[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Sparking Fury (Tag Team League) (Cancelled until further notice)

(Nov. 20, 2020  3:25 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:24 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: Ranjiro and Rantaro.
Kensuke and Daina.
Xhan and Wakiya.
Lui and Zach.

ok.
but why lui and zac?

IDK, I was just trying to group Burst characters together, do you know who would work well with Lui and Zach?
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:26 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:25 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: ok.
but why lui and zac?

IDK, I was just trying to group Burst characters together, do you know who would work well with Lui and Zach?

eh fine.
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:26 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:26 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: IDK, I was just trying to group Burst characters together, do you know who would work well with Lui and Zach?

eh fine.

You don't have to do it if you don't want to, it's YOUR fanfic after all, I was just suggesting...
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:28 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:26 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: eh fine.

You don't have to do it if you don't want to, it's YOUR fanfic after all, I was just suggesting...

Guess they work. It would be funny enough if hander and Xhan worked together lol
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:28 AM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 20, 2020  3:28 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: You don't have to do it if you don't want to, it's YOUR fanfic after all, I was just suggesting...

Guess they work. It would be funny enough if hander and Xhan worked together lol

Yeah...
I think this time I wanna make Hikaru and Hyuga be partners
I will be holding a bey contest for a new antagonist:
Rules for the contest:
Deadline is November 30.
Beys have to be specific (not just the name but fully detailed)
The bey can be part of the Limit Break System.
6Jupiter5- Nova Oni Blitz Speed' 6D
beykid44- Piplup Ember Muteki Xtendt
Nova Oni 6D blitz Speed’

Nova: features a free spinning ring with 6 protrusions. This ring can go up like Jinnius (after 6 rotations) and reveal a deadly double sided axe.

Oni: standard Left spin superking chip, nothing out of the ordinary

6D: a rubber chassis that is meant to absorb attacks

Speed’: has a shape like Xceed, but the tip is more pointed, much like rubber defense from death quetzalcoatl (even has the same gimmick)

Weakness: speed’ is a short driver making it prone to scraping.
(Nov. 21, 2020  12:47 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Nova Oni 6D blitz Speed’

Nova: features a free spinning ring with 6 protrusions. This ring can go up like Jinnius (after 6 rotations) and reveal a deadly double sided axe.

Oni: standard Left spin superking chip, nothing out of the ordinary

6D: a rubber chassis that is meant to absorb attacks

Speed’: has a shape like Xceed, but the tip is more pointed, much like rubber defense from death quetzalcoatl (even has the same gimmick)

Weakness: speed’ is a short driver making it prone to scraping.

ok your entered
(Nov. 21, 2020  5:49 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

Piplup Ember limit break system
Muteki like the other limit break disk but you can change when it activates
Xtend Ultra plus like xtend plus but you have metal plate rubber plate orplastic
Limit break ember ember strike and xtend counter ill add more moves later
Weakness:when in rubber mode it doesnt have alot of stamina in metal mode the lesser friction makes i more kockout prone

why u leave?
Tag partners (1st wave)
Valt and Shu
Aiga and Ranjiro
2nd group of bladers
Rantaro and Sisco
Free and Lui
Order in legend bladers arc:
Valt
Rantaro
Ranjiro
Sisco
Free
Lui
Drum
Delta
Aiga
Shu
Wakiya
Daina
Zac
Xander
Gwyn
Phi
I can see Ranjiro and Drum being tag partners
(Nov. 23, 2020  8:48 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote: Lui and Free

lol
Tag Team Partners:
Hikaru and Hyuga
Aiga and Ranjiro
Rantaro and Sisco
Drum and Lui
Free and Phi
Dojen and Xhan
Xavier and Zac
Shu and Valt
Lane and Dax
Arthur and Akira
Gywn and Delta
Mark and Francecso
Wakiya and Daina
Boa and Kurt
Bradley and Ghasem
Wataru and Dante
Ginji and KIt
Suoh and Ben
Jin and Kensuke
Norman and Cuza
Your story is really bad the only way you can make it good is (EarthHelios you know what I’m talking about.) to make the main antagonists Rantaro,Ranjiro,Amane,Joshua Burns,and Harry.
(Nov. 24, 2020  3:57 PM)Gurjaan Wrote: Your story is really bad the only way you can make it good is (EarthHelios you know what I’m talking about.) to make the main antagonists Rantaro,Ranjiro,Amane,Joshua Burns,and Harry.

