Drowning (M) - Short Story

My New Story!

(Based off a piece I did for English GCSE "Descriptive Writing" practice last year - it's not very long because the descriptive writing has to be kept to about a page and this is the best I could come up with)

What the...that was amazing! It was awesome!
I just saw a few missing spaces but it was still nothing less than one of the greatest things I've ever read! Keep writing stories, your amazing!
It was amazing! Keep up the great work! I wish it was longer tho, even though it's a short story!
OK this is a good story, I read it. Good work out ~!
I like it. Smile

Although I don't like reading stories, but this one attracted me, for some reason, hah.