[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst: Kiwami!
awesome! cant wait to read!
I forgot to mention one thing, Ichiban uses Valt's Sparking/DB shoot form. (But changed it in this chapter)
Shin is coming! Yay! Also good on Ichiban for getting his own shoot form.
(Aug. 13, 2021 4:00 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Ultimate Balance type....
LegendJustice why dragon is balance tyor?
I guess he can make Dragon a balance type. (There are so many attack type beys already though)
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:09 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:(Aug. 13, 2021 4:00 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Ultimate Balance type....
LegendJustice why dragon is balance tyor?
I guess he can make Dragon a balance type. (There are so many attack type beys already though)
true true
nice one on your end LJ
mixing it up!
Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
I can't wait for the next episode!
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 13, 2021 5:15 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Awesome chapter
Valkyrie reading this be like: I have a son?
Icarus: Yes father.
It would be mother according to mythology but it's a spinning top game at the end of the day.
Well, Valkyrie in the anime is a boy (I share such a strong bond with my bey, I knew it was male before I even watched God/Evolution lol) but I could care less if it's a Boy Or Girl
Same with me
(Aug. 13, 2021 5:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:yeah ditto(Aug. 13, 2021 5:18 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: It would be mother according to mythology but it's a spinning top game at the end of the day.
Well, Valkyrie in the anime is a boy (I share such a strong bond with my bey, I knew it was male before I even watched God/Evolution lol) but I could care less if it's a Boy Or Girl
Is anyone else bored right now
I kinda am
I kinda am
I'm gonna spend my whole day on Chapter 4 lol, to make it more longer and add even more details.
Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))"Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:30 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 19, 2021 9:15 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Sorry I couldn't deliver the chapter on time (I got the same excuse exams, (I regret taking Science lol))"Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
And I have good news too, I decided to extend the first arc so I could make debutes of more characters.
Chapter 4:
Spoiler (Click to View)
(The Chapter lived up to my expectations, but ya'll can tell me your opinion).
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:(Aug. 19, 2021 9:30 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: "Watashi (whispers at Inchiban's ears): He's very shy, that's why he wears a mask."
He's a shy guy, but doesn't act like one, so I guess he has some kind of Scopophobia / Scoptophobia (the fear of being watched or stared at) (also, idk if you did this character).
Anyways, Nice chapter.
I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
More like a mix between Ken and the other guy from Cho-Z that had Kerbeus. Anyways, I've seen some changes (the good type of changes) (obviously, not drastically changes, which you decide if its good or not)
Yo, This was a good chapter nice!
(Aug. 19, 2021 9:41 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:(Aug. 19, 2021 9:35 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: I tried to pull a Ken situation (where he uses to talk with his puppets, in Ben's case he's like that when he wears a mask). But will be a completely different guy when the mask is off.
And I'm trying to slowly evolve my writing style, So that's why it was better. (I don't actually write, I use a notepad so you can say I write digitally).
More like a mix between Ken and the other guy from Cho-Z that had Kerbeus. Anyways, I've seen some changes (the good type of changes) (obviously, not drastically changes, which you decide if its good or not)
I forgot to tell you, Ben is Unseen's character.
nice chapter lololol 😏👌