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[Fan Fiction]  Beyblade: Angels {~A Dark Beyblade Story~}

Nov. 19, 2020  10:34 PM
 
This is going to be a new story instead of a oneshot series so stay tuned for more info.

Many Years After The Events Of Sparking; Alena Yagami, a 14 year old girl who was once apart of HELL at a young age, the organization that nearly changed Beyblade forever. Finally realizing HELLs reputation and its failures, Alena vows to "rid the blading world of the trash that is ruining the name of Beyblade". Alena and her bey: Crusher Anahel, fight with overwhelming strength as they crush everyone in their way to their goal! however her methods are less than ideal.

This caused society to cast her out, but not giving a care in the world Alena continues her rampage without thinking the consequences and not knowing that one day this could bite her back.

This is the story of Alena Yagami, the girl who caused chaos and terror in the blading world!

Episode Count: 52

Crusher Anahel Darkness Narrow -Massacre -> Twilight Anahel Gr Th (Alena Yagami, Protagonist)
Canon Horogium 0Bump Yielding -Warp -> Karma Haziel Wheel Metal Xtend+ (Haiden Karuno, Rival)
Fallen Abaddon 0Dagger αlter -> Abaddon Reborn Tw Rf (Akira Uzamara, Antagonist)
Cosmic Valkyrie 12Vortex Volt -Sword (Vala Aoi)
Enchanted Spriggan 0Wall Quattro' -Axe (Selena Kurenai)
Flame Ragnaruk Ωuter Eternal -Wing (Rangelina Kiyama)
Ultimate Achilles 0Lift Dimension' -Shield (Ava Akaba)
Star Dragon Ignition' -Awakening (Daiku Koryu)
Rampage Longinus Drake Savage -Devastate (Lena Shirosagijo)
Phantom Fafnir 00Proof Kick -Drain (Far De La Hoya)
Havoc Satan Hurricane Roller -Hell (Sora Karlisle)
Soul Deathscyther 0Vortex Jaggy' -Scythe (Daila Kurogami)
Legend Xcalibur Align Sword' (Xin Kazemura)
Quake Wyvern Hurricane Just -Pulse (Willow Komurasaki)
Starlight Zeus Around Planet -Thunder (Zayne The Sunset)
Scorch Kitsune Wheel Xceed' -Tail (Kai Vancouver)

Contest Characters
PinkRose - Droite Vireir
Dragon Blader Z - Izuki Anamo
ZionandBirddo - Gaito Akaza
CheetoBlader - Jojo Apoloian
@tenma - Hiroki Miyamura
i'm batman - Rana Badawi
THunderACE4 - Gavrilo Toljic
Ryuga's Son - Jigoku Noroi
LJ-Blader - Tabito Saduko
6Jupiter5 - Zhongli Belmont

Episode List
Spoiler (Click to View)
Potential Season 2
Beys (Tentative)
Raid Anahel Ny Rt - Final Anahel Ny Rt
Loop Horogium Hn Wr
Evolution Valkyrie Bn Zp
Ultimate Athena Sh Vr
Shroud Behemoth Bm Ac
Cyber Spriggan Wp Md
Vortex Ragnaruk Cy El
Burst Dragon Fn Pr
Xiphos Achilles Zt Hg
Murder Longinus Dn Rm
Ghoul Fafnir Rb St
Alpha Kitsune Sp Lg
Transform Bahamut Pn Sn
Alena Yagami
Bera Azuki
Kane Vasquez
Pan Zanuro
Pietro Shinoki
Nov. 19, 2020  10:35 PM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  10:34 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: This is just random scenarios featuring my Beyblade OC's: Athena, Alexis and Angelina

WARNING: Dont expect good writing.


2 Scenarios every month

Sounds good
Nov. 19, 2020  10:56 PM
 
Can you my oc Shun Lisa Kurenai
Nov. 19, 2020  10:59 PM
 
Custom Products (NOT OFFICIAL)
Spoiler (Click to View)
(Nov. 19, 2020  10:56 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can you my oc Shun Lisa Kurenai

Sorry but I'm not taking anyones OC.
Nov. 19, 2020  11:03 PM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  10:59 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 19, 2020  10:56 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can you my oc Shun Lisa Kurenai

Sorry but I'm not taking anyones OC.
Oof
Nov. 19, 2020  11:17 PM
 
Scenario 1: *Neko Sounds Intensifies*

Angelina: Nya~

Alexis: *glares at Athena* what have you done?

Athena: It wasn't me this time!!!

Angelina: Nya~

Alexis: Oh god-
Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM
 
dh ’fhaodadh tu leasachadh air do fhad (translate this to English idk why)
Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: dh ’fhaodadh tu leasachadh air do fhad (translate this to English idk why)


you could improve your length
Nov. 19, 2020  11:43 PM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: dh ’fhaodadh tu leasachadh air do fhad (translate this to English idk why)

These are meant to be short.
Nov. 19, 2020  11:46 PM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:43 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: dh ’fhaodadh tu leasachadh air do fhad (translate this to English idk why)

These are meant to be short.

