[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst: Burst Ultimate (Fan-Story)

(Sep. 27, 2022  11:59 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Beyblade Burst BU Episode 37: A Battle Among Men! Belial VS Raphael!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1272389972-beybl...isode-37-a

Just curious but what is your average Word Count?
(Sep. 28, 2022  1:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Sep. 27, 2022  11:59 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Beyblade Burst BU Episode 37: A Battle Among Men! Belial VS Raphael!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1272389972-beybl...isode-37-a

Just curious but what is your average Word Count?

2000-2500. Aiming for 3000-3500 in Season 2, of course thats not a guarantee.
I love the changes to Wyvron. This is a much better stock combo and much better name
Also, is the new Chaos/ Caynox meaning that our vampire Clio is back
(Sep. 28, 2022  2:05 AM)TitanDragon Wrote: I love the changes to Wyvron. This is a much better stock combo and much better name
Also, is the new Chaos/ Caynox meaning that our vampire Clio is back

Undecided. Probably new character but not sure yet.
Description for Pulse Wyvern and Warning Diabolos for Season 2 coming soon
(Sep. 28, 2022  3:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: What about horror Doomscizor

After, probably close to when Season 1 ends. Diabolos will debut before Deathscyther in Season 2.
(Sep. 28, 2022  3:57 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2022  3:49 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: What about horror Doomscizor

After, probably close to when Season 1 ends. Diabolos will debut before Deathscyther in Season 2.

Is the stock combo for Doomscizor still the same
(Sep. 28, 2022  4:01 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2022  3:57 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: After, probably close to when Season 1 ends. Diabolos will debut before Deathscyther in Season 2.

Is the stock combo for Doomscizor still the same

Full combo is Horror Deathscyther.Karma.Venture-2, so no, nothing has really changed.
That’s great. A piece of advice, I think Warning Devolos should keep Bullet’, removing it takes away its most signature ability
(Sep. 28, 2022  4:17 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: That’s great. A piece of advice, I think Warning Devolos should keep Bullet’, removing it takes away its most signature ability

Quantum is going to be a Generate-esque driver. Generate is overall better than Bullet. Having the Bullet gimmick one time doesn't make it its signature ability
(Sep. 28, 2022  4:52 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2022  4:17 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: That’s great. A piece of advice, I think Warning Devolos should keep Bullet’, removing it takes away its most signature ability

Quantum is going to be a Generate-esque driver. Generate is overall better than Bullet. Having the Bullet gimmick one time doesn't make it its signature ability

Ohhh. I think I see what you are doing. You’re making the new Devolos akin to Master both in how the parts work and how the layer functions. Am I correct
Pulse Wyvern.Fortress.Metal Atomic-6 and Warning Diabolos.Quantum-4
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Core - Wyvern (WY)
A Right Spin BU Core with a Wyvern Motif, a winged dragon-like beast. The cores design and color scheme is similar to that of the Wyvern Sparking Chip but with only one dragon head, the core doesn't have that much in terms of gimmicks but it has 1 BU Lock and 5 teeth of short height.

Blade - Pulse (Pl)
A Right Spin BU Blade with a shape, design and colors that is similar to Jet but more rounded and with more rubber, the gimmick of the blade is that the blade is very thick with a. Free spinning ring that can free spin on a bearing, providing maximum defense.

Armor - 6

Disk - Fortress (Fr)

Driver - Metal Atomic

Owner: Wakiya Komurasaki



Core - Diabolos (DB)
A Vertical Dual Spin BU Core with a side facing Diabolos Motif, the latin word for Devil. The cores design is very similar to that of the Diabolos2 chip from GT With the blue gem from Diabolos1. The cores outer design is colored gold with metal on it, adding more weight to it.

Blade - Warning (W)
A Dual Spin BU Blade with a shape that is very similar to the Master Base from GT but the shape is a bit more rounder than Master but still keeps the Upper and Smash abilities from the Spin Change too and the colors are about the same as Master too. The gimmick for the blade is that in Right Spin, it has metal weighting, allowing for heavy attack and increased defense. In Left Spin, it has rubber which can absorb attacks and absorb spin from opposite spinning opponents.

Armor - 4 (Blue)

Driver - Quantum (Qn)
A Disk+Driver Fusion that supports low mode! The overall structure of the driver is similar to that of the Shot Driver but with the metal piece from Generate. The gimmick of the driver is that on a strong shoot, a metal sharp tip is retracted into the driver and initiates Attack Mode but when the combo using Quantum slows down, the metal sharp comes back out and changes into Stamina Mode
(Sep. 28, 2022  10:54 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Pulse Wyvern.Fortress.Metal Atomic-6 and Warning Diabolos.Quantum-4
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Core - Wyvern (WY)
A Right Spin BU Core with a Wyvern Motif, a winged dragon-like beast. The cores design and color scheme is similar to that of the Wyvern Sparking Chip but with only one dragon head, the core doesn't have that much in terms of gimmicks but it has 1 BU Lock and 5 teeth of short height.

Blade - Pulse (Pl)
A Right Spin BU Blade with a shape, design and colors that is similar to Jet but more rounded and with more rubber, the gimmick of the blade is that the blade is very thick with a. Free spinning ring that can free spin on a bearing, providing maximum defense.

Armor - 6

Disk - Fortress (Fr)

Driver - Metal Atomic

Owner: Wakiya Komurasaki



Core - Diabolos (DB)
A Vertical Dual Spin BU Core with a side facing Diabolos Motif, the latin word for Devil. The cores design is very similar to that of the Diabolos2 chip from GT With the blue gem from Diabolos1. The cores outer design is colored gold with metal on it, adding more weight to it.

