Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!]

Poll: What needs to be fixed?

Nothing. Its Perfect!
61.11%
11
Dialogue. It seems bland.
16.67%
3
Narration. Give more details!
22.22%
4
Narration. Give less details.
0%
0
Everything. This story stinks.
0%
0
Total: 100% 18 vote(s)
Thank you! If it wasn't for everyone's support, I would've given up due to my schedule! Thanks so much!
Chapter 13: "New Developments" is up!!! Hope you all are enjoying! I was debating whether to add characters from the MFB series, and decided it would be better to add them to offer a sort of explanation for what might have happened between MFB and MFB: Zero G. I hope you all enjoy!