[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Sonic Clash

(Jul. 13, 2021  9:29 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Sonic boom! Attempt at greatness!

Episode 3 is done : )

Great chapter, but there are some grammar mistakes
(Jul. 13, 2021  9:29 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Sonic boom! Attempt at greatness!

Episode 3 is done : )
Great Episode!
Since I'm bored episode 4 will release later today sometime in the next 1-3 hours
(Jul. 14, 2021  8:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Since I'm bored episode 4 will release later today sometime in the next 1-3 hours

cool beans!
(Jul. 14, 2021  8:39 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Since I'm bored episode 4 will release later today sometime in the next 1-3 hours

I'll check it out
Episode 4: The Belial Cup!

(Jul. 14, 2021  9:27 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 4: The Belial Cup!


This chapter was really good but you could've slowed down and went more into detail and you also could've made the episode a bit longer
(Jul. 14, 2021  9:27 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 4: The Belial Cup!

Nice chapter but, you're using would is not the correct word.
Episode 5: Sword & Shield, Prince Achilles!
(Yes I did change the title of episode 5)


Upcoming Chapter directory
Episode 6 will release soon next hour or so

Episode 6: The epic dragon Ghoul Fafnir!

UnseenBurst @'BladeKingX' Kiryu Kazuma thoughts on the last 2 chapters?
(Jul. 16, 2021  8:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 6 will release soon next hour or so

Episode 6: The epic dragon Ghoul Fafnir!

UnseenBurst @'BladeKingX' Kiryu Kazuma thoughts on the last 2 chapters?

my thoughts on the last two chapters: the action in chapter 6 was awesome, you could've made the battle a bit longer (but it could just be me) and in chapter 5, the only issue i saw was also the length, your grammar is much, MUCH better than mine, great job on that! so to conclude, your chapters are awesome, just gonna work on the length of the battles, then ur good!

edit: now that i look at it (again) ur length is pretty decent in chapter 5
(Jul. 16, 2021  8:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 6 will release soon next hour or so

Episode 6: The epic dragon Ghoul Fafnir!

UnseenBurst @'BladeKingX' Kiryu Kazuma thoughts on the last 2 chapters?

Both were great
After a 4 day mini-Hiatuse, chapter 7 will release later today!
(Jul. 20, 2021  6:15 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: After a 4 day mini-Hiatuse, chapter 6 will release later today!

nice!
Episode 7: Sonic Strike! Lightning Xcalibur!
(Jul. 20, 2021  7:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 7: Sonic Strike! Lightning Xcalibur!

Pretty good episode!
Great chapter!
(Jul. 20, 2021  7:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 7: Sonic Strike! Lightning Xcalibur!
I found some grammar errors here and there but either way, nice chapter!
Episode 8 will release later today!!!!
(Jul. 22, 2021  6:43 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 8 will release later today!!!!

cool beans!
(Jul. 22, 2021  6:43 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 8 will release later today!!!!

Cool!
Episode 8: Journey to the top!
(Jul. 22, 2021  7:43 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 8: Journey to the top!

nice chapter!

(Jul. 22, 2021  7:54 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 22, 2021  7:43 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 8: Journey to the top!

nice chapter!
i thought fiona was gonna lose for a sec until the slo mo burst
(Jul. 22, 2021  7:43 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Episode 8: Journey to the top!

Awesome chapter!
Great c hapter!!