Beyblade Burst all star 

Main characters:

Aoi valt(protagonist), kurenai Shu, Leonardo jean(antagonist)

Characters :

Daina, Delta, Drum, Phi, Hearts, Hyuga, Hikaru, Lane, Wakiya, Kensuke, Xhaka, Sisco, Free, Rantaro, Aiga, Fubuki, Xhan, Ranjiro, Zack
Beys in chapter one

Saint Valkyrie.Ul' 7A - Define Spriggan.U' 7B
Flaw Leviathan.wh.Jn 7D

So i wanted to make a first chapther in manga form but do you guys wanted a manga adaptation (In google drive) or just a novel story to read please tell me and also chapter one is releasing on May 26th(novel)or June 1st(manga)
You can also put a suggestion into the story
Chapter/episode list
Ep.1 flawless bey leviathan
Ep.2 valt determination
Ep.3 mastery of Breath technique
Ep.4 Shu vs Aija
Ep.5 Ares! Conter it!
Ep.6 C'mon! valt master it
Ep.7 attack!Attack!Xcalibur!
Ep.8 Wakiya vs Shu
Ep.9 you fool?!
Ep.10 Finish it!High jump shoot!

Aiga- Warrior Achilles 12Dm’ 8B

This will need a intense story plot

Aiga- Warrior Achilles 12Dm’ 8B

This will need a intense story plot

Okay but I think I'll need to change the disc first for achilles and thanks for the feedback

Episode 1
"完 璧なベイリヴァイアサン",
Kanpekina beirivu~aiasan
flawless bey leviathan

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In the Gt arena every legends is appearing but not competing to se the finalist for the bey vestival
Anami : alright Boiys and girls Its time for the finalists of this tournament, on the red corner we have the wonder boy Aoi Valt!
*valt raises his hands then everyone cheers him
Anami : and in the blue corner we have the flaming god Shu kurenai!
*shu fangirls cheers him
Shu: valt you're ready?
Valt: yeah well ahead you
Shu: hmp
Rep: ready set
Everyone: 3...2...1...gooo...shoot!!!
Valt: go wild Brave Valkyrie
Shu: spriggan counter it!
Brave Valkyrie sends spriggan flying
Shu: eh
Valt: attack again valkyrie!!!!
Shu: Counter Break!!
Anami: wow wow wow neither Valkyrie nor spriggan is backing out!
???: Goooo....Shoot!!
Shu and valt : eh
???: leviathan!!!
*both Valkyrie and spriggan got knock out
???: battle me valt shu!
Valt: wait what*his aura it just like shu has back in the day this gus must mean business*
Shu: who are you
???: hmp i tell you once you both beat me
Rep: but you...
Valt: its okay rep i accept your challenge how about you shu
Hyuga: what that isn't even fair
Hikaru: calm down Hyuga this is not our match
Shu *valt got some instinct this guy is dangerous *: alright then
Anami : we are in the middle of this epic clash between valt an shu but then This guy shows up will this guy wreck the two legends or will it be the opposite
Shu: valt we need to take him down fast
Valt: right
???: heh both of you seems worried oh well I'll just go easy on you
Anami : OMG this mysterious blader just make our two top bladers look puny
Valt: say what
Shu: his bluffing
In the commentator seat
Free: valt what are you doing
Cristina: free you seems worried
Free: oh yeah *valt don't lose this one*
Rep : ready set
Everyone: 3...2...1 goooo shooot
*all bey clashes in the middle of the stadium then leviathan got send back
???: leviathan now! Perfect strike!!
*leviathan hits spriggan
Shu: spriggan counter break!
*spriggan then counters the attack
Shu : now valt
Valt: Haaaaaaaa, Valkyrie!, brave sword
???: impressive but it a shame that attack is wasteful
*leviathan quickly deflect all attack
Everyone got shock
Anami: what the how come leviathan even do that
???: play time is over leviathan!
*leviathan approaches to spriggan
???: perfect strike(calm voice)
Shu: spriggan!
???: its too late
*spriggan got bursted
Valt : shu no ehk, valkyrie!!!!
*valkyrie throws leviathan to the wall this making the wall breaks, leviathan then ran out of the attack pattern
???: ehk finally some challenge (smiles)
*vakyrie then do the same move but this time leviathan blocks it thus making the clash more fierce
???: i am declaring this now i am the world strongest blader hear me Hyaaaa!!! Leviathan!(powers up
*valkyrie got send back with some consecutive hits from leviathan
Valt: this is bad there is no opening for brave shield
???: now Leviathan finish it ! Perfect impact
Valt * wait his bey changes mode
Valt : now valkyrie brave shield!!
*both bey clashes sending a huge shock wave but then
Valkyrie blades got torn out
Valt : hah
*valkyrie then breaks in to two pieces
Rep : burst finish the score is 4-0 the winner is
???: its leo my name is leo Alexandria

