Hello, due to how underwhelming GT was, I've decided to change it a bit. But I shall add no new characters and beys or arcs. The changes are gonna be minor. You can expect Drum battling Valt at the bey Carnival, Delta and Aiga finish ing their battle, and WBBA vs Hell having more members, (Valt, Aiga, Joe for example). Cant wait to make it.
[Fan Fiction] Beyblade Burst GT (g2's version)
Why do I have a feeling that Valt is going to be a lot stronger? Lol
will there be more development? (for each character)
Nice. Pot was kinda just there for the most part tbh.
But hey make sure aiga wins against delta and have revenge on arthur
Here are some suggestions in battle between hell vs victories
Valt and Aiga vs Arthur and Gwyn= winner aiga and valt
Also you should add more characters on both teams
Hell: Arthur, Gwyn, Joe, Blind, Lodin
Victories: Amane, Drum, Delta, Valt, Aiga
Here are some suggestions in battle between hell vs victories
Valt and Aiga vs Arthur and Gwyn= winner aiga and valt
Also you should add more characters on both teams
Hell: Arthur, Gwyn, Joe, Blind, Lodin
Victories: Amane, Drum, Delta, Valt, Aiga
(May. 15, 2020 2:31 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: But hey make sure aiga wins against delta and have revenge on arthurThanks for the suggestions man.
Here are some suggestions in battle between hell vs victories
Valt and Aiga vs Arthur and Gwyn= winner aiga and valt
Also you should add more characters on both teams
Hell: Arthur, Gwyn, Joe, Blind, Lodin
Victories: Amane, Drum, Delta, Valt, Aiga
(May. 15, 2020 2:31 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: But hey make sure aiga wins against delta and have revenge on arthur
Here are some suggestions in battle between hell vs victories
Valt and Aiga vs Arthur and Gwyn= winner aiga and valt
Also you should add more characters on both teams
Hell: Arthur, Gwyn, Joe, Blind, Lodin
Victories: Amane, Drum, Delta, Valt, Aiga
why would Lodin be on hell? He doesn't look like the evil type. Maybe Fumiya to get revenge on Drum, but idk
(May. 15, 2020 4:29 PM)snoc Wrote:Blind and Gwyn weren’t exactly evil as well.(May. 15, 2020 2:31 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: But hey make sure aiga wins against delta and have revenge on arthur
Here are some suggestions in battle between hell vs victories
Valt and Aiga vs Arthur and Gwyn= winner aiga and valt
Also you should add more characters on both teams
Hell: Arthur, Gwyn, Joe, Blind, Lodin
Victories: Amane, Drum, Delta, Valt, Aiga
why would Lodin be on hell? He doesn't look like the evil type. Maybe Fumiya to get revenge on Drum, but idk
Blind the reason he went to team he’ll was because he wanted to see the darkness
Gwyn was convinced join
I would say Lodin since his aura looks sort of sinister.
Gwyn was convinced join
I would say Lodin since his aura looks sort of sinister.
OK guys just to be clear, there a going to be 26 episodes, just like the Hasbro format. But every episode is gonna have a 20 minutes episode pacing.
Episode 1 Ace Dragon on the rise.
Ok so honestly wouldn't change anything in this episode as it seemed like a good start, Slash Valkyrie's battle was rushed but it was understandble. However after Drum talks to his parents, I would've a flash back to how he made Ace Dragon, (He watches a TV show and he sees a knight on a horse fighting a Dragon, since Valkyrie is supposed to be the knight, Drum would like to counter it with a Dragon, so he makes Ace Dragon) afterwards it continues to same way with Dante meeting Amane and till the end where he beats Amane.
Episode 2 Abracadabra! Wizard Fafnir!
Would keep it the same way.
Episode 3 Dragon vs. Fafnir!
One thing I would change is Grand Dragon beating Fafnir with 2 spin finishes, feel like it made no sense for it to burst it, shouldve showcased its stamina powers.
Episode 4 Inspiration! Challenging Valt!
Valt defeats Amane the same way, but this time Drum chose Grand Dragon to beat Slash Valkyrie. Valt bursts it easily, Drum then uses Ace in order to over power Slash Valkyrie, but fails like in the episode, he realized that he needed to defend from Slash Valkyrie, he then makes Rock. The episode continues same way after Valt beats Drum. When Valt Introduced the Hypersphere stadium, I would liked him to make a testing battle, he battles 6 Cho-Z bey fodder launched by robots, like in the raging bulls. Valt launched Slash Valkyrie climbs up on the wall and rides on the upper deck, he drops and activates power break, and bursts all of them. The episode continues the same way with Drum battling with Rock Dragon.