Rantaro and Ranjiro are representations of light.
(Nov. 20, 2020  7:15 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I will be holding a bey contest for a new antagonist:
Rules for the contest:
Deadline is November 30.
Beys have to be specific (not just the name but fully detailed)
The bey can be part of the Limit Break System.
6Jupiter5- Nova Oni Blitz Speed' 6D
beykid44- Piplup Ember Muteki Xtendt

Just in case you didn't get the PM with my entry, I'm posting it here.

Character and Beyblade Request


Character - Raina Reinhart

Raina Reinhart is a 15-year-old girl who is an extremely powerful Beyblader. When she turned 11, she was given a Beyblade as a gift, Heaven Dragon Hurricane Rise Gen. She would battle the other kids at her school and would usually win. But one day, the school bullies challenged her to a battle. Raina accepted, but they completely overpowered and outnumbered her. They destroyed Heaven Dragon, which left Raina heartbroken. After that event, Raina became obsessed with getting revenge. She tried many times to fix Dragon but failed every time. She then attempted to build her own Bey and succeded, creating Pirate Ridley. Raina rematched the bullies her destroyed her previous Bey. During the battle, Raina was so engulfed by anger and hatred, Ridley's spirit possessed her, destroyed the opponent's Beys and consumed the spirits inside them, becoming more powerful with each Bey it consumes. Over the past 4 years, Raina has travelled the world, destroying more Beys and letting Ridley become more powerful. Ridley only possesses her during battles, when things start to get intense. But the more powerful Ridley becomes, the more control it has over Raina.

Beyblade - Pirate Ridley 3A Quick'

Ridley - Ridley's Chip depicts a purple dragon that has yellow eyes. The dragon is made of metal.

Pirate - Pirate is similar to Rage except it has 2 modes: Absorb Mode and Strike Mode. In Absorb Mode, Pirate has 2 green rubber blades, which act as shock absorbers and can spin steal. In Strike Mode, Pirate has 4 metal blades which provide immense weight and attack power. Pirate is purple and black.

3A - Regular 3A, but it's trans-green.

Quick' - Regular Quick', but it's purple and the rubber is green.

Special Moves:

Dragon Launch - Raina holds her launcher high above her head. As the Bladers shout "Go Shoot!", She slams it downwards at an angle, and when Ridley lands in the Beystadium, it will rush to the centre and hit the opponent, almost always KOing them instantly.

Pirate Boost - Using the rubber on Pirate, Ridley slightly spin steals the opponent and gains a speed boost. Can only be used when Pirate is in Absorb mode

Dragon Skewer - Ridley rushes to the centre of the Beystadium, aligns itself with the opponent and charges into them, forcing them against the wall of the stadium. Ridley then travels around the edge of the stadium, taking the opponent along with it, scraping them against the wall and dealing massive damage with its metal blades. Can only be used when Pirate is in Strike Mode.

Ultimate Move:

Pirate Rush - Raina only uses this move when she is possessed by Ridley. Ridley rushes straight across the Beystadium towards the opponent and collides with an impact so hard, its almost always a Burst Finish. Sometimes Ridley will slice the opponent completely in half when colliding with them. If there are other opponents in the way, Ridley will plough through them and continue until it hits its target.

Other:

Ridley's Avatar is a purple winged dragon with yellow eyes.

Ridley's aura is purple.

Raina has purple hair with a green streak and green eyes.

Raina's Launcher is a purple and green Left-Spin Sparking String Launcher attached to a black and purple grip.

When Raina is possessed by Ridley, her eyes glow yellow and her voice becomes demonic. The aura she emits while possessed is purple.

Weaknesses:

Despite being an extremely aggressive Attack-Type Beyblade, Pirate Ridley has very poor stamina and relies on KOing, Bursting or even completely destroying the opponent as quickly as possible.

After being possessed by Ridley, Raina becomes weak and tired.

Raina is also a Shu fangirl lol.

My character!
Kai Shirosaki
Kai had his bey gift from shu named lord spryzen destryoed Determined to defeat valt and get revenge he created
Solomon Kanata Muteki Power2: they share a true bond no dark bonds at all (if it breaks pls make him evil) He promised to valt and shu he would win battles
the bey is also golden
Muteki breaker: like z breaker
Kanata Shoot basically he moves around then rides on the rubber of the power2 driver
Muteki Switch: a mode change on the muteki disk which changes when limit break activates
Power counter it gets a speed boost by riding on the edge of the power2 driver

限界突破:カナタ Limit break: kanata is when the bey does a bound attack
Dabururimittobureiku: Kanata double limit break kanata is its second form which makes a small tornado movement almost alway accidentally breaking the beyblade
Muteki boost Kai holds his luacher at at an angle then twists it almost always breaks the laucher

Weaknesses: some of his moves back fire to the point where he almost died lo