I have been drawing a manga for a while recently and got about 6 books done so I decided to scan and upload one to here. I put them on a website for easier updates.

I made all the books and drew the pages. I then scanned all the pages, cropped them, and fixed some details.

Enjoy! It will be updated periodically.

http://evolutionmanga.webs.com

its good i say you need a better artist no offensive

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LOL.
You can't expect him to be pro right off the bat. :\
He will gain experience and learn techniques to make it look smoother like on television.

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I think the Manga is ok, but the drawings seem rushed. I mean i can obviously tell you a good artist but the drawings are 50/50 sometimes they look good but they times they look rushed.

yeah take time i say you re draw it and like add ink instead of pencil

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Hey I think it's a decent manga! The storyline is kinda interesting too, keep going dude!

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wow what a small world! I too love manga with a passion, and I made several stories myself. I'm no where near experienced though.

I just think your poll is messed up.

Don't stop, just keep going! Despite the art not being incredible, keep practicing! And if you think you've done enough practice.. practice MORE!

There's nothing you can do to improve your drawing except constantly practicing until your mind/imagination can fully correspond with your hands. Once your art improves, your manga will be awesome.

So for now, giving up isn't even an option. Of course the manga won't be amazing. Obviously at this point, no one would really "want" to continue reading it. But that's not the point. The point is, keep practicing and improve your art.

And while your art it, read alot of manga out there, and take in how famous manga-ka's lay out there story. Also, always see how manga-ka's "tell" the story through their art. Soon enough, you'll master "what" to draw in order to convey your story.

Keep practicing buddy, and I hope to see greater work by you soon!

EDIT: Hahaha wow.. i just realized this whole forum is incredibly interested and very talented in manga... xPP

actually i decided to make the 6 books I made a rough draft and start over drawing better because the whole thing was rushed. since now I'm out of school for the summer i can concentrate

Lol THIS IS GOOD BUT I NOTICED THE STORY IS LIKE HIKARU NO GO'S STORY BUT KEEP WORKINGH ON IT (SORRY FOR THE CAPS)

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yeah actually its kind of an unintended mix of hikaru no go and shaman king lol

nice manga l must sey your good
but the drawings need a little work

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