[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Legends




episode links
Episode 1a https://www.wattpad.com/983352328-beybla...resh-start
Episode 1b https://www.wattpad.com/983356061-beybla...-unrivaled
Episode 2a https://www.wattpad.com/983358881-beybla...s%27-wrath
Episode 2b https://www.wattpad.com/983362849-beybla...27s-shield
Episode 3a https://www.wattpad.com/988337460-beybla...ic-battles
Episode 3b https://www.wattpad.com/988339674-beybla...s-vs-midas
Episode 4a https://www.wattpad.com/992468965-beybla...-and-death
Episode 4b https://www.wattpad.com/992829281-beybla...through-to
Episode 5a https://www.wattpad.com/994256108-beybla...-nightmare
Episode 5b https://www.wattpad.com/994761110-beybla...f-the-seas
Episode 6a https://www.wattpad.com/998081157-beybla...us-vs-ares
Episode 6b https://www.wattpad.com/1053208940-beybl...-resonance

Blader rankings ( keep in mind this takes place 10 years after sparking so a lot can happen)
1. Valt Aoi ( Beam Valkyrie)
2. Shu Kurenai ( Apex Spriggan)
3. Xander Shakadera ( Impulse Xcalibur )
4. Aiga Akaba ( Dual Achilles)
5. Free De la hoya ( Absorb Fafnir)
6. Lui Shirosagi ( Scale Longinus)
7. Sisco Karlisle ( Guard Satan)
8. Wakiya Murasaki ( Flow Wyvern)
9. Ken Midori ( Beast Kerbeus )
10. Daigo Kurogami ( Soul Deathscyther)
11. Hyuga Asahi ( Shine Hyperion)
12. Hikaru Asahi ( Ray Helios)
13. Lane valhalla (Null Lucifer)
14. Phi (Resurrect Phoenix)
15. Rantaro Kiyama ( Eternal Ragnarok)

Beys
Warrior Ares
Medallion Eros
Beam Valkyrie
Apex Spriggan
Dual Achilles
Eternal Ragnarok
Guard Satan
Flow Wyvern
Impulse Xcalibur
Ray Helios
Shine Hyperion
Soul Deathscyther
Shield Athena
Underworld Osiris
Gravity Titanus
Cryptic Amaterios
Wall Orichalcum
Clash Dragon
Resurrect Phoenix
Null Lucifer
Absorb Fafnir
Scale Longinus
Beast Kerbeus
Gold Midas
Strider Leviathan
Unholy Claymore
New characters ( so far)
Eijirou Takahashi ( Medallion Eros ) ( Main Character)
Aiko Suzuki ( Shield Athena) ( Deuteragonist )
Akihito Suzuki ( Warrior Ares ) ( Tritagonist)
Tsukiya Aizawa ( Gravity Titanus ) ( Main Rival/ Deuteragonist)
Manobu Sato (Gold Midas) ( Secondary antagonist)
Lee Yamamoto (Strider Leviathan) (Main antagonist for 1st arc)
Hayato Nakamura (Strike Horus) (Tritagonist)
Okakura Akiyama (Underworld Osiris)
Orion Amari (Wall Orichalcum) (???)
A???? ????   ( Cryptic Amaterios)

https://i.postimg.cc/WzXK0wKJ/63999720-B...3768-E.png ( url for the logo made by sab)
new characters sound strong especially both of the suzuki characters
yeah I decided to keep the early rivals relevant and strong and make sure they're not test dummies

(Oct. 10, 2020  4:23 AM)Leone81506 Wrote: new characters sound strong especially both of the suzuki characters

Chapter 1 ( Fresh start, Beigoma Academy) teaser 1:
Ejirou: Who's that guy?
Tsukiya: That's Akihito Suzuki, 5 time district champion and captain of the Beigoma Academy Beyclub!
Ejirou: well, looks like this district is getting a new champion!
Tsukiya: me!
Ejirou: it's on

Episode 1 ( Fresh Start Beigoma Academy) coming next week

Chapter 1 ( Fresh start, Beigoma Academy!) teaser 2:
Ejirou: Keep attacking It Eros!
Akihito: don't let it escape Ares!
Ejirou: Eros, MEDALLION BARRAGE!
Akihito: DESTROY IT ARES! IMPALING BLOW!
Huge explosion happens in the beigoma academy stadium.

