DigiMon: Makoto's Adventures

.:J:. · Jul. 02, 2012 8:45 PM

hey T.L if you need any help with digimon stories Just post here: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-The-digital-Bug

It seems your friend posted on here, so if you need any help with digimon info just ask, I know quite alot.

T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 02, 2012 9:19 PM

You got it!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 02, 2012 11:38 PM

Hey, don't give him all the credit, I'm helping with this story, too!
All I am is his friend, instead of co-writer apparently....

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 02, 2012 11:47 PM

@ Kai8000: You tell him!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 03, 2012 5:21 PM

Here are the new digivices for the characters: Makoto's: orange d-arc with a silver circle around screen Kanes: Green d-arc with white around screen. Rix: red with white around screen Rix's sister (Keep forgetting the name): Gold with silver around screen.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 03, 2012 7:31 PM

@ Kai8000: Her name is Chelsea

Also, these new Digivices will appear in a much later chapter!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 03, 2012 11:10 PM

Ok then, I just wanted to have a "sneak-peak" of the Digivices.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 04, 2012 1:24 AM

You mean you wanted to provide a sneak peek!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 1:35 AM

OK, whatever, I gave a sneak peek. I have a new character!:

Name: Yuuto Daishima
Creator: Kai8000
Age: 11
Digivice: Completely silver d-arc, never had a v-pet
Partner: Monodramon
Desc: Dissapearer at the age of 8 to the Digital World. He had never had a v-pet and it is unknown how he got to the Digital World. Has a huge crush on Kane's sister, Nya. He has brown hair and green eyes. Brown cargo pants and a bandage on his arm. Out of all of the characters in the story he has been in the Digital World and with digimon the most. He has a camouflage t-shirt.
Extra notes: I named his first name after Matt from "Digimon Adventure"s Japanese voice actor. He is Makoto's twin brother.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 04, 2012 1:51 AM

(Jul. 04, 2012 1:35 AM)Kai8000 Wrote: OK, whatever, I gave a sneak peek. I have a new character!:

Name: Yuuto Daishima
Creator: Kai800
Age: 11
Digivice: Completely silver d-arc, never had a v-pet
Partner: Monodramon
Desc: Disappeared at the age of 8 to the Digital World. He had never had a v-pet, and it is unknown how he got to there. Has a huge crush on Kane's sister, Nya. He has brown hair and green eyes. Brown cargo pants and a bandage on his arm. Out of all of the characters in the story he has been in the Digital World, and with digimon the most. He has a camouflage t-shirt.
Extra notes: I named his first name after Matt from "Digimon Adventure"s Japanese voice actor. He is Makoto's twin brother.

Fixed

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 1:53 AM

Um.. OK. Do you like it?

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 04, 2012 2:12 AM

It's fabulous! I might have to come up with a flashback-type interlude narrated by Makoto himself

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Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 2:46 AM

Great idea! I'd say, even though we're only on chapter 1, I think this story will go great!

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Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 5:39 PM

I can't wait till chapter 2 is up Grin

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Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 6:43 PM

(Jul. 04, 2012 5:39 PM)Kai8000 Wrote: I can't wait till chapter 2 is up

Whoops, sorry for having two post in a row, I forgot to just add it as a edit for quote.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 04, 2012 7:07 PM

That's alright!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 04, 2012 11:59 PM

Good news, me and T.L-Drago are finishing up on chapter 2!

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 05, 2012 3:27 AM

@ Kai8000: Don't get too excited!

This chapter isn't finished yet, but I will do what I can!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 05, 2012 4:33 AM

I know, but its going to be AWESOME.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 05, 2012 4:35 AM

@ Kai8000: Can't really blame you for being younger than me

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 07, 2012 9:54 PM

You are 8 years older, never mind that, how many paragraphs are there for chapter 2 done?
EDIT: How long till chapter two will be done?!

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Driger Kai · Jul. 09, 2012 2:29 AM

(Jul. 02, 2012 7:48 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote:
(Jul. 02, 2012 7:47 PM)T. L-Drago 9207 Wrote: Glad you liked it!

Dude, I saw Kai-V reading this. No lie lol.

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T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 15, 2012 4:04 AM

Chapter 2 is up and running, and ready to be read!

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

T. L-Drago 9207 · Jul. 16, 2012 4:03 PM

Name: Reiko Hiyama
Creator: Kai8000
Partner: Tentomon
Age: 13
Digivice: crimson D-Arc
Desc: Blonde short hair, green eyes and a black hoodie. Like the others, was brought to the DigiWorld via virtual pet portal. A loner, without much friends until he meets the other Tamers. Not much is known about his past.

"It is written among the limitless constellations of the celestial heavens, and in the depths of the emerald seas, and upon every grain of sand in the vast deserts, that the world which we see is an outed and visible dream of an inward and invisible reality." - Opening narration, The Thief and the Cobbler (original workprint)

Driger Kai · Jul. 16, 2012 4:35 PM

Also his name is from BlackWarGreymon's japanese voice actors last name and Davis' Japanese voice actor's first name.

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