red cloak, with the insignia of a dragon in the middle. The Dragon was soaring in the Sky, devouring the Sun.
Theseus had seen the insignia before. It was the symbol of the Great Superior Guild Dragonwarriors. The Dragon Warriors were a fierce Guild, known to succeed in almost every challenge they took. They had annihilated 5 Superpower Guilds within a day, rising up to the Level of a Great Superior Guild. This man looked like the Famous Guild Leader of the Dragonwarriors Guild.
“How dare you insult me?!”, demanded Theseus.
No matter who he was, Guild Leader or not, he would not let anyone destroy his pride. He would work harder than any, and defeat Lane, becoming the Greatest Blader, the World Champion.
“Because, you are a pathetic blader, who has no knowledge or wisdom on how to control his bey. And, I’m the Guild Leader of the Great Superior Guild Dragonwarriors.”, said Ryujin coyly.
“If you think so highly of yourself, why don’t you battle me?”, asked Theseus, straightening his body.
Theseus was a natural beyblade expert, just that he didn’t have much control over his new bey. His talent mixed in with hard work would eventually bring greatness. That was what Theseus believed in his heart.
“I don’t have time to battle with weaklings. My Ancalagon will burst your bey and will tear your dreams to threads. And, it’s not your position to challenge Guild Leaders.,” sneered Ryujin.
“If you have the guts to battle me, then do it. Are you a coward?”
“You- Scum! I accept your challenge! Let’s see what you got!”
“Let’s battle in the Bey Park.”, said Theseus, firmly.
“I’ll meet you there in two hours,” replied Ryujin, with a twisted look of hatred on his face
Two Hours Later
“Today’s match! Theseus Kurasame challenges Guild Leader Ryujin Drakaz!”, announced the Bey Park Manager.
“How dare he challenge Guild Leader Ryujin! I should take your place, Guild Leader and teach him a lesson!”, muttered the Vice Guild Leader of Dragonwarriors.
The Crowd muttered, following with suspicions. Ordinary Bladers never challenged Guild Leaders.
Ryujin, ignoring his Vice Guild Leader, stepped down to the stadium. Theseus was already at the stadium, ready.
“Three…. Two… One…. Go Shoot!”
The two beys topped into the stadium, sending sparks across the perimeter.
“Ancalagon! Spread your wings, soar high!”, yelled Ryujin, seeking to deliver his attack.
“Here comes the Dragonwarriors’ Guild Leader’s Lance Attack!”, said Akiharu, the Expert from the Fallen Angels’ Guild. (Side Note: Akhiharu is @PinkRose’s OC.)
Ancalagon bounced from the stadium as it reached into the air.
“Go now! Lance Attack!”
Ancalagon’s avatar sprouted, a huge red dragon. It lanced on Rajiin, making a traumatic explosion.
“Huh. This attack is truly fearsome. This ordinary brat stands no chance,” sighed Fire Dance, a member of the Superpower Guild Infinite Star.
“Rajiin! Tsukuyomi Blade!”, yelled Theseus, withstanding the shaking power of the Lance Attack.
Rajiin, the Thunder God’s avatar raised, with a blade which shined like the reflective light the Moon got from the Sun.
The Sword smashed into Ancalagon, resisting the attack.
“What?! This guy sure is an expert. Delivering such an attack and withstanding my Famous Lance Attack is no ordinary feat. Well, sadly, it’s NOT ENOUGH!”, yelled Ryujin, a crooked smile on his face.
Ancalagon suddenly switched modes, it’s speed increasing, and increasing by every second.
“What’s happening?”
“What?!”
“This is just heaven-defying power!”
The crowd muttered several questions. Such a technique was impossible to find.
“He must have learned it from a Beyblade Technique Legacy Stone!”, said Atlas (Note: 6Jupiter5’s OC), surprised.
“Secret Mana Art: Tearing Twister!”, said Ryujin.
Ancalagon clouded itself with a cold dark aura, which used the mana to create a twister.
“This is the End of the Battle!”
“Rajiin! Special Move: Tsukuyomi Tidal Barrage!”
Rajiin wobbled, trying to control it’s power, but was unable to do so.
“How sad. You’re bey couldn’t help you when you needed it most.”, grinned Ryujin.
The twister spun, twisting Rajiin and throwing it out of stadium.
Rajiin landed outside the stadium with a BUMP.
End of Chapter
PinkRose
6Jupiter5
First Chapter Finished!
Hm, nice. I'd say this is actually much better than the prologue, and hey, Aki makes a cameo which is kewl.
Theseus seems to be the classic agressive hotheaded character, but he's not quite as idiotic, cheers.
