[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade: Angels {~A Dark Beyblade Story~}

(Apr. 18, 2021  4:43 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Apr. 18, 2021  4:41 AM)beykid44 Wrote: cool system It's simple yet so complex
Also is it oke if i call you senpai?

Sorry but no.

oke
(Apr. 18, 2021  4:39 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: System Description

Angel Layer System

Metal Ring - a metal ring that goes on top of the Layer

Layer - just a regular energy layer. The layer will also contain 2 holes for the Metal Ring to attach to.

Disk

Driver

That's... simple and creative at the same time. Instead of a layer with multiple parts, why not just slap a metal ring on a regular layer? I like it!
Crusher Anahel .Dk.Nr -Massacre Description

Metal Ring: -Massacre - a metal ring that has 3 blades for extra attack

Layer: Crusher Anahel (CA) - features 3 large black blades that are sloped up for upper attack and 3 smaller white rubber blades that are sloped downwards for smash attacks. Motif is Anahel, the angel that ruled the third heaven.

Disk: Darkness (Dk) - a disk that looks like Convert but without the weight change and doesn't scrape as much but is incredibly bulky and heavy.

Driver: Narrow (Nr) - a driver of about average height. Narrow has a very bulky design shape with a rubber ring like Venture and a flat tip like Accel.

User: Alena Yagami (Main Character)

Moves: Crusher Death, Crushing Blast, Narrow Counter, Angels End
Nice Sounds like this is going to be popular just hope WBO does not shut this thread down
First 7 episodes

Episode 1: Angel Of Darkness! Crusher Anahel!
Episode 2: Wipe Out! Anahels Carnage!
Episode 3: Boom! Horogiums Challenge!
Episode 4: Outrage! Anahel Breaks Through!
Episode 5: Vala Is Here! Cosmic Valkyrie!
Episode 6: Going in Hot! Valas Challenge!
Episode 7: Mad Storm! Flame Ragnaruk!
(Apr. 18, 2021  5:32 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Nice Sounds like this is going to be popular just hope WBO does not shut this thread down

Don't worry, it won't. The thread follows the guidelines, and there's nothing against someone creating a thread for their fanfics.
Canon Horogium 0Bump Yielding -Warp

Metal Ring: -Warp - a Metal Ring that looks a Mobius Strip. In theory, it should retain stamina easy.

Canon Horogium Layer (CH) - has the same shape as the Basalt Wheel from MFB. Has a Horogium motif, a clock constellation.

0Bump Disk

Yielding Driver

User: Hayden Karuno

Moves: Canon Wall, Canon Paradox
Interesting. One suggestion for beyblade names:
Raziel
For context: Hell made many attempts to overthrow the WBBA. Every attempt failed.
(Apr. 18, 2021  9:32 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: For context: Hell made many attempts to overthrow the WBBA. Every attempt failed.

wbba was just built different
(Apr. 18, 2021  9:32 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: For context: Hell made many attempts to overthrow the WBBA. Every attempt failed.

I kinda feel bad for them XD
King Spriggan 7W Zt' -Axe
Ultimate Achilles 0L Dm' -Shield
Flame Ragnaruk Ω Et -Wing
Star Dragon Ig' -Awakening
will there be a character contest?
(Apr. 20, 2021  5:26 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: King Spriggan 7W Zt' -Axe
Ultimate Achilles 0L Dm' -Shield
Flame Ragnaruk Ω Et -Wing
Star Dragon Ig' -Awakening

oooh yay does drum have dragon?
(Apr. 20, 2021  2:51 PM)pika2442 Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  5:26 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: King Spriggan 7W Zt' -Axe
Ultimate Achilles 0L Dm' -Shield
Flame Ragnaruk Ω Et -Wing
Star Dragon Ig' -Awakening

oooh yay does drum have dragon?

No. Its gonna be entirely new characters.
(Apr. 20, 2021  4:07 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  2:51 PM)pika2442 Wrote: oooh yay does drum have dragon?

No. Its gonna be entirely new characters.

ooooh cool
(Apr. 20, 2021  2:23 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: will there be a character contest?

A bey contest yes
(Apr. 20, 2021  4:08 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  2:23 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: will there be a character contest?

A bey contest yes

Hmm, cool. Let's see if I can come up with something new this time.
(Apr. 20, 2021  4:08 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  2:23 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: will there be a character contest?

A bey contest yes

Form?

Can't wait seriously. I love bey/character contests
(Apr. 20, 2021  5:04 PM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  4:08 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: A bey contest yes

Form?

It wont begin until I release the 1st episode.
hmmm. interesting.
Cosmic Valkyrie 12Vortex Volt -Sword

Metal Ring: -Sword - feaatures 3 sword like blades.

Layer: Cosmic Valkyrie (CV) - has the traditional Valkyrie shape. Between the 3 swords is a gold rubber wing. The 3 swords tips are pointed forward for major damage.

Disk: 12Vortex

Driver: Volt (Vt) - basically Power but the tip is made of Rubber

Owner: Vala Aoi

Moves: Cosmic Saber, Rush Shoot
(Apr. 20, 2021  6:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Cosmic Valkyrie 12Vortex Power -Sword

Metal Ring: -Sword - feaatures 3 sword like blades.

Layer: Cosmic Valkyrie (CV) - has the traditional Valkyrie shape. Between the 3 swords is a gold rubber wing. The 3 swords tips are pointed forward for major damage.

Disk: 12Vortex

Driver: Power

Owner: Vala Aoi

Moves: Cosmic Saber, Rush Shoot

whos vala aoi. valts kid? im not gonna say who he married cuz that might start a war. so is if valts kid? or second cousin removed or something.
(Apr. 20, 2021  6:52 PM)eggblader Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  6:49 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Cosmic Valkyrie 12Vortex Power -Sword

Metal Ring: -Sword - feaatures 3 sword like blades.

Layer: Cosmic Valkyrie (CV) - has the traditional Valkyrie shape. Between the 3 swords is a gold rubber wing. The 3 swords tips are pointed forward for major damage.

Disk: 12Vortex

Driver: Power

Owner: Vala Aoi

Moves: Cosmic Saber, Rush Shoot

whos vala aoi. valts kid? im not gonna say who he married cuz that might start a war. so is if valts kid? or second cousin removed or something.

Maybe. Your theory is definitely interesting.
(Apr. 20, 2021  7:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Apr. 20, 2021  6:52 PM)eggblader Wrote: whos vala aoi. valts kid? im not gonna say who he married cuz that might start a war. so is if valts kid? or second cousin removed or something.

Maybe. Your theory is definitely interesting.

ima say it then. shasa.