The Episode then end
Phew that was long so i made some major changes first leo name now is leo alexandria second in this first episode valt and shu should have evolved both bey but i decided to cut it so the episode does not fell rushed and also this takes place one year after sparking

Episode 2
"バルト決定"
Baruto kettei
Valt determination

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???: my name is leo, leo alexandria but call me Li
Anami: wow wow wow an E rank blader whose name is Li completely annihilates the two legends

*shu triying to pick spriggan

Li: Leviathan

*leviathan approaches spriggan And destroyed spriggan into pieces, Shu was shock as well as everyone

Shu: eehg are you trying to pick a fight!
Li: hmp pathetic I thought you're was always wanted your revenge kurenai shu or should i say Red eye
Shu: wait so you're a snake pit blader figures
Li: took you long enough red eye

*valt still looking at valkyrie
Valt: valkyrie am sorry but next time we'll get him

Shu: I'll end you next time you'll see
Li: theres no need for me here anymore, farewell legends

3 days later

B.C Sol
Valt meeting Raul
Valt: hey gramps you're still hanging
Raul: oh valt yeah came in
Valt: hey do you know something about the system that leviathan used
Raul: come to think of it i think he uses an advance version of the sparking system
Valt: then me and valkyrie are going to evolve into that height right partner *valkyrie glows
Raul:heh Then I'll make it the best

*after building Saint valkyrie

Raul: valt i present to you saint valkyrie this bey utilized a special gimmick inside it
Valt: what's the special gimmick gramps
Raul: you'll know soon but first master your movement
Valt: wait what.....

*The scene changes to valt training with saint valkyrie in the woods

Free: hey valt battle me lets settle out our score
Valt: yeah yeah here take a look at saint valkyrie
Free: what gimmick did it have
Valt: um I don't know actually raul dint tell me
Free: alright
Both : 3..2...1....gooo shooot
Free: valt
Valt: yeah
Free: So now what are you going to do? doing these kinda training will not simply boost your strength and skill to match leviathan even if you were it will took a year
Valt: i am determined
Free: huh,...determined to do what
Valt: i am determined that valkyrie and i will beat Li and leviathan
*valkyrie knocks out fafnir
Free: how come
Valt: i want to learn the mastery of movement

Free still usess Mirage fafnir and shu will evolve spriggan off screen
Mastery of movement = ultra instinct in beyblade Lol

"息の習得"
Iki no shūtoku
Mastery of breath

Spoiler (Click to View)

Free: mastery of movement haven't heard that before
Valt: Gramps told me that he said
Flashback

Valt: what mastery of movement?! Whats that
Raul: is a technique that can be done by mastering 3 things 1.breathing 2.strength and 3. Calmness
Valt: wait how do i do all of that gramps
Raul: follow your instinct my child

