[Fan Fiction]  (Beansworth's Fanfics)Beyblade X: Spark and Beyblade Burst: Mythic Burst(On Hiatus)

epic chapter, haha funny breaks

I guess making new pages is my job
It used to be my job but I pass it down to you
(Mar. 04, 2022  8:55 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It used to be my job but I pass it down to you
Ah, I remember the days...Lol
(Mar. 04, 2022  9:05 PM)beansworth Wrote:
(Mar. 04, 2022  8:55 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: It used to be my job but I pass it down to you
Ah, I remember the days...Lol

Yeah those days were fun
(Nov. 30, 2021  3:41 PM)beansworth Wrote: I've worked on this fanfiction for about 4 months and wanted to post it for some opinions on how it is.
This series takes place, about 16 years after DB and features the Mythical System.

The Mythical system consists of 5 parts, the Mythical Core, Mythical Blade, Mythical Armor, Disc and Driver. 


The Mythical Core, is similar to the DB Core and Gachi Chip, the Mythical Blade is similar to the Sparking Rings and DB Blade, the Mythical Armor is similar to the Single Chassis from Sparking, and discs and drivers are the same. 


Here are the character profiles:

Keith Shadis
Age:16
Height:5'9"

Beyblades: Astral Ragnurok Tapered Zeta' 3 (Random Combo)   Destruction Kratos Shift Xtend+Metal Equal (Main Bey)

Baki Alcazaba
Age:16
Height:5'3"

Beyblades: Guilty Fafnir Nexus+S Xceed (Random Combo)  Dynamic Bahamut Shift Atomic Metal Pressure (Main Bey)

Beyblade Burst
Mystic!
Chapter 1: Keith Shadis, Blader from Europe
A boat sails into frame
???: “Nice, I’m finally here!”
???: “Japan! Birthplace of Beyblade!”

The boat docks and ??? runs to the ladder down
???: “3..2..1..Go Shoot!”
Two bladers were battling in the park.
Baki: “I’ll beat you, my bey Gulity Fafnir will burst your bey instantly!”
Benny: “No you won’t, Prominence Belial, outspin him!”
Baki’s Guilty Fafnir then hit Benny’s Bey into the sky and it burst.
Baki: “See I won!”
??? walked up to Baki
???: “You like to Beyblade?”
Baki: “Yeah I love beyblading!”
???: “Well I’m Keith, and this is my bey Astral Ragnurok!”
Then on the T.Vs, BC Sol’s headquarters was shown.
Baki and Keith: “BC Sol, I’ll join their team one day.”
Valt walked into frame.
Keith (His Thoughts): “Valt! He’s so cool, one day I want to battle him!
Valt: “Yo what’s up?”
Valt: “I came with news about the blading world!”
Baki and Keith stood there ready for the news.
Valt grabbed his Beyblade, Holy Valkyrie
Valt: “A new Beyblade system has been announced! The Mystical System!”
Baki and Keith: *Gasp*
Valt took Valkyrie apart and placed it on the table in front of him.
Valt: “There are five parts in the Beyblade, the Core, the Blade, the Armor, the Disc, and the Driver.”
Keith looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that!
Baki looked at Valkyrie, I want to make a bey like that and Boa’s bey!
Valt then put Valkyrie back together.
Valt: “Now go out there and make some Mystic Beys!”
Then the T.V turned off, and Baki and Keith were excited ready to make their Mystic Beys
Baki: “Hey Keith, why don’t you come to my place to make a Mystic Bey too!”
Baki told Keith to his house to make Mystic Beys.
Inside Baki’s mansion, Baki’s maid, Irene came over and opened the door.
Irene: “Hello, Master Baki, you’ve returned home.”
Baki: “Irene, get the 3d printers ready.”
Irene: “Ugh, yes Master Baki.”
Irene had worked for Baki since she was 7 years old.
In the printer room, Baki and Keith were typing away on their keyboards.
Keith: “I need ultimate balance in my bey!
Baki: “Defense is the key in my bey!”
Then in about 1 hour, both Keith and Baki’s bey were done.
Keith: “My bey, Destruction Kratos is done now!”
Baki: “Dynamic Bahamut is finished as well.”
In the battle room.
Keith: “Alright Baki, let’s battle!”
Baki: “I’m down.”
Thoma, Baki’s butler, came downstairs to Baki and Keith
Thoma: “Master Baki asked me to be the referee of this match.”
Thoma: “Inspect your opponent’s Beyblade”
Keith’s mind “Bahamut is a counter-clockwise spinning bey, with a transforming blade, it seems to have the same disc as my bey, it’s driver features a huge metal ball too!”
Baki’s mind “Kratos is a clockwise spinning bey, with bound blades within all its two sides, those axes seem to be the biggest threat, we have the same disc, and his driver is like Aiga’s but with metal as the tip, hm, I’ll need to put everything into my launch.”
Thoma: “Ready and set!”
Baki: “3!”
Keith: “2!”
Baki and Keith: “1!”
“Go shoot!”
Baki spun in a circle before landing on both feet, pulling off a excellent launch
Keith pulled his ripcord as hard as possible, pulling off a good launch.
Bahamut drift, until it took the center
Keith: “Your going down Baki!”
Baki: “No I won’t lose, Bahamut!”
Bahamut’s avatar appeared, and Keith got ready for his assault.
Keith: “Kratos, awaken!”
Kratos’ avatar appeared, it’s axe gleamed.
Keith: “Bound Axe!”
Kratos slammed into the wall and it’s bound blade fully bound off the wall.
Keith: “Now, Destruction Impact!
Kratos slammed into Bahamut, and burst itself.
Keith: “What just happened!”
Baki: “We need better launches that’s what.”
The Next Day
Keith was staying at Baki’s mansion, and the three went out on errands for Baki’s parents.
Irene walked over to a jewelery store to look around whilst Baki and Keith went to the park to see all the bladers in town.
???: “Now, end him!”
Baki and Keith walked over and saw a caped boy.
???: “Fallen Valkyrie, Fallen Wing Beat!
Baki and Keith: “Valkyrie!?”

this roleplay is awsome
(Mar. 04, 2022  9:32 PM)demon_king Wrote:
(Nov. 30, 2021  3:41 PM)beansworth Wrote:

this roleplay is awsome
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Not really a roleplay, but I won't blame you.
Okay so after thinking about it, Mystical has some changes each spoiler will have some changes.