Ejirou and Akihito at the same time: HUH!

Episode 1 ( Fresh Start Beigoma Academy) coming next week
more new characters and more new beys
Vidyut Khatri: Order Vishnu
Axel Helvig: Fang Abrasax

Here's how the system works

Legend Ring: basically the same thing like a sparking ring and layer base and has one-third of the teeth on it, it also contains the main gimmick. ( for example valkyrie's gimmick: When the bey lets out 3 hard strikes the 3 spring loaded wings will pop out dealing extra damage).

Legend Chip: Same thing as a gt chip and sparking chip except there's no hole in the center and its mostly design and it also contains one-third of the teeth on it.

Legend Core: The core is plastic ring like piece containing the final part of the layer and teeth and it has a little bit of metal on it.

Disc: Its a new kind of disc that snaps onto the legend core and works like a combination of a double chassis and a normal disc.( it's still completely metal).

Driver: Just a normal Driver.
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:19 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: more new characters and more new beys
Vidyut Khatri: Order Vishnu
  Axel Helvig: Fang Abrasax

Here's how the system works

Legend Ring: basically the same thing like a sparking ring and layer base and has one-third of the teeth on it, it also contains the main gimmick. ( for example valkyrie's gimmick: When the bey lets out 3 hard strikes the 3 spring loaded wings will pop out dealing extra damage).

Legend Chip: Same thing as a gt chip and sparking chip except there's no hole in the center and its mostly design and it also contains one-third of the teeth on it.

Legend Core: The core is plastic ring like piece containing the final part of the layer and teeth and it has a little bit of metal on it.

Disc: Its a new kind of disc that snaps onto the legend core and works like a combination of a double chassis an normal disc.( it's still  completely metal).

Driver: Just a normal Driver.

Amazing!
you should make
Name - Raion Tsume
Age: 13
Height: 6' 2"
weight: 132-136
Gender: Male
race: white
eye color: blue green
hair color: dirty blond
hair length: a half inch on the sides a inch on the top
hair style: combed over and flipped up
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: loud, destructive and brave
Beys:
Flame Leo Claw 3 strike
gt chip: (leo) it represents a lion
layer weight: (strike) it is sen
base layer: (flame) like the shape of god valkyrie but the blades are metal and not spring loaded
forge disk: (claw) it is the 12 disk but it has 3 of the big blades and 3 of the small blades and the big blades are rubber and spring loaded
driver: (3) it has a ball with a * (star) at the bottom to make it a sharp tip kind of like the edge driver but as * (star) and it is metal
Here are some examples of the parts

Medallion Eros
Legend ring: Medallion
Legend chip: Eros
Legend Core: Accelerate
Disc: singe
Driver: Smackdown

Warrior Ares
Legend ring: Warrior
Legend chip: Ares
Legend Core: Swift
Disc: Booster
Driver: Xtend Metal

Gravity Titanus
Legend ring: Gravity
Legend Chip Titanus:
Legend Core: Counter
Disc: Shadow
Driver: Yard Metal

guess i'll try try getting this to work with the new system

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(Oct. 13, 2020  2:34 AM)Leone81506 Wrote: you should make
Name - Raion Tsume
Age: 13
Height: 6' 2"
weight: 132-136
Gender: Male
race: white
eye color: blue green
hair color: dirty blond
hair length: a half inch on the sides a inch on the top
hair style: combed over and flipped up
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: loud, destructive and brave
Beys:
Flame Leo Claw 3 strike
gt chip: (leo) it represents a lion
layer weight: (strike) it is sen
base layer: (flame) like the shape of god valkyrie but the blades are metal and not spring loaded
forge disk: (claw) it is the 12 disk but it has 3 of the big blades and 3 of the small blades and the big blades are rubber and spring loaded
driver: (3) it has a ball with a * (star) at the bottom to make it a sharp tip kind of like the edge driver but as * (star) and it is metal
Can we request our own characters to be added
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:39 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Here are some examples of the parts

Medallion Eros
Legend ring: Medallion
Legend chip: Eros
Legend Core: Accelerate
Disc: singe
Driver: Smackdown

Warrior Ares
Legend ring: Warrior
Legend chip: Ares
Legend Core: Swift
Disc: Booster
Driver: Xtend Metal

