Woah man, Chen's situation is waaaaaay more messed up than I thought...*also sad Delta noises plays in the background*
Plot: 5/5. Steady progress as always, with even more of Chen's background carp I think he's paralleling Rashad and another exciting battle. I'm assuming this means Batal dropped down a bit in ranks with his loss?
Dialogue: 5/5. I see nothing wrong, at all. Nice.
Characterization: 5/5. Lukas is still salty and I still hate that coward, Rin's setting up for character development, Valt and Free are doing their best to stay calm and not screw up again with Batal (tho we all know they're failing at the former), and Batal is just being himself, the only absolute positive at this point in the series.
Writing: 4.5/5. Nothing noticeable, just the usual little tick with walls of text. It's getting better though.
Battle: 5/5. I have to admit, I didn't see that coming. But then again, Batal overclocking shouldn't be a guaranteed win, so I guess it's fair for him to lose (plus he doesn't even have to beat Free to prove his skill). The battle itself was very interesting, and yeah, I guess I'm happy with how it turned out.
Final Rating: 24.5/25. This is one of, if not the best of all chapters yet, totally worth the wait if you ask me. Excited to see what will happen next!
I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.