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Delete This - akio314 - Jun. 05, 2012

Here is my story:
Chapter 1: Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide

I am taking characters because I don't have many characters.


RE: Life or Death (My story) - DefStamina88 - Jun. 05, 2012

Okay, I believe this is illegal. No drugs and alcohol are allowed to be discussed on this site, and I think that bottle is referring to that.

Also ,even if this is legal, it needs a LOT of work:

1. It's very short.
2. No real dialogue.
3. No strong, explainable plot.

Just, Ugh...


RE: Life or Death (My story) - akio314 - Jun. 05, 2012

No, it wasn't a drug, I said Deja Vu because of Alice in Wondeland. It is salt mashed into a liquid, it cures zombie bites. (strange huh)


RE: Life or Death (My story) - ButterflyKnight - Jun. 05, 2012

Hmmm, like DefStamina88 said, the chapter is too short. Is almost impossible to know the story in one paragraph.

I'll send a character for you, but I need to know about the story first. Uncertain


RE: Life or Death (My story) - akio314 - Aug. 08, 2012

Please close this thread.