Episode 1 Ace Dragon on the rise.
Ok so honestly wouldn't change anything in this episode as it seemed like a good start, Slash Valkyrie's battle was rushed but it was understandble. However after Drum talks to his parents, I would've a flash back to how he made Ace Dragon, (He watches a TV show and he sees a knight on a horse fighting a Dragon, since Valkyrie is supposed to be the knight, Drum would like to counter it with a Dragon, so he makes Ace Dragon) afterwards it continues to same way with Dante meeting Amane and till the end where he beats Amane.
Episode 2 Abracadabra! Wizard Fafnir!
Would keep it the same way.
Episode 3 Dragon vs. Fafnir!
One thing I would change is Grand Dragon beating Fafnir with 2 spin finishes, feel like it made no sense for it to burst it, shouldve showcased its stamina powers.
Episode 4 Inspiration! Challenging Valt!
Valt defeats Amane the same way, but this time Drum chose Grand Dragon to beat Slash Valkyrie. Valt bursts it easily, Drum then uses Ace in order to over power Slash Valkyrie, but fails like in the episode, he realized that he needed to defend from Slash Valkyrie, he then makes Rock. The episode continues same way after Valt beats Drum. When Valt Introduced the Hypersphere stadium, I would liked him to make a testing battle, he battles 6 Cho-Z bey fodder launched by robots, like in the raging bulls. Valt launched Slash Valkyrie climbs up on the wall and rides on the upper deck, he drops and activates power break, and bursts all of them. The episode continues the same way with Drum battling with Rock Dragon.
Or hold up maybe when it reaches the point where delta and aiga battles when arthur interrupts he should just say he wants to challenge aiga, delta, drum, amane to a battle in the hypersphere stadium to showcase his power and then after afll of them get revenge on him in the hell tower
(May. 16, 2020 2:56 PM)MasterKurenai Wrote: Or hold up maybe when it reaches the point where delta and aiga battles when arthur interrupts he should just say he wants to challenge aiga, delta, drum, amane to a battle in the hypersphere stadium to showcase his power and then after afll of them get revenge on him in the hell towerIntresting.
Episode 5 All-In! Judgement Joker
I feel like Joe should've been after defeated after 2 rounds, to leave some space. First battle Joe beats Rock Dragon, second round Drum bursts him with Ace. Drum wins,
I feel like Joe should've been after defeated after 2 rounds, to leave some space. First battle Joe beats Rock Dragon, second round Drum bursts him with Ace. Drum wins,
(May. 23, 2020 1:42 AM)g2_ Wrote: Episode 5 All-In! Judgement JokerThat battle had almost no meaning and it pretty much sucks if everysingle of of these bladers lose a battle during the tournament.
I feel like Joe should've been after defeated after 2 rounds, to leave some space. First battle Joe beats Rock Dragon, second round Drum bursts him with Ace. Drum wins,
Drum should face off against Valt after he wins the Bey Carnival and beat him 2-0.
Maybe Gwyn could face Delta in a single match
Episode 6 The Final Hand!
Lodin beats Fumiya 2-1. First-round Fafnir spin finish, Lodin bursts him in the second round. Second half of the episode is Lodin vs Drum,
Round 1: Grand Dragon vs Zwei Longinus: Longinus burst finish.
Round 2: Ace Dragon vs Zwei Longinus: Ace Dragon ring-out finish.
Battle continues in the next episode.
Titles for the next episodes:
Episode 7 Bey Carnival finale.
Episode 8: Drum vs Valt.
Lodin beats Fumiya 2-1. First-round Fafnir spin finish, Lodin bursts him in the second round. Second half of the episode is Lodin vs Drum,
Round 1: Grand Dragon vs Zwei Longinus: Longinus burst finish.
Round 2: Ace Dragon vs Zwei Longinus: Ace Dragon ring-out finish.
Battle continues in the next episode.
Titles for the next episodes:
Episode 7 Bey Carnival finale.
Episode 8: Drum vs Valt.
(May. 23, 2020 1:49 AM)MasterKurenai Wrote:Drum would indeed face Valt.(May. 23, 2020 1:42 AM)g2_ Wrote: Episode 5 All-In! Judgement JokerThat battle had almost no meaning and it pretty much sucks if everysingle of of these bladers lose a battle during the tournament.
I feel like Joe should've been after defeated after 2 rounds, to leave some space. First battle Joe beats Rock Dragon, second round Drum bursts him with Ace. Drum wins,
Drum should face off against Valt after he wins the Bey Carnival and beat him 2-0.
Maybe Gwyn could face Delta in a single match