Yeah, but these are super short. Seeing as these are a series of short stories it would be nice if they weren’t 16 words, and if you are trying to keep it short I would recommend increasing the word limit to like 25 or 30
Nov. 19, 2020  11:53 PM
 
Scenario 2: Mayonnaise

Athena: Is mayonnaise an instrument?

Alexis: No Athena, Mayonnaise is not an instrument.

Angelina: What about pickles?

Alexis: Yall have been watching SpongeBob haven't you?

Athena/Angelina: Yes.

Alexis: *Facepalm*
Nov. 20, 2020  2:50 AM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Scenario 2: Mayonnaise

Athena: Is mayonnaise an instrument?

Alexis: No Athena, Mayonnaise is not an instrument.

Angelina: What about pickles?

Alexis: Yall have been watching SpongeBob haven't you?

Athena/Angelina: Yes.

Alexis: *Facepalm*

Meanwhile:
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Nov. 20, 2020  2:52 AM
 
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:17 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Scenario 1: *Neko Sounds Intensifies*

Angelina: Nya~

Alexis: *glares at Athena* what have you done?

Athena: It wasn't me this time!!!

Angelina: Nya~

Alexis: Oh god-

nice
(Nov. 19, 2020  11:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Scenario 2: Mayonnaise

Athena: Is mayonnaise an instrument?

Alexis: No Athena, Mayonnaise is not an instrument.

Angelina: What about pickles?

Alexis: Yall have been watching SpongeBob haven't you?

Athena/Angelina: Yes.

Alexis: *Facepalm*

this got me laughing lol
Apr. 17, 2021  11:46 PM
 
So ive changed this oneshot series into an actual Beyblade fanfic. I'll still keep the oneshots up so you can cringe your life away. So far you get 3 beys right now

Crusher Anahel Dk Nr -Massacre (Protag Bey)
Cosmic Valkyrie 12V Pw -Sword
Canon Horogium 0B Y -Warp
Apr. 17, 2021  11:51 PM
 
I swear I thought this was a new thread
But anyway my Senpai has made a New 1/2 fanfic time to read my life away, AGAIN!
Apr. 18, 2021  12:21 AM
 
(Apr. 17, 2021  11:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So ive changed this oneshot series into an actual Beyblade fanfic. I'll still keep the oneshots up so you can cringe your life away. So far you get 3 beys right now

Crusher Anahel Dk Nr -Massacre (Protag Bey)
Cosmic Valkyrie 12V Pw -Sword
Canon Horogium 0B Y -Warp

Huh, even tho I have no idea what the fic is even about at this point I'm interested.
Apr. 18, 2021  12:43 AM
 
(Apr. 18, 2021  12:21 AM)PinkRose Wrote:
(Apr. 17, 2021  11:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So ive changed this oneshot series into an actual Beyblade fanfic. I'll still keep the oneshots up so you can cringe your life away. So far you get 3 beys right now

Crusher Anahel Dk Nr -Massacre (Protag Bey)
Cosmic Valkyrie 12V Pw -Sword
Canon Horogium 0B Y -Warp

Huh, even tho I have no idea what the fic is even about at this point I'm interested.

Added the summary to the first post.
Apr. 18, 2021  12:47 AM
 
oohhhhhhh sick can't wait
Apr. 18, 2021  12:56 AM
 
This story is not really ok becuase a lot of people have strong feelings about what you are talking about
nvm I did not read the whole thing thru my mistake just forget what I said
Apr. 18, 2021  1:13 AM
 
Huh, looks spicy.
Also, this might sound a bit annoying but are you doing a Character Contest for this one?
Apr. 18, 2021  1:17 AM
 
(Apr. 18, 2021  1:13 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Huh, looks spicy.
Also, this might sound a bit annoying but are you doing a Character Contest for this one?

Maybe. Haven't really decided yet.
Apr. 18, 2021  4:05 AM
 
Anti-hero protagonist? This should be interesting. I'll be waiting for the 1st chapter.
Apr. 18, 2021  4:39 AM
 
System Description

Angel Layer System

Metal Ring - a metal ring that goes on top of the Layer

Layer - just a regular energy layer. The layer will also contain 2 holes for the Metal Ring to attach to.

Disk

Driver
Apr. 18, 2021  4:41 AM
 
(Apr. 18, 2021  4:39 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: System Description

Angel Layer System

Metal Ring - a metal ring that goes on top of the Layer

Layer - just a regular energy layer. The layer will also contain 2 holes for the Metal Ring to attach to.

Disk

Driver

cool system It's simple yet so complex
Also is it oke if i call you senpai?
Apr. 18, 2021  4:43 AM
 
(Apr. 18, 2021  4:41 AM)beykid44 Wrote:
(Apr. 18, 2021  4:39 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: System Description

Angel Layer System

Metal Ring - a metal ring that goes on top of the Layer

Layer - just a regular energy layer. The layer will also contain 2 holes for the Metal Ring to attach to.

Disk

Driver

cool system It's simple yet so complex
Also is it oke if i call you senpai?

Sorry but no.
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