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Delete This - akio314 - Jun. 05, 2012 Here is my story: Chapter 1: Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide Spoiler (Click to View) I am taking characters because I don't have many characters. RE: Life or Death (My story) - DefStamina88 - Jun. 05, 2012 Okay, I believe this is illegal. No drugs and alcohol are allowed to be discussed on this site, and I think that bottle is referring to that. Also ,even if this is legal, it needs a LOT of work: 1. It's very short. 2. No real dialogue. 3. No strong, explainable plot. Just, Ugh... RE: Life or Death (My story) - akio314 - Jun. 05, 2012 No, it wasn't a drug, I said Deja Vu because of Alice in Wondeland. It is salt mashed into a liquid, it cures zombie bites. (strange huh) RE: Life or Death (My story) - ButterflyKnight - Jun. 05, 2012 Hmmm, like DefStamina88 said, the chapter is too short. Is almost impossible to know the story in one paragraph. I'll send a character for you, but I need to know about the story first. RE: Life or Death (My story) - akio314 - Aug. 08, 2012 Please close this thread. |