[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu

(Jun. 19, 2021  1:05 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 19, 2021  12:48 AM)JJustice Wrote: …. BeybladeManiac0 you deserve it.

No hard feeling right? and besides you still have ur spot in Dynachi

Last Chapter change up (I swear)

Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8

No hard feelings
(Jun. 19, 2021  1:05 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote:
(Jun. 19, 2021  12:48 AM)JJustice Wrote: …. BeybladeManiac0 you deserve it.

No hard feeling right? and besides you still have ur spot in Dynachi

Last Chapter change up (I swear)

Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
¯\_( ` - ` )_/¯

oops is that spam? sorry
(Jun. 18, 2021  11:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jun. 18, 2021  11:15 PM)JJustice Wrote: At the beginning it said beyblade burst dynashi but beside that it was good

LOL lemme fix that

Ima just announce the winner early since nobody else is probably going to enter

The winner is... BeybladeManiac0!! Thanks, @Jjustice Dark red and eggblader for joining you can always snatch a spot on Dynachi have an awesome evening!!

(Jun. 19, 2021  12:48 AM)JJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 18, 2021  11:50 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: LOL lemme fix that

Ima just announce the winner early since nobody else is probably going to enter

The winner is... BeybladeManiac0!! Thanks, @Jjustice Dark red and eggblader for joining you can always snatch a spot on Dynachi have an awesome evening!!
…. BeybladeManiac0 you deserve it.

Omg thanks you guys!
(Jun. 20, 2021  1:53 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:
(Jun. 18, 2021  11:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: LOL lemme fix that

Ima just announce the winner early since nobody else is probably going to enter

The winner is... BeybladeManiac0!! Thanks, @Jjustice Dark red and eggblader for joining you can always snatch a spot on Dynachi have an awesome evening!!

(Jun. 19, 2021  12:48 AM)JJustice Wrote: …. BeybladeManiac0 you deserve it.

Omg thanks you guys!

You deserved it (Aka Strikegamerv6)
Okay so not to rush when's next chapter?
(Jun. 20, 2021  6:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Okay so not to rush when's next chapter?

Right now

Chapter 5 is out!!
(Jun. 22, 2021  10:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jun. 20, 2021  6:25 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Okay so not to rush when's next chapter?

Right now

Chapter 5 is out!!

Epic! But I got to get writing for my fan fic awesome work!
(Jun. 22, 2021  11:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 22, 2021  10:02 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Right now

Chapter 5 is out!!

Epic! But I got to get writing for my fan fic awesome work!

Thx

Just going to point out that Pam is a boy not a girl
(Jun. 22, 2021  11:17 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jun. 22, 2021  11:12 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Epic! But I got to get writing for my fan fic awesome work!

Thx

Just going to point out that Pam is a boy not a girl

Okay lol
Deleated post!
Chapter 6 is finally finished
this is mega awesome! i love that like nearly the most epic battle is only just episode 6 lol super good! that battle really kept me at the edge of my seat lol
(Jun. 24, 2021  2:57 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 6 is finally finished

So..... Best chapter yet!!!
(Jun. 24, 2021  4:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:
(Jun. 24, 2021  2:57 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 6 is finally finished

So..... Best chapter yet!!!

This took me 8 hours to complete so I hope u enjoy
(Jun. 24, 2021  4:49 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jun. 24, 2021  4:39 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: So..... Best chapter yet!!!

This took me 8 hours to complete so I hope u enjoy
Yup I liked it!
(Jun. 18, 2021  12:36 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: My entry in the character contest:

Character - Raina Reinhart

Raina Reinhart is a 15-year-old girl who is an extremely powerful Beyblader. When she turned 11, she was given a Beyblade as a gift, Heaven Dragon Hurricane Rise Gen. She would battle the other kids at her school and would usually win. But one day, the school bullies challenged her to a battle. Raina accepted, but they completely overpowered and outnumbered her. They destroyed Heaven Dragon, which left Raina heartbroken. After that event, Raina became obsessed with getting revenge. She tried many times to fix Dragon but failed every time. She then attempted to build her own Bey and succeeded, creating Pirate Ridley. Raina rematched the bullies her destroyed her previous Bey. During the battle, Raina was so engulfed by anger and hatred, Ridley's spirit possessed her, destroyed the opponent's Beys and consumed the spirits inside them, becoming more powerful with each Bey it consumes. Over the past 4 years, Raina has travelled the world, destroying more Beys and letting Ridley become more powerful. Ridley only possesses her during battles, when things start to get intense. But the more powerful Ridley becomes, the more control it has over Raina.