Blade - Warning (W)
A Dual Spin BU Blade with a shape that is very similar to the Master Base from GT but the shape is a bit more rounder than Master but still keeps the Upper and Smash abilities from the Spin Change too and the colors are about the same as Master too. The gimmick for the blade is that in Right Spin, it has metal weighting, allowing for heavy attack and increased defense. In Left Spin, it has rubber which can absorb attacks and absorb spin from opposite spinning opponents.

Armor - 4 (Blue)

Driver - Quantum (Qn)
A Disk+Driver Fusion that supports low mode! The overall structure of the driver is similar to that of the Shot Driver but with the metal piece from Generate. The gimmick of the driver is that on a strong shoot, a metal sharp tip is retracted into the driver and initiates Attack Mode but when the combo using Quantum slows down, the metal sharp comes back out and changes into Stamina Mode

Can you share some moves for each?
(Sep. 28, 2022  11:08 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:
(Sep. 28, 2022  10:54 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Pulse Wyvern.Fortress.Metal Atomic-6 and Warning Diabolos.Quantum-4
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Core - Wyvern (WY)
A Right Spin BU Core with a Wyvern Motif, a winged dragon-like beast. The cores design and color scheme is similar to that of the Wyvern Sparking Chip but with only one dragon head, the core doesn't have that much in terms of gimmicks but it has 1 BU Lock and 5 teeth of short height.

Blade - Pulse (Pl)
A Right Spin BU Blade with a shape, design and colors that is similar to Jet but more rounded and with more rubber, the gimmick of the blade is that the blade is very thick with a. Free spinning ring that can free spin on a bearing, providing maximum defense.

Armor - 6

Disk - Fortress (Fr)

Driver - Metal Atomic

Owner: Wakiya Komurasaki



Core - Diabolos (DB)
A Vertical Dual Spin BU Core with a side facing Diabolos Motif, the latin word for Devil. The cores design is very similar to that of the Diabolos2 chip from GT With the blue gem from Diabolos1. The cores outer design is colored gold with metal on it, adding more weight to it.

Blade - Warning (W)
A Dual Spin BU Blade with a shape that is very similar to the Master Base from GT but the shape is a bit more rounder than Master but still keeps the Upper and Smash abilities from the Spin Change too and the colors are about the same as Master too. The gimmick for the blade is that in Right Spin, it has metal weighting, allowing for heavy attack and increased defense. In Left Spin, it has rubber which can absorb attacks and absorb spin from opposite spinning opponents.

Armor - 4 (Blue)

Driver - Quantum (Qn)
A Disk+Driver Fusion that supports low mode! The overall structure of the driver is similar to that of the Shot Driver but with the metal piece from Generate. The gimmick of the driver is that on a strong shoot, a metal sharp tip is retracted into the driver and initiates Attack Mode but when the combo using Quantum slows down, the metal sharp comes back out and changes into Stamina Mode

Can you share some moves for each?

Wyvern only has 1 move since it's a minor bey and that is Pulse Shield

Diabolos will be shared later down the line

Beyblade Burst BU Episode 38: Ultimate Gear Training! Pulse Wyvern!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1272658327-beybl...episode-38
I’m confused with the new episode. Are you still moving forward with the Regnar evolution next season? Because I saw on the updated list of beys appearing in the next installment of your fan fiction that it got scrapped. Yet Rashad tells Valt that in addition to leaving after the tournament, he says something about making a new Regnar
(Sep. 29, 2022  4:40 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: I’m confused with the new episode. Are you still moving forward with the Regnar evolution next season? Because I saw on the updated list of beys appearing in the next installment of your fan fiction that it got scrapped. Yet Rashad tells Valt that in addition to leaving after the tournament, he says something about making a new Regnar

Rashad is leaving to create a New Raphael evolution yes and after the season, we won't be seeing him for a while until he eventually comes next season
(Sep. 29, 2022  5:15 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Sep. 29, 2022  4:40 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: I’m confused with the new episode. Are you still moving forward with the Regnar evolution next season? Because I saw on the updated list of beys appearing in the next installment of your fan fiction that it got scrapped. Yet Rashad tells Valt that in addition to leaving after the tournament, he says something about making a new Regnar

Rashad is leaving to create a New Raphael evolution yes and after the season, we won't be seeing him for a while until he eventually comes next season

Why was scrapped on your recent bey log update for season 2 then
(Sep. 29, 2022  5:20 PM)TitanDragon Wrote:
(Sep. 29, 2022  5:15 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Rashad is leaving to create a New Raphael evolution yes and after the season, we won't be seeing him for a while until he eventually comes next season

Why was scrapped on your recent bey log update for season 2 then

Rashad will still use Greatest Raphael in a minor appearance or a flashback sequence before evolving, it's also not to spoil the name of the coming evolution. I never said it was scrapped.

Beyblade Burst BU Episode 39: Opening Battle! Let The Tournament Begin!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1272945183-beybl...episode-39
Do you plan on having Astral Spryzen breaking
(Sep. 30, 2022  4:08 PM)TitanDragon Wrote: Do you plan on having Astral Spryzen breaking

i don't speak on beys breaking to avoid spoilers to other people.
Beyblade Burst BU Episode 40: The Ultimate Stage! Beyblade Ultimate World Series!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1273231173-beybl...ode-40-the

Beyblade Burst BU Episode 41: Fight For Victory! The 1st Round Continues!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1273669771-beybl...e-41-fight