Here is my story:
Chapter 1: Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide

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As I run, I feel my heart pumping five-hundred miles per hour. My head is bleeding so much, I'm getting dizzy, I see one of them. I wake up in a cold sweat. "Whew, just a dream." I said tiredly. The door slips open, slowly but surely. No, a zombie is coming, I can tell by the horrible smell. I check out the room, bat, knife, and a small bottle that says "Drink me." (Deja Vu), and my backpack. I grab the bottle and shove it in the backpack, then hold the bat and knife. I put on my jacket so I wont get bitten. "Lets do this." I say.

I am taking characters because I don't have many characters.

Okay, I believe this is illegal. No drugs and alcohol are allowed to be discussed on this site, and I think that bottle is referring to that.

Also ,even if this is legal, it needs a LOT of work:

1. It's very short.
2. No real dialogue.
3. No strong, explainable plot.

Just, Ugh...

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No, it wasn't a drug, I said Deja Vu because of Alice in Wondeland. It is salt mashed into a liquid, it cures zombie bites. (strange huh)

Hmmm, like DefStamina88 said, the chapter is too short. Is almost impossible to know the story in one paragraph.

I'll send a character for you, but I need to know about the story first.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fKFYMMdwBcU&

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