Beyblade - Pirate Ridley 3A Quick'

Ridley - Ridley's Chip depicts a purple dragon that has yellow eyes. The dragon is made of metal.

Pirate - Pirate is similar to Rage except it has 2 modes: Absorb Mode and Strike Mode. In Absorb Mode, Pirate has 2 green rubber blades, which act as shock absorbers and can spin steal. In Strike Mode, Pirate has 4 metal blades that provide immense weight and attack power. Pirate is purple and black.

3A - Regular 3A, but it's trans-green.

Quick' - Regular Quick', but it's purple and the rubber is green.

Special Moves:

Dragon Launch - Raina holds her launcher high above her head. As the Bladers shout "Go Shoot!", She slams it downwards at an angle, and when Ridley lands in the Beystadium, it will rush to the centre and hit the opponent, almost always KOing them instantly.

Pirate Boost - Using the rubber on Pirate, Ridley slightly spin steals the opponent and gains a speed boost. Can only be used when Pirate is in Absorb mode

Dragon Skewer - Ridley rushes to the centre of the Beystadium, aligns itself with the opponent and charges into them, forcing them against the wall of the stadium. Ridley then travels around the edge of the stadium, taking the opponent along with it, scraping them against the wall and dealing massive damage with its metal blades. Can only be used when Pirate is in Strike Mode.

Ultimate Move:

Pirate Rush - Raina only uses this move when she is possessed by Ridley. Ridley rushes straight across the Beystadium towards the opponent and collides with an impact so hard, its almost always a Burst Finish. Sometimes Ridley will slice the opponent completely in half when colliding with them. If there are other opponents in the way, Ridley will plough through them and continue until it hits its target.

Other:

Ridley's Avatar is a purple winged dragon with yellow eyes.

Ridley's aura is purple.

Raina has purple hair with a green streak and green eyes.

Raina's Launcher is a purple and green Left-Spin Sparking String Launcher attached to a black and purple grip.

When Raina is possessed by Ridley, her eyes glow yellow and her voice becomes demonic. The aura she emits while possessed is purple.

Weaknesses:

Despite being an extremely aggressive Attack-Type Beyblade, Pirate Ridley has very poor stamina and relies on KOing, Bursting or even completely destroying the opponent as quickly as possible.

After being possessed by Ridley, Raina becomes weak and tired.

Raina is also a Shu fangirl lol.

Neat; like Red Eye!

(Jun. 24, 2021  2:57 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 6 is finally finished

The ‘white void’ is basically Turbo’s last episode, XD
uh guys this'll sound like hocus pocus but i accidentally overslept and didnt make episode 1

i'll get to making episode 1 right now
(Jun. 24, 2021  3:24 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: uh guys this'll sound like hocus pocus but i accidentally overslept and didnt make episode 1

i'll get to making episode 1 right now

👍
(Jun. 24, 2021  2:57 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 6 is finally finished

Ok, so overall it is a really good story, but the way you are writing it is killing me. The flow of the story is very choppy due to the "Valt said while walking away" idea. It will make everything much easier to read if you did this "Valt walked away." The story is already ordering the actions, so we know that the character just said something. You also don't always need the describing words. The best way to do it would be to make the sentence so that the reader can feel the emotion.
(Jun. 24, 2021  5:11 PM)USN Wrote:
(Jun. 24, 2021  2:57 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 6 is finally finished

Ok, so overall it is a really good story, but the way you are writing it is killing me. The flow of the story is very choppy due to the "Valt said while walking away" idea. It will make everything much easier to read if you did this "Valt walked away." The story is already ordering the actions, so we know that the character just said something. You also don't always need the describing words. The best way to do it would be to make the sentence so that the reader can feel the emotion.
7) Bey Of Vengance!! Pirate Ridley!!!

8) Valtryek Vs Poseidon!!!

9) Pure Resonance!!!

10) Trust Your Bey!!

11) Taking The World By Storm!!

12) Super Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!

13) Bey Of Harmony!! Peace Pegasus (Guess who will own it)
(Jun. 27, 2021  9:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 7) Bey Of Vengance!! Pirate Ridley!!!

8) Valtryek Vs Poseidon!!!

9) Pure Resonance!!!

10) Trust Your Bey!!

11) Taking The World By Storm!!

12) Super Dragon!! Illusion Fafnir!!

13) Bey Of Harmony!! Peace Pegasus (Guess who will own it)

For a moment I thought this was a chapter lol I was like Uncertain
yo my boy Pam getting a new beyblade sick
(Jun. 27, 2021  10:20 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: yo my boy Pam getting a new beyblade sick

OHH makes sense 😐 I thought Ginga was coming back lol
i knew it because his last name was literally hope