Flashback ended

Free: so who is going to train you
Valt: for breathing and strength i chose Xhaka I heard that he teaches martial arts
Free: wait why do martial art for breathing
Valt: he tell me that he'll teach me
Free: hmp fine then don't you dare lose to him valt
Valt: free..alright then
Rantaro: count me in valt!
Valt: wait wat hanco how do you..
Cuza: me too!
Valt: ah eh alright i guess
*Cuza and rantaro slaps
Cuza and rantaro: yess
Free: never changes

2 days later in england

In the forests
Cuza: hey valt are sure this is the place
Valt: yeah xhaka told me that
Rantaro: wait isn't Xhaka already retire
Valt: hmm... yes, he already retire
Cuza:hey look is him
Xhaka: again xhan give it all you got
Xhan: Haaaaa! Xcalibur!!
Sakyo: spnix now!!
Valt: hey Xhaka!!Long time no see
Xhaka: oh valt
Valt: wait who are those guys
Xhaka: oh these guys xhan sakyo Cut it off for a sec to introduce yourself to our guest
Sakyo and xhan : right
Sakyo: my name is sakyo arivuchi nice to meet you
Xhan : and my name is xhan bogard
Sakyo and Xhan: nice to meet you
Valt: whoah nice you have pupils now
Xhaka: hehe
Cuza: xhaka can i ask , when we will start the training
Xhaka: oh yeah thats why you guys were here lets go then
*after 30+ minutes training
Xhaka: alright warm up is done now follow me
Everyone:yes sir

In the top of a mountain
Rantaro: is it me or the oxygen is lesser here
Cuza: same here
Xhaka:This will be our training grounds the air is lesser than normal so breath as effective as you can
Valt: alright what's next xhaka
Xhaka: First me sakyo and will battle you guys on a match as a team battle
Sakyo and Xhan: yes master
Xhaka: dont you guys want to take a break i mean the oxygen is lower
Valt: yeah we can handel it Right you two
Rataro: actually huft huft never mind
Xhaka: alright then the rules are straight forward the one team that loses first lose are you sure valt cause this is pretty intense
Valt: yeah.h.h
Xhan: its a honer to meet you mr aoi, kiyama, and ackerman
Sakyo: its too bad that you're power is suppressed compare to low ground
Xhan: hey sakyo be polite to our guest
Xhaka: Come here you two
Valt: rantaro! Cuza here!
Cuza: whats our plan cap
Valt: cuza can you use your bey on stamina attack mode
Cuza:ayay cap
Valt: rantaro i need you angle your launch
Rantaro: oh so were using that method
Xhaka: valt is your team ready
Valt: yeah were ready
Xhaka:heh alright then
Everyone:3..2...1..gooo shooot

*Valt rantaro and cuza are launching their beys weaker because of the oxygen capacity

Sakyo: spinx use wing crush
Rantaro: counter it ragnaruk
Xhan: go Xcalibur! Triple impact!!
*xcalibur blows ragnaruk and spinx back
Sakyo: Xhaan you will pay this
Xhan : ops sorry my bad
Xhaka: Xcalibur!
*myth xcalibur blows away valkyrie
Valt: eh
Cuza: dont worry valt, chronos now
*chronos helped valkyrie by hinting it so valkyrie doesnt went out making
Xhaka: xhan sakyo its time
Valt: huh
Xhan: buster impact!
*bX bursted ragnaruk
Rantaro: eh no way...hah..ha..hah
Sakyo: Now spnix, solar boost!
Cuza : chronos!
*spnix knockout chronos
Cuza: hah..hah....ha
Xhaka: are you ready valt
Valt: eh this is bad my breathing
Xhaka: Xcalibur! Final impact
Valt: counter it saint sword !
*myth Xcalibur bursted saint valkyrie
Valt: hah..hah...hah
Xhan and sakyo : hah yes we win
Xhaka: I told you valt you guys should take a rest now
Valt : yeah i think you are right huft huft
Meanwhile in NY
Anami: are you guys readyyy cause this battle will be intense featuring shu the god of flames and Aija the god of mars
Shu: lets go devine spriggan
To be continued...

