(May. 14, 2021 1:27 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Episode 3
https://www.wattpad.com/1068649233-beybl...time-canon
Chapter Rating, here we go!
Plot: 5/5. We're still in the setup episodes and getting to know the cast, and everything is going smoothly up until now.
Dialogue: 5/5. "Whoever made this Bey sure has a thing for rubber" cracked me up so hard for some reason (idk if it's just me but apparently every chapter has this funny bit and I give you props for that).
Characterization: 5/5. Pretty cool as usual, and apparently Vala's hiding something...*starts speculating all the way to the sky*.
Grammar: 4.5/5. Same thing with the tenses, but I haven't caught anything else.
Battle: 4.5/5. Ngl I expected Haiden to win a round before he got rekt Ranzo-style (mainly because of the title) but this works too. My boy, you have to up your game if you wanna have a shot at beating Alena.
Final Rating: 24/25. Neat chapter, looking forward to see how the next battle's gonna play out.
Also random note: I just realized King Spriggan uses a Disc Frame and a Metal Ring of the same name (Axe). Huh.
I'll definitely put something here soon.
Probably.
Maybe?
Naaaaah.