[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Kiwami!

Awesome! Thank you so much!
@"Kiryu Kazuma " Here are me moves

Zone Breaker: Speeds around the stadium and then attacks basically Rush Launch but better lol!

Legacy Whip: 3 big blades come out and start attacking

Royal Guard: It can Guard like a god! But can get broken

Type: Balance

Soler Attack: Its like Raid Upper but more stronger lol!
More Characters:


Plus I'm gonna start releasing chapters tomorrow.
I love the characters!!!
(Aug. 06, 2021  10:11 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: More Characters:


Plus I'm gonna start releasing chapters tomorrow.

I really like those moves, God's Warning and Devil's Awakening.
I'll submit a character since I can just do one related to actual characters, so it'll be easier.
i'll make a cup of coffee for your head

Hyuga had a child? Nice!
(Aug. 07, 2021  1:25 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: i'll make a cup of coffee for your head


Wow Nice!
Chapter 1 is here:

This was Awesome! your writing is great I think I saw a few mistakes like upgrae
(Aug. 07, 2021  5:07 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Chapter 1 is here:


Awesome first chapter! R.I.P Valkyrie lol (Well, I guess it's technically still alive, just reborn as a new Bey)
Awesome! Can’t wait soft Shin to come!
It started off very well imo. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Huh, this is actually better than I thought it would be. Might end up following after all.
I had to push some character's appearance to second arc (for plot reasons)

The characters appearing in the first arc are: Shin Kurenai, Ben Daikokuten and Zeno Syagrios.

Plus upcoming chapters:

Pssst, are there still a free slot for another character? I'm currently working on mine, so I'd like to see if any space is available.
(Aug. 08, 2021  11:41 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Pssst, are there still a free slot for another character? I'm currently working on mine, so I'd like to see if any space is available.

Yup, you can make an entry.
Let’s go Shin! Anyways, this looks cool!
Here goes your entry, hope it's actually writeable XD

PinkRose I don't know why but I almost cryed when I was reading her Relationships lol
(Aug. 08, 2021  11:43 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: PinkRose I don't know why but I almost cryed when I was reading her Relationships lol

Glad to know the sappiness is working, haha. I don't even know how it came out like that, but imagine Uncle Lui basically raising a kid Blader to kinda sorta carry on his legacy, of course it has to be partially soft.
Okay, can Shin and Maru (if it is okay with PinkRose) have a rivalry as Shu Vs Lui?
(Aug. 08, 2021  11:39 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Here goes your entry, hope it's actually writeable XD


Wow I like how detailed it is.