[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Dynachi!

(Jul. 07, 2021  8:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:23 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: this chapter sucks lol

its so bad

Thank you for you're mean constructive criticism >Unhappy (I'm kidding if you don't like it then I'm ok with that)

jk this chapter pretty good

better than my previous chapter

bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thank you for you're mean constructive criticism >Unhappy (I'm kidding if you don't like it then I'm ok with that)

jk this chapter pretty good

better than my previous chapter

bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again

I know u were kidding Smile
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: jk this chapter pretty good

better than my previous chapter

bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again

I know u were kidding Smile

also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it

(Jul. 07, 2021  9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know u were kidding Smile

also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it

please
(Jul. 07, 2021  9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know u were kidding Smile

also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it

(Jul. 07, 2021  9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it

please

I already rated it
im sorry ok

(Jul. 07, 2021  9:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 07, 2021  9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol


I cat

I rat
I bat
Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
(Jul. 08, 2021  1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
absolutely great job on this chapter!
(Jul. 08, 2021  1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter

Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet!
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter

Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet!
ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!

i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!

jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:26 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet!
ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!

i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!

jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.

You're right actually

28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!

29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!

30) Ranking Up!!

31) International World Championships!!!

32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!
I’m pumped!!
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:26 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!

i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!

jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.

You're right actually

28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!

29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!

30) Ranking Up!!

31) International World Championships!!!

32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!

Summaries

28)
29)
30)
31)

32)
This is great!
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:57 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great!

*Looks at LJ suspiciously* ok....
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:58 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:57 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great!

*Looks at LJ suspiciously*  ok....

What...
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:58 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: *Looks at LJ suspiciously*  ok....

What...

Nothin'
Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:02 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out

What you keeping from me
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:02 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out

What you keeping from me

Nothing just the truth...
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:04 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: What you keeping from me

Nothing just the truth...

We shall continue this in PM's
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  4:04 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nothing just the truth...

We shall continue this in PM's
Agreed
(Jul. 08, 2021  1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
Nice Chapter!
(Jul. 09, 2021  12:37 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Can I join in this too?

Sure
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:55 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 08, 2021  3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You're right actually

28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!

29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!

30) Ranking Up!!

31) International World Championships!!!

32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!

Summaries

28)
29)
30)
31)

32)
Stormbringer? Is it because of Storm Sprizen?