Gravity Titanus
Legend ring: Gravity
Legend Chip Titanus:
Legend Core: Counter
Disc: Shadow
Driver: Yard Metal

guess i'll try try getting this to work with the new system

T
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:34 AM)Leone81506 Wrote: you should make
Name - Raion Tsume
Age: 13
Height: 6' 2"
weight: 132-136
Gender: Male
race: white
eye color: blue green
hair color: dirty blond
hair length: a half inch on the sides a inch on the top
hair style: combed over and flipped up
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: loud, destructive and brave
Beys:
Flame Leo Claw 3 strike
gt chip: (leo) it represents a lion
layer weight: (strike) it is sen
base layer: (flame) like the shape of god valkyrie but the blades are metal and not spring loaded
forge disk: (claw) it is the 12 disk but it has 3 of the big blades and 3 of the small blades and the big blades are rubber and spring loaded
driver: (3) it has a ball with a * (star) at the bottom to make it a sharp tip kind of like the edge driver but as * (star) and it is metal

that smackdown driver is insane-sounding!!!!!!!
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:48 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Can we request our own characters to be added

I was about to announce that I will take in character requests from October 12th to November 1st
By the way only 5 characters will be picked and Their beys should preferably work with the system
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:52 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:48 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Can we request our own characters to be added

I was about to announce that I will take in character requests from October 12th to November 1st
By the way only 5 characters will be picked and Their beys should preferably work with the system

Ok also the character I make doesn’t have to be like a main character if you don’t want him to be. I always thought this character might have his own side story. Everyone when I give this character on Reddit force him into a main character and I always tell them not to do it if the story doesnt work with him as a mc. So don’t feel pressured if I win to make this character a main character
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:55 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:52 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: I was about to announce that I will take in character requests from October 12th to November 1st
By the way only 5 characters will be picked and Their beys should preferably work with the system

Ok also the character I make doesn’t have to be like a main character if you don’t want him to be. I always thought this character might have his own side story. Everyone when I give this character on Reddit force him into a main character and I always tell them not to do it if the story doesnt work with him as a mc. So don’t feel pressured if I win to make this character a main character

post your characters bio here maximum 15 suggestions and 5 will be accepted.
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:00 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  2:55 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Ok also the character I make doesn’t have to be like a main character if you don’t want him to be. I always thought this character might have his own side story. Everyone when I give this character on Reddit force him into a main character and I always tell them not to do it if the story doesnt work with him as a mc. So don’t feel pressured if I win to make this character a main character

post your characters bio here maximum 15 suggestions and 5 will be accepted.

Ok I sent it to you in dms but I’ll also post it here
the winners have 4 episodes were they are major characters and they'll also be part of the wbc (world blading championship)
Origins:
It was a late night and two bladers were battling. One blader breaks the others bey in accident. But the owner of the bey dumps his bey and leaves it for dead. The bey fills with agony and hatred and rebuilds itself. This bey now seeks vengeance on the blader and bey that broke it and the owner that dumped him. This bey is named golden freddy. It’s new owner isn’t a real person though. The blader that uses golden Freddy now is just a projection made by golden freddy so he can move around and seek vengeance on the ones that wronged him.

Parts:

Golden: it’s a dual spin ring with metal contact points
Freddy: a dual spin chip with a metal center.
Vengeance: it’s shaped like 2A
Eternal: the disk is shaped and weighs as much as 00
Phantom: this driver pops out like bullet but has a different gimmick (this is golden freddys main gimmick btw) when phantom pops out it turns into a projection of golden Freddy named shadow Freddy that can attack the opponent. Shadow Freddy also has the same parts as golden Freddy.

Special moves:
Shadow clone: this is the move that activates phantom and makes shadow Freddy
It’s me: with this ability shadow Freddy (if activated) and golden Freddy will become 2x as powerful and the opponent will have hallucinations of the words “it’s me” and hallucinations of the spirits face.

These are ability’s I came up with you can add some more if you want too.