Xhan : buster Xcalibur 1' sw
Xhaka : myth Xcalibur .poin (pn) 8A
Sakyo: solar spnix. 10. A'
Rantaro: glide ragnaruk. R 1s
Cuza: Fantasy choronos . Xt+ 1b
Coming up next is the animated scene of valt vs Li and i want to know so far is the story good enough please tell me
And chapter 1 in manga form is coming on Wednesday

Episode 4
"アイジャとアレス"
Aija to aresu
Aija and ares

Spoiler (Click to View)

After the battle between shu and valt v Li

Shu was walking in the hallway after his defeat in the ny bulls but then

Fubuki:Master
Shu: yeah
Fubukiomeone want to battle you
Shu: Who

A black haired guy with a knight mask

Shu: who are you

*??? Removes his mask

Aija: my name is aija karasabe, please if you will..... battle me please
Shu: okay sure
Aija: really!
Shu: yeah
Aija:mmmmk! Yeah
Shu: follow me then
Aija: oh yeah
Shu: fubuki is he new
Fubuki: yes master
Shu: how good is he
Fubuki: I don't really know but his desire to battle you is immense
Shu: so he did something to get here correct
Fubuki: yeah


In Ny bulls training base

Shu: fubuki can you be a rep please
Fubuki:of course master, first battle
Shu: Lets go aija
Aija: as you wish but first
*shows Thunder Ares.Zt' 9B
Aija: meet my partner Thunder Ares
Aija: its an attack type bey design to send beys flying
Shu: heh well then meet define Spriggan
*Shows define Spriggan.U' 7B
Aija: wow Spriggan has evolved
Fubuki: spriggan evolve.., right then ready master
Shu: yeah, let's go Aija
Aija:hehe
Fubuki: ready set
All: 3....2.....1 gooooo
*Aija takes a breath
Shu: what the
All : shooot

Both bey lands in the stadium Then ares gives a boost

Fubuki: his power and speed is immense
Shu: spriggan counter beak!
Aija: ares!

Both bey clashes over and over but spriggan attack seems useless!?
*Shu Then sock

Aija: Ares!!mars impluse!

Ares send spriggan fliying

Aija: c'mon elder shu! Don't hold back
Shu: don't hold back Spriggan!
Fubuki: what master went all out
Aija : huh
Shu: Define slash

*spriggan then burst Ares with one hit

Aija: wow that was unreal even tho i lost hehe
Shu: fubuki how old is he?
Fubuki: Huh, oh his 11 why do you ask that master?
Shu: make him ready
Fubuki: huh?
Shu: hei aija
Aija: yes eder shu oh wait before that let me battle you again please i want to become the world strongest just like valt did So please let me battle you
Shu: sure but practice with Fubuki then we'll battle again next time in the big stage
Aija: huh elder...shu
Shu: heh
Fubuki: why so you do that master
Shu: This will be your training
Fubuki: alright I'll do it

The next day at 04:00AM
Fubuki went to aija room

Fubuki: Hey aija wake up
Aija: huh...whaa.. a oh its elder Fubuki
Fubuki: Follow me
Aija: What for?
Fubuki: let's start with a worm up first 1000 push ups
Aija: what that much are you kidding me huh
*after 100 push ups
Aija: huft huft huft
Fubuki: next is 5km run
Aija: What That extreme huft
Fubuki smiles

Later

Aija: all................huh..........done!eh
Fubuki: lets take a rest then
Aija: Yeas

Aija: elder fubuki may i ask you a question
Fubuki: sure
Aija: do you notice Li's bey
Fubuki: yeah it's leviathan why
Aija: every time i sees that match when elder shu and valt fought him his technique
Fubuki: huh
Aija: is to inhale before launch and exhale afterwards
Fubuki: so that why you follow his launch correct
Aija: yes, but its different
Fubuki: huh
Aija: his not breathing like a normal person
Fubuki: wait what did you say again aija