I'm not exactly focused enough to give out a more detailed review of this but it's fairly decent. I'd give it a 7.9/10.
Theseus seems to be the classic agressive hotheaded character, but he's not quite as idiotic, cheers.
I'm not exactly focused enough to give out a more detailed review of this but it's fairly decent. I'd give it a 7.9/10.
i love it so good
(Apr. 12, 2021 11:13 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Hm, nice. I'd say this is actually much better than the prologue, and hey, Aki makes a cameo which is kewl.
Theseus seems to be the classic agressive hotheaded character, but he's not quite as idiotic, cheers.
I'm not exactly focused enough to give out a more detailed review of this but it's fairly decent. I'd give it a 7.9/10.
1. This is Aki's first apperance, and a little spoiler would be that Aki will become a huge friend of Theseus as the story progresses.
2. Any Suggestions? Mistakes that I made? Ways I can make it better?
(Apr. 12, 2021 11:31 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: i love it so good
I noted that you say something like this for every chapter
thats cause its really good
Next Episode is: Eclipse Vishnu and Shiva the Destroyer: Apex Experts Appear!
Chapter Summary:
Chapter Summary:
Spoiler (Click to View)
3, 2, 1, Goooo-o Shoot!
He - her- here- here we go, it's a new way to blade
Th-th-th-this is Beyblade,
Pure heart, strong mind, combining to make the Champion,
The one, the one and only Champion.
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you get surpassed,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
It's the future letting go of the past, invaders, new Legacies
New generation of Legends,
We're stronger, and smarter,
Combine Beys and reach new heights!
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you fall,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
Running through the plan,
Knock ya off balance,
Dominate, obliterate,
Your next challenge.
I'm defeated, but reborn
The Champion, The Legend of all Legends
When the battles won, y'gonna want a rematch!
Let it Rip!
The one, and only power!
PinkRose
i'm batman
Pixi
Do you guys like this theme song?
He - her- here- here we go, it's a new way to blade
Th-th-th-this is Beyblade,
Pure heart, strong mind, combining to make the Champion,
The one, the one and only Champion.
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you get surpassed,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
It's the future letting go of the past, invaders, new Legacies
New generation of Legends,
We're stronger, and smarter,
Combine Beys and reach new heights!
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you fall,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
Running through the plan,
Knock ya off balance,
Dominate, obliterate,
Your next challenge.
I'm defeated, but reborn
The Champion, The Legend of all Legends
When the battles won, y'gonna want a rematch!
Let it Rip!
The one, and only power!
PinkRose
i'm batman
Pixi
Do you guys like this theme song?
(Apr. 14, 2021 6:49 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 3, 2, 1, Goooo-o Shoot!
He - her- here- here we go, it's a new way to blade
Th-th-th-this is Beyblade,
Pure heart, strong mind, combining to make the Champion,
The one, the one and only Champion.
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you get surpassed,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
It's the future letting go of the past, invaders, new Legacies
New generation of Legends,
We're stronger, and smarter,
Combine Beys and reach new heights!
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you fall,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
Running through the plan,
Knock ya off balance,
Dominate, obliterate,
Your next challenge.
I'm defeated, but reborn
The Champion, The Legend of all Legends
When the battles won, y'gonna want a rematch!
Let it Rip!
The one, and only power!
PinkRose
i'm batman
Pixi
Do you guys like this theme song?
looks official for some reason
Am I just dumb or is it impossible to sing this thing rhythmically?
Spoiler (Click to View)
(Apr. 14, 2021 7:16 PM)Pixi Wrote:(Apr. 14, 2021 6:49 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 3, 2, 1, Goooo-o Shoot!
He - her- here- here we go, it's a new way to blade
Th-th-th-this is Beyblade,
Pure heart, strong mind, combining to make the Champion,
The one, the one and only Champion.
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you get surpassed,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
It's the future letting go of the past, invaders, new Legacies
New generation of Legends,
We're stronger, and smarter,
Combine Beys and reach new heights!
Spin, spin, spinning on the top,
Spin, spin, spin 'til you fall,
Let it Rip!
Warfare!
Running through the plan,
Knock ya off balance,
Dominate, obliterate,
Your next challenge.
I'm defeated, but reborn
The Champion, The Legend of all Legends
When the battles won, y'gonna want a rematch!
Let it Rip!
The one, and only power!
PinkRose
i'm batman
Pixi
Do you guys like this theme song?
looks official for some reason
(Apr. 14, 2021 7:22 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Am I just dumb or is it impossible to sing this thing rhythmically?
Is it good or not?
Yeah, sounds pretty catchy which is kewl.
sounds like an official theme song to me
which must mean its 10/10
which must mean its 10/10