Names of the owner:
So since his new owner is just a projection by golden freddy. Golden Freddy can always come back with a new owner that looks, acts, and has a different name. Here’s some ideas of names I came up with and descriptions of them

Cassidy: a boy with blue eyes and black hair.
Andrew: A boy with curly black hair. Sometimes where’s a crocodile mask but always has a creepy demonic like smile.
Cassidy 2: a girl with long black hair but sometimes has pinktails.
Kelsey: a boy with blond hair. Doesn’t act really normal. Evaluates people and usually makes them uncomfortable.
Chris: a boy with brown and brown hair. Is a sweet child that talks to stuffed animals.
Person:
Name - Raion Tsume
Age: 13
Height: 6' 2"
weight: 132-136
Gender: Male
race: white
eye color: blue green
hair color: dirty blond
hair length: a half inch on the sides a inch on the top
hair style: combed over and flipped up
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: loud, destructive and brave

Beyblade:
Flame Leo Strike Claw 3
Legend ring: (flame) like the shape of god valkyrie but the blades are not Rubber and not spring loaded
Legend chip: (Leo) it represents a lion
Legend core: (strike) it is a heavy metal core for striking
forge disk: (claw) it is the 12 disk but it has 3 of the big blades and 3 of the small blades and the big blades are rubber and spring loaded
driver: (3) it has a ball with a * (star) at the bottom to make it a sharp tip kind of like the edge driver but as * (star) and the * (star) is metal and free spinning
Name: Shun kurenai
Sexuality:bisexual
Gender:female
Beys:universal maiden 4a xtend plus(broken) stardust maiden 7a xtend plus(current)
Siblings
Step brother Lane
Older brother shu
Little step brother gwynn
Boyfriend free de la hoya
Special moves:universal big bang,barrier scream,barrier defense,Stardust ignition,maidens time(freezes time),darkness upper.
Golden turbo:darkness turbo/stardust turbo
Debut:beyblade burst blazing redo chapter 1
Beyblade burst apocalypse chapter 3
wait are you entering a character for the contest or are you advertising your fanfic?
(Oct. 13, 2020  12:35 PM)kai edits Wrote: Name: Shun kurenai
Sexuality:bisexual
Gender:female
Beys:universal maiden 4a xtend plus(broken) stardust maiden 7a xtend plus(current)
Siblings
Step brother Lane
Older brother shu
Little step brother gwynn
Boyfriend free de la hoya
Special moves:universal big bang,barrier scream,barrier defense,Stardust ignition,maidens time(freezes time),darkness upper.
Golden turbo:darkness turbo/stardust turbo
Debut:beyblade burst blazing redo chapter 1
Beyblade burst apocalypse chapter 3
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:25 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: wait are you entering a character for the contest or are you advertising your fanfic?
(Oct. 13, 2020  12:35 PM)kai edits Wrote: Name: Shun kurenai
Sexuality:bisexual
Gender:female
Beys:universal maiden 4a xtend plus(broken) stardust maiden 7a xtend plus(current)
Siblings
Step brother Lane
Older brother shu
Little step brother gwynn
Boyfriend free de la hoya
Special moves:universal big bang,barrier scream,barrier defense,Stardust ignition,maidens time(freezes time),darkness upper.
Golden turbo:darkness turbo/stardust turbo
Debut:beyblade burst blazing redo chapter 1
Beyblade burst  apocalypse chapter 3

Joining the contest
good
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:37 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:25 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: wait are you entering a character for the contest or are you advertising your fanfic?

Joining the contest
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Shun Kurenai needs to be nerfed

Nope she is balanced
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:53 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 13, 2020  3:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Shun Kurenai needs to be nerfed

Nope she is balanced

Time stop? I think not.
She has a time limit similar to dio brando ZA warduo
alright here are all the episodes in arc 1 ( district tournament) keep in mind there are 4 arcs and this only the first

Ep 1a Fresh start, Beigoma Academy!
Ep 1b Unrivaled! Warrior Ares!

Ep 2a Titanus's Wrath
Ep 2b Athena's Shield

Ep 3a Epic Battles! District Tournament!
Ep 3b Eros vs Midas

Ep 4a Life and Death, Requiem Maiden!
Ep 4b Power through! To the Semi-Finals!

Ep 5a Living Nightmare, Lee Yamamoto.
Ep 5b King of The Seas, Strider Leviathan!

Ep 6a Titanus vs Ares
Ep 6b Dark Resonance

Ep 7a Demon vs Angel, Eros vs Titanus!
Ep 7b Final Battle, New Champion*

Thoughts?




* district champion*