[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu

Chapter 29 has fallen out of the skies!
Great Chapter but....

(Jul. 25, 2021  6:42 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Great Chapter but....

I need a new phone, sorry for that.
Anyway, it's my bey, I wanted a magnetic based gimmick
Sth I want to point out of the chapter
Anyway Nice chapter!
(Jul. 25, 2021  6:43 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021  6:42 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Great Chapter but....

I need a new phone, sorry for that.
Anyway, it's my bey, I wanted a magnetic based gimmick
Sth I want to point out of the chapter

Oh a magnetic gimmick... Then how about Magnetite?
(Jul. 25, 2021  6:50 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021  6:43 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I need a new phone, sorry for that.
Anyway, it's my bey, I wanted a magnetic based gimmick
Sth I want to point out of the chapter

Oh a magnetic gimmick... Then how about Magnetite?
Could work too, but I like chemistry and I don't think that I prefer a rock over a element. (Also it's a excuse to make 1 bey out of every element)
30) The Legendary Airship!!

31) Rampaging Dragon! Smite Luinor!

32) Ultimate Warrior! Royal Achilles!

33) Rise! Fang Dragon!!

34) Grave Of Beys! Blitz Belarix!!

35) Explosive Blows! Valtryek Vs Poseidon!!

36) The Final Battle!
Belarix? Brooke is coming to Beyjitsu? Jk but seriously
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Belarix? Brooke is coming to Beyjitsu? Jk but seriously

Barry's coming but not Brooke
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:46 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Belarix? Brooke is coming to Beyjitsu? Jk but seriously

Barry's coming but not Brooke

Okay good to know!
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Barry's coming but not Brooke

Okay good to know!

Forgot to tell you, Bell is Barry that's what I'm translating his name into (At first I hated the name but now I hope that's the name they give Bell in the Eng Dub)
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 25, 2021  10:49 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Okay good to know!

Forgot to tell you, Bell is Barry that's what I'm translating his name into (At first I hated the name but now I hope that's the name they give Bell in the Eng Dub)

What the God Valkrie I imagine bells name being Bain
(Jul. 25, 2021  6:01 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 29 has fallen out of the skies!
nice chapter!
I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy

lol it's alright you didnt disappoint anyone lol, start low then go dude!
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy

It's all good just rest!
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:06 AM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy

lol it's alright you didnt disappoint anyone lol, start low then go dude!

(Jul. 26, 2021  4:15 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy

It's all good just rest!

But I'm a writer I never take breaks until I'm done! 0-0
(Jul. 26, 2021  4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I was planning on releasing Chapter 30 in an hour but I just got back and I'm super drained I just don't have the energy to finish it I'm sorry yall I have disappointed you Unhappy
Yesterday I was awake until... Wait a sec, 1 am is today... That's beside the point.(and useless, it's only to show that i have experience)

Anyway, you didn't disappointed anyone for sleeping/resting to write chapter 30 better than you would without doing it.
Chapter 30 is riding on an Airplane!
(Jul. 26, 2021  5:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 30 is riding on an Airplane!

lawl nice episode!
(Jul. 26, 2021  5:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 30 is riding on an Airplane!
One question: Why Ogre? is it going to be Ogre Longinus or sth?
Nice chapter!
(Jul. 26, 2021  6:13 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Jul. 26, 2021  5:49 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 30 is riding on an Airplane!
One question: Why Ogre? is it going to be Ogre Longinus or sth?
cringe

jk but in english dub he is now called the frozen ogre so maybe something with ice

ohhhh i feel stupid it's name is Smite Luinor

(Jul. 25, 2021  10:15 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 30) The Legendary Airship!!

31) Rampaging Dragon! Smite Luinor!

32) Infinite Warrior! Royal Achilles!

33) Rise! Fang Dragon!!

34) Grave Of Beys! Blitz Belarix!!

35) Explosive Blows! Valtryek Vs Poseidon!!
Perfect Poseidon?!
(Jul. 28, 2021  4:00 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Perfect Poseidon?!

Evolution?
Perfect Poseidon > Perfect Belial