This is an authentic story that may touch the hearts of hundreds of bladers across the world.and I was going to enter
this first chapter in a tournement but it was tragically shut down because of athority reasons .Thanks to the following online personel who helped me in a small way to make this story happen even if the story wasnt put in a tournement
these are those bladers :dark aquario 55,coach,tri ,luck, and even the host of the tournement whose name shall be preseved.

Prolouge

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In kagetsu village beyblade was tragically banished and all bladers who were caught battling was given a choice
be exiled from the village and never return again or harsh punishment chosen by the council .But one boy was determined to find his inner blader and fight for the forgotten tradition .will the boy fight for the forgotten or fight
and lose his clans honor

Chapter 1

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THE DECISION
'"The next person to battle in this village will never see his or her family again."'the counsultant announced .Kazuki looked at the bladers who wanted to speak but couldnt.All of those people who were full of health and happyness were broken."What are we going to do now Zuki?"Zhang said with sorrow "I don't Zhang,I just dont know"replied kazuki with a fear struck face.
"Honey what happened you look like you seen a ghost."Kira said to Kazuki with a look of concern. " nothing mom" Kazuki replied refusing to look at his mom. "You dont sound like your happy."Kira said"whats wrong honey" "can you just drop it im in a foul mood"Kazuki said
"But..."Kira began "I SAID DROP IT MOM"Kazuki said with great force and stormed out
with his launcer and his bey

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your nightmare is my daydream hahahaxD

Awesome

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sorry i got to go to church so the chapter 1 will be a hour or two late :<

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ok scratch that cuz im back a hour early

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THANX TO *Ginga* FOR THE WICKED SIG

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(((•))) (((•)))

your nightmare is my daydream hahahaxD

Grammar Nazi, RETURNS!


Ight, so there are A LOT, of grammar mistakes. Starting off, the capitalization isn't there, at ALL, as it seems, the punctuation isn't that good either, as i see little to none of it. Also, the chapter itself is pretty small. Some spelling mistakes here and there etc.

Overall, you should use, like microsoft word to type up these stories.

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PLEASE READ MY STORY PLEASE ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

sorry about that ill fix it im new to storie writing
ps it was only the prolouge

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THANX TO *Ginga* FOR THE WICKED SIG

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(((•))) (((•)))

your nightmare is my daydream hahahaxD