Astem: good job, Li
Li: yes father

Aija: i think his not a human

Idk if the manga will finish this week because next week i have a final exam so so sorry for this

Episode 5
"私を待ってシュウ!"
Watashi o matte Shū!
Wait for me shu

Spoiler (Click to View)

Aija: do you notice something weird about Li, fubuki
Fubuki: as far as i know he looks fine why you ask
Aija: well I've been thinking isn't it sort of weird to se a veteran blader with no record beating a legend
Fubuki: ...
Aija: he even seems inhuman some times if you see him battle
Fubuki: well you cannot judge the book by it cover anyway let's continue
Aija: oh right sir

In NY bulls office

Lean: shu why do you even lose a guy like him!!! Tell me now... do you see how dangerous he'd become
Shu: sorry to make you feel bad lean I-
Lean: I'll defeat him myself then To protect your pride there is (leave the room)
Shu:........(speechless)

Aija and fubuki: goooo shoooot!!!

With a single hit Forneus burst ares

Aija: hah! No way not fair you use your full power agh!
Fubuki: your angle are off try again
Both : shooot!!

Ares got Burst by forneus

Both: shoot!!

Ares got koed by forneus

Both : shooot!!

Double burst

Fubuki : gasp* gasp*
Aija: lets go again im gasp* not gasp* done yet
Fubuki: now that the spirit
Both : 3....2....1 Gooo Shoooooot!!!

Both bey clash But forneus manages to corner ares into a bind spot ares can't do anything

Fubuki: you're finished aija just gave up
Aija: no! we're going to burst you now show him your true strength ghaaaaaaaa!!! Ares!!
Fubuki: huh? Don't let him do it forneus
Aija : yes the lineup is perfect" you're late now ares time for Mars SLASH!!!
Fubuki: wait what the... got blown away

Shock wave spreading*

Aija: AAAAAAAaaaa....passed out*
Fubuki: what was that huh he he bursted my forneus no way the kid surely got potential

Meanwhile in the mountain

Training montage

Valt: ehgk ehh.... (carrying a big rock*) huh all done
Xhan: 3 min and 20 sec new record
Sakyo: wait what no way
Xhaka: I expect nothing less
Valt: hey wheres boss and cuza
Xhaka: oh i give them a special training wanna battle valt
Valt: ya bet ya

Valt: so Xcalibur got an upgrade huh so its contact got a large hit point with metal and rubber i gotta be careful
Sakyo: ready set
Xhaka and valt: 3...2...1 gooo shooot

Both bey clashes

Xhaka: do you feel it valt
Valt: huh don't back up buddy

Valkyrie pushes Xcalibur

Xhaka: now triple impact

Xcalibur Trows valkyrie

Valt: hold on buddy

Valkyrie regains balance

Xhaka: lets finish this valt now Xcalibur!!!
Valt: think you're going to beat me let's go buddy!!

Valkyrie and Xcalibur clashes making a huge blow

Xhan: aagh what is this power
Sakyo: we better move I've a feeling that something is going to blow lets go
Xhan: right

Xcalibur and valkyrie trow blow after blow destroying the arena

Xhaka: this is it now Xcalibur Final impact!!!
Valt: valkyrieeee!!! Saint sword!!

Both bey clashes but then in an instant the stadium exploded

Rantaro: hey cuza you see that
Cuza: see what *looks a a light* What is that
Rantaro: idk but let's see that

Rantaro and cuza rushes to the light only to see valt and xhaka laying down in a exhaustion

Rantaro: valt are you okay
Valt: only a little scratch thats all
Xhaka: damn it
Cuza : look
Rantaro: huh *Sees at the broken stadium
Rantaro: valkyrie is still spinning while Xcalibur burst
Valt: i toldja
Xhaka: yeah you totally got me there dude here's *give valkyrie to valt
Valt: thanks bro

I made this one episode for 7 days lol got really exhausted

Is Aiga Aija?

Is Aiga Aija?

Aija is not aiga his an india person