Amount of Chapters.
Chapter Release Dates.
Future of Mystical/Odyssey
I've done this before but if you could give feedback for Mystical that would help me with the upcoming arcs.

Story-1/10

Plot-1/10

Characters-1/10

Length-1/10

Battles(The Bey Battles)-1/10

This would help improve Mystical so if you could please fill this out.
Chapter time Chapter time!

32, let's go!
Yeah! Keith and Irene ship time, and Baki and Lucy need to talk?
(Mar. 09, 2022  10:45 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: So what’s the talk for
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I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.
(Mar. 09, 2022  1:56 PM)beansworth Wrote: Chapter time Chapter time!

32, let's go!
Yeah! Keith and Irene ship time, and Baki and Lucy need to talk?

Izuku's Debute is actually very good in this episode. Izuku kinda did Irene dirty by just spending most of is time with Keith. Me literally forgets that Irene and Keith are a thing now. Anyways I'm pretty excited for the Next Couple of Chapters and what's coming for the future of this fanfic! Keep up the Amazing Work and you did Amazing on Izuku's Introduction!
(Mar. 09, 2022  11:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Mar. 09, 2022  10:45 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: So what’s the talk for
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I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.

Man that would be cool like Tsubasa
(Mar. 10, 2022  6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote:
(Mar. 09, 2022  11:39 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
I think it is about how Baki is secretly an agent hired by the WBBA to stop Van, not sure tho.

Man that would be cool like Tsubasa
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Yeah, but I lied DJ - Yeah!
(Mar. 10, 2022  7:36 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Mar. 10, 2022  6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Man that would be cool like Tsubasa
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Yeah, but I lied DJ - Yeah!
Haha, I never finished Metal Fight, so I don't get the Tsubasa joke. Although I should finish Metal Fight.
(Mar. 10, 2022  7:36 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:
(Mar. 10, 2022  6:19 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Man that would be cool like Tsubasa
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Yeah, but I lied DJ - Yeah!

You lied!! OMG you traitor jk
*waiting for next chapter be like*
(yes i'm bumping this, cry about it)
What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18

New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory
Chapter 33: Shipping Time, plus a bey evolution.

Chapter 33:

Next time on Beyblade Burst: Mystical!

Keith, Irene and Kaede face off aganist legendary bladers, Lui, Bell and Drum. Can they win or will they lose trying to beat the legends, find out on Chapter 34!

Keith: "3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!"
(Mar. 15, 2022  1:52 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18

New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory

Wait is there a character contest here?
(Mar. 16, 2022  12:20 AM)Anime Blader Wrote:
(Mar. 15, 2022  1:52 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: What Barry’s appearance would be like as an teenager and adult(Long post ik)
Also he had a massive growth spurt
Age: 13
Height: 5’2
Weight: 93 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 14
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125 lbs
Body type: slim
Age: 15
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Body type: toned from Beyblade(Yes it’s a sport deal with it)
Age: 16
Height: 5’11
Weight: 154 lbs
Body type: toned
Age: 17
Height: 6’1
Weight: 210 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(ITS A SPORT)
Age: 18
Height: 6’2
Weight: 215 lbs
Body type: muscular from Beyblade(it’s a sport
Age: 19
Height: 6’4
Weight: 225 lbs
Body type: same as ages 17-18

New OC(very uncalled for)
Eren Jaeger(I decided to try an anime name like beansworth’s Keith)
Age: 15
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown
Personality: A energetic boy that can be aggressive but also has an encyclopedic knowledge of Beyblade.
Power Level: (Same as Barry)
Height: 5’7
Weight: 139 lbs
Beyblade: Charred Eurynomos Weight Hunter’
Layer: Charred Eurynomos: A 2-bladed layer with metal mounted on the blades and 4 standard locks: Weight: 42.1 grams
Disc: Weight: A very heavy disc: Weight: 40.1 grams
Driver: Hunter’: self-explanatory

Wait is there a character contest here?

Nah just a very uncalled for OC
(Mar. 16, 2022  12:41 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2022  12:20 AM)Anime Blader Wrote: Wait is there a character contest here?

Nah just a very uncalled for OC

Oh because I have a cool oc I would've liked to enter if there was one
shipping chapter pog haha
(Mar. 16, 2022  12:49 PM)DJCAT8608 Wrote: shipping chapter pog haha
Haha, it's more of a calm before the storm chapter. The storm being the 3v3 Battles.

(Mar. 16, 2022  1:07 AM)Anime Blader Wrote:
(Mar. 16, 2022  12:41 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Nah just a very uncalled for OC

Oh because I have a cool oc I would've liked to enter if there was one
Sure, I can listen and see, the OC might not make it, though because of plot constrants.
*meanwhile my OC watching how this plays out to come in at the perfect time lol*
3v3 battles gonna be epic tho cause haha idk what to say anymore
Question, should I include the little previews, after every chapter?